食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, mạch lạc và ngắn gọn (1-3 câu). Tránh lặp từ và ngữ pháp sai. Nói rõ món ăn yêu thích cụ thể (ví dụ: salad, grilled chicken) và lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ (because, so) để nối ý. Chú ý thì động từ và trật tự từ (I like + noun/verb-ing).

示例: My favourite food is salads, especially mixed vegetable salads, because they are healthy and help me stay fit. I try to eat them often so I can maintain good health.

建议: Cần nêu rõ món cụ thể mà bạn thích khi nhỏ và giải thích tại sao với chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh dùng từ sai nghĩa (‘password’). Dùng cấu trúc quá khứ đơn khi nói về quá khứ (I liked...). Thêm liên từ để nối giải thích (because, so, when).

示例: When I was young, I liked eating fried noodles because they were tasty and easy to find at school. I often had them after class, so they became a familiar comfort food.

建议: Câu trả lời đã có ý đúng nhưng cần rõ ràng hơn và ngữ pháp chính xác. Trả lời trực tiếp rồi mở rộng bằng 1-2 câu cụ thể, dùng linking words (in summer, in winter, because) và sửa cấu trúc (I like ice cream; I like to eat soup). Thêm lý do cụ thể về cảm giác hoặc lợi ích.

示例: Yes. In summer I like eating ice cream because it cools me down, while in winter I prefer hot soups because they keep me warm and comfortable.

建议: Cần trả lời rõ ràng có hay không thay đổi, sau đó giải thích thế nào. Dùng thì hiện tại hoàn thành để nói về sự thay đổi (My favourite food has changed) hoặc quá khứ đơn so sánh. Tránh lặp và sửa ngữ pháp (I like to eat healthy food because it will...). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về loại thực phẩm mới và lý do thực tế.

示例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I liked sweets and fast food, but now I prefer healthy dishes like grilled fish and vegetables because they help me stay healthy and have more energy.

× Advertising I like more are healthy food is can make is can make my health is better for the future us.

✓ I prefer healthy food because it can improve our health in the future.

The original sentence has multiple structure and verb errors (run-on fragments, incorrect auxiliaries, and misplaced subjects). Use a simple subject-verb-object structure: 'I prefer healthy food because it can improve our health in the future.' This fixes word order, removes redundant words, uses the correct verb 'prefer' for liking, and matches singular/plural and modal use.

× I think when I was young I like password because it's very umm, popular in my life and best feeling as.

✓ I think when I was young I liked it because it was very popular in my life and made me feel good.

The context refers to the past ('when I was young'), so use past tense 'liked' and 'was'. Also 'password' seems wrong; replace with 'it' or the specific food. 'Best feeling as' is ungrammatical; use 'made me feel good' to express emotion.

× Yes, I think. I think in the summer I like it ice cream and winter I like eat soup because it's make me. It's very comfortable.

✓ Yes. In the summer I like ice cream, and in winter I like to eat soup because it makes me feel comfortable.

Use infinitive 'to eat' after 'like' when specifying an action, or simply 'I like ice cream' for a noun. 'It's make me' is incorrect; use 'it makes me' for subject-verb agreement. Add 'feel' after 'comfortable' to convey emotion clearly.

× Yes, I have, I have things when I grow up. I am I like, uh, I like eat umm, healthy food because it's make my health is better in the future.

✓ Yes, my preferences have changed as I grew up. Now I like to eat healthy food because it will improve my health in the future.

Use present perfect or past simple to indicate change over time: 'have changed' or 'have changed as I grew up.' 'I have things when I grow up' is ungrammatical. Use 'Now I like to eat healthy food' and 'will improve' or 'can improve' to indicate future benefit. Also fix subject-verb agreement: 'it will improve my health.'