建筑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Use correct plurals and verb forms, and connect ideas with a linking word. For example, say whether there are tall buildings, then explain why they are there using: 'because' or 'as'.

示例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a high-rise condo complex close to the university because it was built mainly to house students.

建议: Use a clear topic sentence and correct tense and articles. Limit to two sentences: state how often, then give a specific detail with a linking word like 'because' or 'when'. Correct plural forms and relative clauses.

示例: Sometimes I take photos of buildings, especially high-rises and low-rises. I often photograph them when the sun is in the background because the light makes the images more beautiful.

建议: Begin with a direct answer naming the building, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Use correct verb forms and clearer descriptions instead of vague phrases like 'beautiful process'.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit the Siam Scape building. I want to go because it is in Siam Square and offers many photogenic angles, so it would be great for taking pictures.

建议: Provide a direct topic sentence, then give two concise, specific reasons connected with linking words such as 'because' and 'so'. Use correct prepositions and natural phrases (e.g., 'live in a house', 'grow trees', 'raise children and dogs').

示例: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I prefer a house. I want outdoor space where I can plant trees and keep pets, so it is better for raising a family.

× There are some tall building near my home, mostly a high rise condo.

✓ There are some tall buildings near my home, mostly a high-rise condo.

The noun 'building' should be plural to match 'some' and the verb 'are'. Also 'high rise' as a compound modifier before a noun should be hyphenated: 'high-rise'. Ensure noun number agreement: use 'buildings' with 'some'.

× Medium because my house is near the university and the condo has built for student.

✓ It is medium because my house is near the university and the condo was built for students.

The clause needs a subject and verb: add 'It is' to make a complete sentence. 'has built' is incorrect passive formation; use passive 'was built'. 'student' should be plural 'students' to indicate people in general. Tense: past passive 'was built' shows when the condo was constructed. Also add 'for students' (plural).

× Sometimes I take photo of high rise or low rise with the sun on the background which make the photo more beautiful when I took it.

✓ Sometimes I take photos of high-rise or low-rise buildings with the sun in the background, which makes the photos more beautiful when I take them.

Use plural 'photos' to match general habitual action. 'High rise' and 'low rise' should be hyphenated and followed by 'buildings'. Use 'in the background' not 'on the background'. Relative clause needs subject-verb agreement: 'which makes' (singular 'which' refers to the situation) and maintain present tense 'when I take them' for habitual action rather than past 'took'. Use pronoun 'them' to refer to 'photos'.

× I would like to visit the Siam Scape building. This building located in Siam square sailing and there are a beautiful process to take photos.

✓ I would like to visit the Siam Scape building. This building is located in Siam Square, and there is a beautiful process for taking photos.

Add the verb 'is' to complete 'This building is located...'. Capitalize proper nouns 'Siam Square'. 'There are a beautiful process' is ungrammatical: use 'there is' for the singular 'process' and 'for taking photos' (gerund) is the correct prepositional phrase. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'there is a process'.

× No, I don't. I prefer live in real life or a house because I want a house with an area where I can plant some trees and raise children and raise some dogs.

✓ No, I don't. I prefer to live in real life or in a house because I want a house with an area where I can plant some trees, raise children, and keep some dogs.

Use the infinitive 'to live' after 'prefer'. Add preposition 'in' before 'a house' for clarity. Use a comma-separated list and use parallel verbs: 'plant', 'raise', and 'keep' (or 'raise') for consistency. 'Raise some dogs' is odd; 'keep some dogs' or 'raise dogs' is more natural. 'Real life' is unclear; consider providing a clearer phrase if intended. Ensure consistent verb forms and parallel structure.