食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Уменьшите количество слов-паразитов («uh», «and one more important thing is»), исправьте грамматические ошибки и свяжите мысли плавно. Дайте ясное топик‑предложение, затем 1–2 конкретные причины с примерами и завершите кратким итогом. Обратите внимание на правильные формы глаголов и порядок слов (например, «I like combining ingredients and mixing flavors», «if you have no time or are too busy, you can always order it»).

示例: My favourite food is pizza. I like it because I can combine different ingredients and mix flavours to suit my taste. For example, I often add vegetables and spicy sausage to create a balanced meal. Also, it’s convenient when I’m busy because I can order it quickly.

建议: Используйте правильные временные формы и уменьшите повторения. Начните с чёткого утверждения в прошедшем времени, затем объясните причину и приведите конкретный пример. Избегайте повторов («near my, near the border») и слов-паразитов.

示例: When I was young, I preferred local traditional dishes and Chinese food. Because my hometown was near the border, Chinese restaurants and ingredients were common. For example, we often ate stir-fried noodles and dumplings at family gatherings.

建议: Сформулируйте ответ более структурированно: начните с общего утверждения, затем объясните причину и завершите выводом. Уберите «uh» и говорите плавно. Используйте слова-связки («however», «because», «so») правильно.

示例: Yes, I used to eat different foods according to the seasons when I lived in my home country. For example, I enjoyed hot soups in winter and fresh fruits in summer. However, now I live on a tropical island where the weather is constant, so my diet stays largely the same throughout the year.

建议: Используйте правильные времена (Present Perfect или Present Simple) и точную лексику. Избегайте некорректных выражений («herbal carbonates» не имеет смысла). Дайте ясную причину и конкретный пример того, как вы изменили выбор пищи. Старайтесь быть краткими — 2–4 предложения.

示例: Yes, my preferences have changed since childhood. Now I prefer healthy foods and choose products with good nutritional value. For example, I eat more vegetables and whole grains instead of sugary snacks.

× Also I like uh, combine ingredients and mixed flavors.

✓ Also I like combining ingredients and mixing flavors.

The verbs following 'like' should be in the -ing form to show general preference. Use 'combining' and 'mixing' to form gerunds that act as noun phrases. Suggestion: practice creating sentences with 'like' + verb-ing to express habits or preferences.

× And one more important thing is it's if you have no time or you are too busy, you always can order it.

✓ And one more important thing is that if you have no time or you are too busy, you can always order it.

The sentence has incorrect word order and a missing conjunction 'that' to introduce the clause. Place 'that' after 'is' and move 'always' before the main verb 'order' for correct adverb placement. Suggestion: use 'is that' + clause and place adverbs like 'always' before the main verb in simple tenses.

× When I was young, I prefer to eat uh, local traditional food and also Chinese food because my native town was located near my uh, near the border.

✓ When I was young, I preferred to eat local traditional food and also Chinese food because my hometown was located near the border.

The time phrase 'When I was young' requires past tense 'preferred' not present 'prefer'. 'Native town' is unnatural; use 'hometown'. Removed redundant phrase 'near my uh, near the border'. Suggestion: match verb tense to time expressions and use natural collocations like 'hometown'.

× That's why Chinese food was very popular in my earliest years.

✓ That's why Chinese food was very popular in my early years.

Use 'early years' instead of 'earliest years' for natural expression. The past tense 'was' is correct here; only word choice needed. Suggestion: prefer common collocations like 'early years'.

× It used to when I, uh, lived in my own country, uh, I had seasonal preferences, but now I'm, I live in a tropical island and all the time I have similar weather.

✓ It used to when I lived in my own country; I had seasonal preferences, but now I live on a tropical island and the weather is similar all year round.

'Used to' requires past structure and simple past 'lived' is correct. 'I live in a tropical island' should be 'on a tropical island' (preposition error) and 'all the time I have similar weather' is awkward — use 'the weather is similar all year round'. Suggestions: use 'used to' + base verb for past habits and 'on an island' preposition; express ongoing states with 'is' + time phrase.

× So my food, uh, behavior almost the same.

✓ So my food habits are almost the same.

'Food behavior' is unnatural; use 'food habits'. The sentence lacks a verb; include 'are'. 'Almost the same' needs 'are' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: use 'habits' for routine actions and ensure subject-verb presence.

× My food behavior had totally changed since I was a child because now I'm adult and I prefer to eat healthy food and I always choose healthy products, always pay attention to nutrients and herbal carbonates.

✓ My eating habits have totally changed since I was a child because now I'm an adult and I prefer to eat healthy food; I always choose healthy products and pay attention to nutrients and carbohydrates.

Use present perfect 'have changed' for a change that started in the past and continues to present, not past perfect 'had changed'. 'I'm adult' needs article 'an adult'. 'Food behavior' is unnatural — use 'eating habits'. 'Herbal carbonates' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'carbohydrates'. Also join clauses with appropriate connectors and punctuation. Suggestion: use present perfect for life changes, correct articles, and use standard food vocabulary like 'carbohydrates'.