食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence naming the favourite food, then give one or two specific supporting details (where it comes from and why you like it). Avoid repetition and filler words. Also correct the dish name consistently and use present tense when talking about current preferences.

示例: My favourite food is a traditional Saigon dish called k
03mdom. I love it because it combines sweet and savory flavours and is commonly sold by street vendors near my home, which makes it comforting and convenient to eat.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence naming the type of food you liked as a child, then explain briefly why you liked it and add a specific example. Use simple correct grammar (past tense) and avoid vague phrases like "young food."

示例: When I was young, I liked junk food such as fried snacks and instant noodles. I enjoyed them because they tasted strong and were cheap, for example I often ate instant noodles after school with friends.

建议: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence (Yes or No), then support briefly with a reason and one specific example if possible. Use present simple for habits and avoid unclear words like "force."

示例: No, I usually eat the same types of food throughout the year because I have a fixed daily routine. For instance, I regularly eat rice, vegetables and fish for dinner regardless of the season.

建议: Start with a clear statement about whether your favourite food changed, then explain why with specific details (what changed and why). Use past tense for childhood and present perfect or present simple for current state; avoid repetition.

示例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I preferred snacks and fast food, but now I prefer vegetable-based dishes because I have learned more about nutrition and try to eat healthier.

× One of traditional food in Vietnam is Kumtom, especially in Saigon.

✓ One of the traditional foods in Vietnam is Kumtom, especially in Saigon.

Use definite article 'the' with the phrase 'one of the ...' and plural 'foods' after 'one of the' because you refer to one item from a group. Suggestion: say 'one of the traditional foods'.

× Now I live in Saigon, so I glad to say my favorite food is Kamdom.

✓ Now I live in Saigon, so I am glad to say my favorite food is Kamdom.

The verb 'be' is missing after the subject 'I'. Use 'am' for first person singular. Suggestion: include the correct form 'I am glad'.

× I lived in Vietnam.

✓ I lived in Vietnam.

This sentence is grammatically correct for describing a past residence; no change needed unless the speaker means to say they still live there, in which case use present 'I live in Vietnam'.

× Vietnam had a culture and delicious food.

✓ Vietnam has a rich culture and delicious food.

Use present tense 'has' to describe a country's ongoing attributes. Also add an adjective like 'rich' to natural collocation: 'has a rich culture'. Suggestion: use 'has' and consider adding 'rich' or 'a' for natural phrasing.

× One of traditional food in Vietnam is Kumtom, especially in Saigon.

✓ One of the traditional foods in Vietnam is Kumtom, especially in Saigon.

Repeated: 'one of the' requires plural noun 'foods' and 'the' article. (See earlier suggestion.)

× When I was young, umm, I think I'm so common with, uh, another young people.

✓ When I was young, I think I was like other young people.

Tense mismatch and incorrect pronouns. Use past tense 'was' to match 'When I was young'. 'Like other young people' is the idiomatic phrase; 'another young people' is incorrect because 'another' with plural 'people' is wrong. Suggestion: 'like other young people'.

× We, I like young food.

✓ I liked junk food.

Pronoun and word choice errors. 'We, I' is confusing; likely speaker means 'I'. 'Young food' is incorrect; probably intends 'junk food'. Use past tense 'liked' to match 'When I was young'. Suggestion: use 'I liked junk food'.

× I know it's not healthy, but uh, have a, some kind of taste.

✓ I know it's not healthy, but it has a certain taste.

Missing subject and verb: 'it has'. Use 'a certain taste' instead of 'some kind of taste' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: 'it has a certain taste' or 'it tastes good'.

× I want to so I is young food a lot.

✓ I want to say I ate junk food a lot.

This sentence is ungrammatical and confused. Likely meaning: 'I want to say I ate junk food a lot.' Use past tense 'ate' to match childhood context, and correct object 'junk food'. Suggestion: simplify to 'I ate junk food a lot.'

× What kind of food did you like when you were young?

✓ What kind of food did you like when you were young?

This question is grammatically correct; no change needed. Past auxiliary 'did' plus base verb 'like' is correct for past inquiry.

× I would like to say no I it's the same force at the different time of the year.

✓ I would like to say no; it's the same for me at different times of the year.

Pronoun and word choice errors: 'I it's' should be 'it's' or 'for me'. 'force' is incorrect; likely 'for me'. Use plural 'times' and remove extra 'the'. Suggestion: 'it's the same for me at different times of the year.'

× I don't think have something I need to change because it's just a daily habit.

✓ I don't think there is anything I need to change because it's just a daily habit.

Missing 'there is' to express existence. Use 'anything' instead of 'something' in negative sentences. Suggestion: 'I don't think there is anything I need to change.'

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

✓ Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Question from examiner is correct; no change needed.

× Of course, uh, since I was a child, I like young foods and I eat young food a lot.

✓ Of course. When I was a child, I liked junk food and I ate junk food a lot.

Tense should be past to refer to childhood: use 'liked' and 'ate'. 'Young foods' is incorrect; use 'junk food'. Suggestion: 'When I was a child, I liked junk food and ate it a lot.'

× I always ask my mom, my dad money for buy some kind of young food because now I'm grow up and I realized how important vegetable, vegetable in healthy food.

✓ I always asked my mom and dad for money to buy junk food, but now I've grown up and I realize how important vegetables are in a healthy diet.

Multiple issues: tense consistency (past 'asked'), coordinate nouns 'mom and dad', use 'for money to buy' structure, 'young food' -> 'junk food', correct present perfect 'I've grown up' or 'I have grown up', 'realize' present tense for current realization, use plural 'vegetables' and verb 'are', and phrase 'healthy diet' is natural. Suggestion: break into two clauses: past behavior and current understanding: 'I always asked my mom and dad for money to buy junk food, but now I've grown up and I realize how important vegetables are in a healthy diet.'