食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tự nhiên. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (số nhiều, tính từ không phù hợp) và những cụm từ vô nghĩa như “my bread is jumping”. Nên có một câu chủ đề, rồi một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại bánh, cách bạn ăn, lý do thích). Giữ độ dài không quá 5 câu và dùng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

示例: My favourite food is bread, especially sourdough. I usually eat it for breakfast with butter or avocado, because I like its crusty texture and tangy flavor. Sometimes I buy fresh loaves from a local bakery on weekends.

建议: Cần dùng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ “fat food” không tự nhiên — nên nói “fried food” hoặc “high-fat foods”), trình bày rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết cụ thể về món ăn bạn thích, vì sao bạn thích, và thay đổi nếu có. Tránh câu thiếu nghĩa và lỗi cấu trúc như “prefer rich food that would.”

示例: When I was young I loved fried foods, particularly crispy fried chicken. I often ate them as treats after school, but my mother usually cooked healthier meals like salad, fish, rice and noodle soup. Looking back, I think I preferred tasty treats then, although I now choose healthier options.

建议: Câu trả lời không trả lời câu hỏi, thiếu cấu trúc và ý cụ thể. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No và lý do), rồi nêu ví dụ mùa xuân/hè/đông về món ăn khác nhau, sử dụng liên từ để nối ý. Tránh thông tin không liên quan như “I sell food with my families” trừ khi nó liên quan trực tiếp.

示例: Yes, I do. In winter I prefer hot soups and stews to stay warm, while in summer I eat more salads and fruit because they are refreshing. For example, during the holidays my family makes a special fish stew that we only have in December.

建议: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần tổ chức mạch lạc hơn. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề xác nhận thay đổi, nêu cụ thể món trước và bây giờ, sau đó giải thích lý do. Dùng từ vựng chính xác (vegetables, home-cooked meals) và tránh lặp từ.

示例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. I used to love fast food like burgers and fries, but now I prefer healthier options such as vegetables, grilled fish and home-cooked meals because they make me feel better and support my long-term health.

× My favorite food is bread.

✓ My favorite food is bread.

No correction needed; sentence is correct. Bread as an uncountable noun does not require an article here.

× I usually eat breads.

✓ I usually eat bread.

'Bread' is an uncountable noun in English and is not normally pluralized. Use the singular uncountable form 'bread' or a quantifier such as 'loaves of bread' if specifying countable units.

× My bread is jumping and delicious.

✓ My bread is fresh and delicious.

'Jumping' is incorrect in this context; likely a mistranslation. Use an appropriate adjective like 'fresh'. Also ensure adjective choice matches meaning: 'fresh and delicious'.

× When I was growing up I was a big fan of fat food, especially bizarre and fresh chicken.

✓ When I was growing up I was a big fan of fatty food, especially fried and fresh chicken.

'Fat food' is not idiomatic; use 'fatty food' or 'junk food' depending on meaning. 'Bizarre' is incorrect here; probably 'fried' or 'barbecued' fits. Maintain past tense 'was'.

× I would love to make decision that my mother cooked salad, fish, rice and noodles soup.

✓ I would love it if my mother cooked salad, fish, rice and noodle soup.

Unnatural structure 'make decision that'. Use 'I would love it if' to express a wish. Use 'noodle soup' (singular) or 'noodle soups'.

× Looking back, I think I prefer rich food that would.

✓ Looking back, I think I preferred rich food.

Tense inconsistency: 'Looking back' refers to past preference, so use past 'preferred'. The trailing 'that would' is incomplete and should be removed.

× Do you eat different food? Enthusiasm.

✓ Do you eat different foods at different times of the year? I'm enthusiastic about the question.

The original appears as broken fragments. The student should respond to the examiner's question; include the full question or answer. 'Enthusiasm' alone is not a sentence; use 'I'm enthusiastic' if describing feeling.

× I easily eat food everyday.

✓ I eat food easily every day.

Word order: adverb placement should be 'eat ... every day' and 'every day' is two words. However 'eat food easily' is odd; better to say 'I eat every day' or 'I easily find food every day'.

× I sell food with my families to connect with families.

✓ I sell food with my family to connect with other families.

Use singular 'family' for your household. 'With my families' is incorrect. Clarify intent: 'to connect with other families' makes meaning clear.

× Yes it has when I was a child.

✓ Yes, it has since I was a child.

Tense and connector misuse: 'has' with 'when I was a child' is inconsistent. Use 'has since I was a child' to indicate change from that time to now, or 'Yes, it did when I was a child.'

× I love fast food as well.

✓ I love fast food as well.

No correction needed; 'fast food' is uncountable and correctly used.

× I prefer healthy foods such as vegetable, fish and home cooked meals because they are better for my health.

✓ I prefer healthy foods such as vegetables, fish and home-cooked meals because they are better for my health.

Plural forms: 'vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables' when listing types of food. 'Home cooked' should be hyphenated as 'home-cooked' when used as an adjective. 'Fish' can remain singular as a food category.