食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and correct vocabulary; start with a clear topic sentence, correct pronunciation and grammar, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, say what the food is, where it comes from, and why you like it. Avoid hesitations and redundant words.

示例: My favourite food is dumplings, a popular pan-Asian dish in my country. I like them because they come in many varieties — steamed, fried or boiled — and small family-run restaurants nearby make unique fillings. For instance, I often try new dumpling flavours at weekend markets, which keeps eating them exciting.

建议: Give a direct topic sentence about your childhood preference, then add a specific example and a brief reason using linking words. Correct tense and reduce fillers. Keep to 2–3 sentences max.

示例: When I was young, I mainly liked burgers. For example, my family often ate homemade cheeseburgers on weekends because they were quick and tasty, and I enjoyed trying different toppings like cheese and pickles.

建议: Answer directly and give a specific seasonal example with linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'in summer'). Reduce hesitations and repeat only necessary information. Use correct plural/singular forms.

示例: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I prefer light salads and cold noodles, while in winter I enjoy hot soups and stews. Also, during festivals I try special seasonal dishes, which makes my diet vary through the year.

建议: Respond with a clear topic sentence stating whether it has changed, then explain briefly why, using linking words like 'because' or 'however'. Use correct grammar (past vs present) and avoid repeating fillers.

示例: Yes, it has changed. When I was a child my favourite food was burgers because they were convenient and tasty, but now I prefer dumplings because I appreciate the variety of fillings and flavours they offer.

× I like a lots of food and my favorite food is dumping which is a pan Asian food in our country.

✓ I like a lot of food and my favorite food is dumplings, which are a pan-Asian food in our country.

Use 'a lot' not 'a lots' (quantifier form) and 'dumplings' plural (the food consists of multiple pieces). Also 'which are' agrees with plural 'dumplings' and 'pan-Asian' needs a hyphen. Suggestion: use 'a lot' for uncountable/ general quantity and match verb number to noun number. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× There are lots of pension restaurant where I can try a new type of dumplings and I.

✓ There are lots of pension restaurants where I can try new types of dumplings.

Use plural 'restaurants' to agree with 'lots of'. 'New type of dumplings' should be 'new types of dumplings' or 'a new type of dumpling'. Remove the trailing 'and I' which is incomplete. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches quantifiers and complete the sentence. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× When I was younger, I like, uh, I like uh, many kinds of dishes.

✓ When I was younger, I liked many kinds of dishes.

The time frame 'When I was younger' refers to the past, so the verb should be past tense 'liked' not present 'like'. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time expression. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Uh, I am a real, uh, foodie since my childhood, uh, and uh, that time I uh, love, uh, to eat, uh, to eat burgers and when I was young, my.

✓ I have been a real foodie since my childhood, and at that time I loved to eat burgers.

Use present perfect 'have been' with 'since my childhood' to express a state from past until now. 'That time' should be 'at that time' and the action in the past should be 'loved' (past simple). Remove repetition and complete the idea. Suggestion: use 'have been' for states continuing to present and past simple for actions completed in the past. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yeah, I eat different, uh, foods at different types of the year.

✓ Yeah, I eat different foods at different times of the year.

Use 'times of the year' or 'times during the year', not 'types of the year'. 'Different times' is the correct noun phrase. Suggestion: replace 'types' with 'times' and remove unnecessary filler words. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Uh, there are lots of restaurant in our country and umm, when I have craving, I tried their new foods, uh, and uh, new dishes.

✓ There are lots of restaurants in our country, and when I have cravings, I try their new foods and dishes.

Change 'restaurant' to plural 'restaurants'. 'Have craving' should be 'have cravings' or 'have a craving'. Match tense: 'when I have' (present) should pair with present simple 'I try' not past 'I tried'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, correct noun forms, and consistent tense within the clause. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× So I eat different foods at different types of the.

✓ So I eat different foods at different times of the year.

As before, 'types of the' is incorrect; use 'times of the year'. Complete the phrase. Suggestion: use standard collocation 'times of the year' for seasonal variation. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Yeah. Uh, uh, I have a favorite food change since I were child.

✓ Yeah. My favorite food has changed since I was a child.

Use present perfect 'has changed' to describe a change that started in the past and has relevance now. 'Since I were child' is incorrect: use 'since I was a child'. Also 'have a favorite food change' is ungrammatical; use 'my favorite food has changed'. Suggestion: use 'has changed' with 'since', and use 'was' for first person singular past. Grammar problem type ID: 7

× Uh, when I, uh, was a child, my favorite food was burger.

✓ When I was a child, my favorite food was burgers.

Use plural 'burgers' to refer generally to the food type, or 'a burger' if referring to a single item. 'Was burger' is incorrect without an article or plural. Suggestion: use 'was burgers' or 'was a burger' depending on meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× But uh, now my favorite food is dumplings.

✓ But now my favorite food is dumplings.

Minor filler removal; sentence is grammatically correct aside from fillers. It correctly uses present simple 'is' for current preference. Suggestion: avoid filler 'uh' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Uh, so that's the difference between when I was child or I was adult.

✓ So that's the difference between when I was a child and when I became an adult.

Use articles: 'a child' and 'an adult'. Also use parallel structure 'when I was a child and when I became an adult' for clarity and correct conjunction 'and' instead of 'or'. Suggestion: include articles and use parallel phrasing for comparisons. Grammar problem type ID: 26