食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more grammatical, concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence naming the food, give one or two specific details (what it is, why you like it), and use linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'My favourite food is...,' 'It is a Korean traditional dish,' 'When I feel stressed, eating spicy food helps me relax'). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

示例: My favourite food is dak-galbi, a spicy Korean stir-fried chicken. It is a traditional Korean dish with vegetables and a chilli-based sauce, and I especially like it because the strong flavours help me relax when I’m stressed.

建议: Answer directly and complete thoughts. Use a clear topic sentence about preferences in childhood, then give specific examples and a brief comparison to now using linking words (e.g., 'When I was a child, I liked...; however, now...'). Fix tense and sentence fragments.

示例: When I was young, I preferred sweet foods. For example, I often ate chocolates and candies, but now I rarely eat sweets because I prefer savoury and spicy dishes.

建议: Be specific and coherent: state clearly whether your diet changes seasonally, give one or two concrete examples and explain why, using linking words. Avoid hesitation fillers and contradictory sentences. Use correct phrases (e.g., 'In summer I like to eat... because...').

示例: Yes, I do. In summer I often eat kong-guksu (cold soybean noodle soup) and fresh beans because they are light and refreshing in hot weather.

建议: Give a clear direct answer (yes/no) followed by a brief explanation and specific examples. Use linking words to show contrast (e.g., 'However' or 'but') and correct tense. Avoid unclear phrases and keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. As a child I loved sweets like chocolate and jelly, but now I prefer spicy Korean dishes such as maen-tang and dak-galbi because I enjoy bolder flavours.

× I have a lot of favorite food but I choose one is Takuki.

✓ I have a lot of favorite foods, but the one I choose is Takuki.

The sentence has multiple structure issues: countable noun 'food' should be plural when referring to many items ('favorite foods'), and the clause 'I choose one is Takuki' is ungrammatical. Reordering to 'the one I choose is Takuki' creates a clear noun phrase with a relative clause. Suggestion: use plural for countable nouns and form a relative clause for selection.

× Takuki is Korean traditional food that has spicy taste.

✓ Takuki is a traditional Korean dish that has a spicy taste.

Word order and article are incorrect: adjectives that modify a noun's origin ('Korean') typically precede the noun, and 'traditional' should follow 'a' as 'a traditional Korean dish'. 'Food' is vague; 'dish' is more natural. Also add article 'a' and the adjective 'spicy' needs 'a' before 'spicy taste' or use 'is spicy'. Suggestion: use 'a traditional Korean dish' or 'a spicy traditional Korean dish'.

× When I means stressed feeling, I lose my stress to eat some spicy food.

✓ When I feel stressed, I relieve my stress by eating spicy food.

'When I means stressed feeling' is incorrect pronoun/verb usage; use 'I feel stressed'. 'Lose my stress' is not natural—'relieve my stress' or 'reduce my stress' is correct. Use gerund phrase 'by eating' to show cause/method. Suggestion: use 'When I feel stressed, I relieve my stress by eating spicy food.'

× I think I like sweet things more than now.

✓ I think I liked sweet things more when I was younger.

Tense mismatch: the question asked about childhood, so use past tense 'liked' and phrase 'when I was younger' or 'when I was a child' rather than 'more than now'. Suggestion: match past tense when referring to past preferences.

× When I was a child. I like to eat chocolates and candies.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to eat chocolates and candies.

Fragmentation: 'When I was a child.' is a sentence fragment and should connect to the main clause. Also maintain past tense 'liked' for habitual actions in the past. Suggestion: combine into one sentence and use past tense.

× Well, now I don't really like that kinds of food.

✓ Well, now I don't really like those kinds of food.

'That kinds' is incorrect: use plural demonstrative 'those' with plural 'kinds'. Alternatively say 'that kind of food' for singular. Suggestion: match demonstrative to plural noun: 'those kinds of food' or better 'those kinds of foods' or 'those kinds of sweets.'

× So in my childhood I had a.

✓ So in my childhood I had them.

Sentence is incomplete: 'had a.' is truncated. Likely intended 'had them' referring to sweets. Complete the pronoun and use past tense 'had'. Suggestion: ensure sentences are complete and pronouns refer clearly.

× Yes, especially it is in summer umm in summer I must eat bean noodles and beans.

✓ Yes, especially in summer. I must eat bean noodles and beans in summer.

Redundant and awkward pronoun 'it is in summer' is unnecessary. 'Must' is acceptable for strong preference/habit but position of time phrase should be natural. Suggestion: place time expressions at beginning or end and avoid redundancy.

× It is one of my favorite food in summer umm I don't eat them.

✓ They are one of my favorite foods in summer, but recently I haven't been eating them.

Agreement and article issues: 'one of my favorite food' should be 'one of my favorite foods' and 'it' vs 'they' must agree with plural 'bean noodles and beans' so use 'they'. Also contradiction 'I don't eat them' likely means currently not eating them; express with present perfect continuous/negative. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent number.

× Summer is not start spur me.

✓ Summer doesn't motivate me anymore.

This sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Summer is not start spur me' seems to attempt 'Summer doesn't spur me on' or 'Summer doesn't excite me'. Use natural English: 'doesn't motivate me' or 'doesn't excite me'. Suggestion: choose an appropriate verb ('motivate', 'excite') and use correct negative form 'doesn't'.

× Umm, as I mentioned, I like the candy, Jelly or chocolate is my favorite food when I was a child, but I like the spicy food like Mana Tang Takuki not in now.

✓ Umm, as I mentioned, candy, jelly, or chocolate were my favorite foods when I was a child, but now I prefer spicy dishes like Ma-na-tang and Takuki.

Multiple issues: article misuse and list punctuation—no 'the' before general items; use plural 'were my favorite foods' for past; 'not in now' is incorrect order—use 'now' and change verb to present 'prefer'. Also correct names/formatting of dishes. Suggestion: use parallel list structure, correct past tense for past preferences, and 'prefer' for current preference.

× So I can eat them.

✓ So I can still eat them.

Missing nuance: likely means 'I can still eat spicy foods'—add 'still' to indicate continuity. Also specify reference 'them' clearly if context requires. Suggestion: use 'still' to indicate ability continues and reference plural foods clearly.