食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence ("My favourite food is chicken."), then add 1–2 specific supporting details (e.g., why you like it, when you eat it) using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and limit to 3–4 short sentences. Improve grammar (use past continuous/present perfect correctly) and correct odd phrases like "since when I was more" and "Kai FC."

示例: My favourite food is chicken because I enjoy its flavour and texture. For example, I often eat grilled chicken with my family on weekends, and we sometimes try different recipes at local restaurants. Because it is versatile and easy to cook, I choose it often.

建议: Answer directly and use past tense for childhood ("I liked"). Be specific about foods and give a concrete example. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct sentence structure (subject-verb agreement). Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid vague phrases like "the taste of me."

示例: When I was young, I liked baked goods such as cakes and bread because my mother often baked them. For example, she used to make sweet buns on Sundays, which I remember fondly.

建议: Be specific about festivals and foods, and use clear linking phrases ("For example," "During"). Correct vocabulary and names of foods if possible, and use 2–3 sentences. Provide a brief reason why these foods are eaten at those times.

示例: Yes. During special occasions I usually eat traditional festival foods. For example, at the Lunar New Year I eat sticky rice cakes, and at the Mid-Autumn Festival I eat mooncakes because these foods are part of the celebration.

建议: Answer with a clear comparison using past and present tenses. Start with a topic sentence ("Yes, it has changed."). Explain what you liked before and what you prefer now, using linking words like "but" or "now" and correct adjectives ("sweaty" is incorrect—likely "sweet" or "greasy"). Keep to 2–3 concise sentences and give a brief reason for the change.

示例: Yes, my tastes have changed. When I was a child I preferred sweet and greasy snacks, but now I prefer healthier foods like salads and grilled fish because I want to stay fit.

× My favorite food is chicken because it's very delicious and I still eat it since when I was more.

✓ My favorite food is chicken because it's very delicious and I have eaten it since I was little.

The original mixes present simple 'still eat' with 'since when I was more', which is ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'have eaten' with 'since' to indicate an action that began in the past and continues. Also change 'when I was more' to 'when I was little' for correct meaning and natural English.

× I also eat chicken out with my family or my friends all day.

✓ I also eat chicken out with my family or friends sometimes.

'All day' is unnatural here and conflicts with 'eat out' meaning. Use adverb 'sometimes' or a frequency expression. Keep present simple for habitual action. Also omit redundant 'my' before 'friends'.

× Kai FC is so relaxed and funny for me.

✓ Kai FC feels very relaxed and fun to me.

The original uses 'funny' incorrectly; 'fun' or 'funny' have different meanings. 'Relaxed' is an adjective describing atmosphere; use 'feels' to express personal impression. 'For me' is better as 'to me'.

× When I was young I like the food is pretty like the bake and flour.

✓ When I was young I liked foods that were sweet, like baked goods and pastries.

Talking about the past requires past tense 'liked' and 'were'. 'Pretty' is incorrect here; likely meant 'sweet'. 'the bake and flour' is ungrammatical; use 'baked goods and pastries' or 'cakes and pastries'.

× My mother usually make it for me and it is the taste of me.

✓ My mother usually made them for me and they were my favorite.

In past context use past tense 'made'. 'Mother' is singular so 'made' (past) is correct; original 'make' is wrong tense. 'It is the taste of me' is unidiomatic; express preference as 'they were my favorite' or 'I liked them'. Ensure pronoun and verb agree.

× Yes, at the special occasions I usually eat the festival food, like at the date I eat Bang Ching and the mid Autumn I eat very special food.

✓ Yes, on special occasions I usually eat festival foods, for example during the Dragon Boat Festival I eat zongzi, and at Mid-Autumn Festival I eat special foods.

Use 'on special occasions' (no definite article). 'Festival food' should be plural 'festival foods' or 'special festival foods'. 'At the date' is incorrect; use 'during' or name the festival. Use proper nouns for festival names and keep parallel structure. Also clarify specific foods (zongzi for Dragon Boat/Bang Ching if intended).

× Yes, it's all I was a giant I like the food is sweaty but nowadays I like food more healthy and it help me keep in the shape.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I liked sweet foods, but nowadays I prefer healthier food and it helps me stay in shape.

The original is highly ungrammatical: 'I was a giant' likely intended 'I was a child'; use past tense 'liked' for past preference. 'Sweaty' is wrong word; 'sweet' is correct. 'Like food more healthy' should be 'prefer healthier food'. 'It help me keep in the shape' needs subject-verb agreement and idiomatic phrasing: 'it helps me stay in shape'.