食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise, correct grammar, and organize your answer: state your favourite food, give 2 specific reasons with linking words, and keep within 3–4 sentences. Avoid filler words and unclear fragments.

示例: My favourite food is ice cream because it tastes delicious and comes in many different flavours. In addition, I like adding toppings such as nuts or fruit, which gives it interesting textures. Eating ice cream makes me feel relaxed and cheerful, so I often have it as a treat.

建议: Use past tense consistently, give a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Remove hesitations and repetition.

示例: When I was young, I loved eating sweets and candy. For example, I often spent my pocket money on snacks with friends after school, especially ice cream and chocolate. Those treats always made me feel happy and were a special part of my childhood.

建议: Answer directly, use correct seasonal vocabulary and smoother linking words (e.g., in winter/ in summer). Give one specific winter and one summer example and explain briefly why.

示例: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. In winter I prefer hot dishes like soup or hot pot to keep warm, while in summer I enjoy cold foods such as watermelon and ice cream because they are refreshing. Seasonal produce also influences what I cook.

建议: Give a clear direct answer (Yes/No), then explain with specific examples and contrast childhood and current habits. Use correct grammar and avoid unclear words or phrases.

示例: Not really — my taste has stayed similar since childhood because I still enjoy sweets and desserts. However, I have also started trying more spicy dishes and fast food recently because they are convenient and offer new flavours. Overall, my core preferences remain the same.

× It's not only taste is uh delicious, but it's also allow you to choose many flavor and add different toppings.

✓ Not only is it delicious, but it also allows you to choose many flavors and add different toppings.

Errors: incorrect word order ('Not only is it delicious' not 'It's not only taste is'), incorrect verb form and subject ('it also allows' not 'it's also allow'), and plural noun ('flavors' not 'flavor'). Suggestion: Use correct cleft structure for 'not only' and ensure subject-verb agreement and pluralization: 'Not only is it delicious, but it also allows you to choose many flavors and add different toppings.'

× Like eating ice cream always make me feel happy and relaxed and cheese small and I enjoy to try the new flavor with the new topping like.

✓ Eating ice cream always makes me feel happy and relaxed, and I enjoy trying new flavors with different toppings.

Errors: missing -s for third person singular ('makes'), incorrect use of 'to try' after 'enjoy' (use gerund 'trying'), plural nouns ('flavors', 'toppings'), and unclear phrase 'cheese small' removed. Suggestion: Use gerund after 'enjoy' and ensure subject-verb agreement: 'Eating ice cream always makes me feel happy and relaxed, and I enjoy trying new flavors with different toppings.'

× When I were young, I love eating sweetie and, uh, candy.

✓ When I was young, I loved eating sweets and candy.

Errors: wrong past-tense form of 'be' ('was' not 'were' for singular I), verb tense mismatch ('loved' fits past reference), and noun form ('sweets' instead of 'sweetie'). Suggestion: Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood: 'When I was young, I loved eating sweets and candy.'

× My parents gave me the pocket money so I used to it to buy my snack with my friend after school because it stayed great and it's were tip and like try to ice cream after school.

✓ My parents gave me pocket money, so I used it to buy snacks with my friends after school because it tasted great and I liked to buy ice cream after school.

Errors: unnecessary article ('the pocket money' -> 'pocket money'), incorrect 'used to it' should be 'used it', plural 'friends', wrong verb forms ('tasted' past tense, not 'stayed great' or 'it's were tip'), and awkward phrase 'like try to ice cream' corrected to 'liked to buy ice cream'. Suggestion: Keep pronouns and verbs consistent and use correct past tense and plural forms: 'My parents gave me pocket money, so I used it to buy snacks with my friends after school because it tasted great and I liked to buy ice cream after school.'

× Also it's make me feel happy.

✓ Also, it makes me feel happy.

Error: subject-verb agreement in present tense ('it makes' not 'it's make'). Suggestion: For present simple with singular subject use verb+s: 'Also, it makes me feel happy.'

× I used to eat different food depend on the season, uh, the window.

✓ I eat different foods depending on the season.

Errors: tense and modal misuse ('used to' implies past; question asks generally so present simple 'eat' is better), noun plural ('foods'), incorrect preposition/form ('depending on' not 'depend on the'), and unclear word 'the window' removed. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions and correct form 'depending on the season.'

× I prefer to hot meat so that soup or hot pot to keep warm.

✓ I prefer hot meals such as soup or hot pot to keep warm.

Errors: incorrect infinitive use ('prefer to hot meat' should be 'prefer hot meals'), word choice ('meat' -> 'meals'), and awkward structure. Suggestion: Use correct nouns and examples: 'I prefer hot meals such as soup or hot pot to keep warm.'

× And while the summer I enjoy to cold dizzy or the like city or like, uh, seasonal food like watermelon and ice cream to feel like refresh.

✓ And in the summer I enjoy cold drinks and seasonal foods like watermelon and ice cream to feel refreshed.

Errors: preposition ('in the summer' not 'while the summer'), incorrect verb patterns ('enjoy cold drinks' not 'enjoy to cold dizzy'), word choice ('drinks' not 'dizzy' or 'city'), plural 'foods', and adjective form 'refreshed' not 'refresh'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions, nouns and adjective forms: 'In the summer I enjoy cold drinks and seasonal foods like watermelon and ice cream to feel refreshed.'

× Not really my favorite food status haven't changed much I when I was a kid.

✓ Not really; my favorite foods haven't changed much since I was a kid.

Errors: word order and punctuation, wrong noun ('status' unnecessary), subject-verb agreement with present perfect ('haven't changed' should match plural 'foods'), and time expression ('since I was a kid'). Suggestion: Use present perfect for changes up to now and correct word order: 'My favorite foods haven't changed much since I was a kid.'

× I love sweat, less sweat and snack and dessert and I still enjoy it now.

✓ I love sweet things, snacks and desserts, and I still enjoy them now.

Errors: incorrect word 'sweat' -> 'sweet' (adjective) and need noun 'things' or use 'sweets', plural agreement ('snacks and desserts'), and pronoun agreement ('them' not 'it'). Suggestion: Use correct nouns and plural pronouns: 'I love sweet things, snacks and desserts, and I still enjoy them now.'

× However, I also try to more like spine disease and fast food because it's convenient and give me new flavor.

✓ However, I also tend to try more spicy dishes and fast food because they're convenient and give me new flavors.

Errors: word choice ('try to more like spine disease' unclear; corrected to 'tend to try more spicy dishes'), plural agreement ('dishes', 'flavors'), pronoun/verb agreement ('they're convenient' not 'it's convenient'), and verb form 'give' should match plural subject. Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary and agreement: 'I also tend to try more spicy dishes and fast food because they're convenient and give me new flavors.'