食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Clarify vocabulary and correct grammar, be concise and relevant. State the main idea clearly (favourite cuisine, not “fruit”), then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and keep to 2–4 sentences.

示例: My favourite food is Sichuan cuisine because I enjoy spicy flavours. For example, I love hot pot and spicy noodles, which make me feel excited and even make me sweat in summer, a feeling I find enjoyable.

建议: Use past tense consistently and give one clear example. Start with a topic sentence about past preference, then explain briefly why and give a concrete example. Avoid vague phrases like “quiz cuisine”.

示例: When I was young, I preferred sweet foods. For example, I often chose candies and chocolate because I liked the sugary taste and they were treats after school.

建议: Organise answer with a clear topic sentence and contrast seasonal reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (subject–verb agreement) and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide one specific example of a seasonal dish.

示例: Not really — I usually eat spicy food all year round, but for different reasons. In summer I enjoy spicy hot pot because it makes me sweat and feel refreshed, while in winter I prefer spicy soups because they warm me up.

建议: Answer directly, use past vs present contrast with clear linking words (e.g., “but now”). Explain reason concisely and clearly, avoid filler words. Correct grammar and give one specific example of how the change affects you.

示例: Yes, my tastes have changed. As a child I loved sweets like candy and chocolate, but now I prefer spicy dishes such as Sichuan hot pot because the strong flavours help me relax when I feel stressed.

× My favorite fruit is the dishes from Sichuan.

✓ My favorite food is dishes from Sichuan.

The student used 'fruit' which is incorrect meaning; this is a word choice error (adjective/noun usage). Replace 'fruit' with 'food' to match context. Also remove 'the' before plural 'dishes' when speaking generally: say 'dishes from Sichuan.'

× It is because that I like spicy food.

✓ It is because I like spicy food.

The phrase 'because that' is ungrammatical in English. Use 'because' alone to introduce a reason. Alternatively use 'because of' with a noun phrase: 'Because of my liking for spicy food.'

× Putting chillies inside the dishes makes me feel more exciting and also I enjoy the feeling of sweating, especially in summer.

✓ Putting chillies in the dishes makes me more excited, and I also enjoy sweating, especially in summer.

'Makes me feel more exciting' wrongly uses an adjective that describes something causing excitement; the correct experiencer form is 'makes me more excited.' 'Enjoy the feeling of sweating' is awkward; use 'enjoy sweating.' Also use 'in' rather than 'inside' for collocation with dishes.

× For example, like hot pot, spicy noodle.

✓ For example, hot pot and spicy noodles.

Fragment: 'For example, like' is redundant and 'spicy noodle' should be plural 'spicy noodles.' Combine into a noun phrase list: 'For example, hot pot and spicy noodles.'

× By comparing with now, it's a quite big changes from my primary school till now.

✓ Compared with now, there have been quite big changes since primary school.

Use 'Compared with' or 'Compared to' to start the comparison. 'It's a quite big changes' has number agreement and article issues; use 'there have been quite big changes.' Use 'since primary school' rather than 'from my primary school till now.'

× Now I like spicy food but when I was young I prefer sweet food.

✓ Now I like spicy food, but when I was young I preferred sweet food.

Tense inconsistency: 'when I was young' requires past tense 'preferred' not present 'prefer.' Keep 'Now I like' in present and past for childhood.

× The quiz cuisine with sweet flavour is my best choice for example.

✓ For example, sweet-flavored dishes were my favorite.

'The quiz cuisine' is unclear and ungrammatical. Rephrase to 'sweet-flavored dishes' and place 'for example' at the start or end. Use past tense 'were my favorite' when referring to childhood preferences.

× Like candy.

✓ Like candy.

This fragment is acceptable as a short spoken example, but as a full sentence use 'For example, candy.' The original fragment is incomplete; include it with previous sentence for clarity.

× As my answer in question one, I like spicy food so whenever it's summer or winter, spicy food is always the first priority.

✓ As I answered in question one, I like spicy food, so whether it's summer or winter, spicy food is always my first choice.

Use 'As I answered' (past participle usage) or 'As I said' to refer to a previous answer. 'Whenever' is acceptable, but 'whether' is better for contrast. 'First priority' is awkward; use 'first choice.'

× In summer I enjoy the feeling of sweating but in winter it make me feel more hot or more warm.

✓ In summer I enjoy sweating, but in winter it makes me feel hotter.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it make' should be 'it makes.' 'Feel more hot or more warm' is awkward; use comparative 'hotter.' Use 'sweating' rather than 'the feeling of sweating' for conciseness.

× Yes, as talked before when I was a child I liked sweet food, Candy, chocolates is always the best for children.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned before, when I was a child I liked sweet food. Candy and chocolates were always the best for children.

'As talked before' is incorrect; use 'as I mentioned before.' Run-on sentence: split into two. 'Candy, chocolates is' has subject-verb agreement; use plural verb 'were.' Use past tense 'were' when talking about the past.

× But for me now I think spicy food is the best.

✓ But now for me, I think spicy food is the best.

Minor word order: place 'now' near the start and add commas for clarity. Tense 'think' and 'is' are fine.

× Umm maybe I feel more stress when I walk when I grew up and spicy food can release stress.

✓ Maybe I feel more stressed as I grew up and spicy food can relieve stress.

'Feel more stress' should be 'feel more stressed' (adjective). 'When I walk when I grew up' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely meant 'as I grew up.' Use 'relieve stress' instead of 'release stress.' Also remove filler 'Umm.'