食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 発音や文法の誤りを直し、答えを簡潔にまとめる練習をしてください。具体的には、主語と動詞の一致（"sweetness make" → "sweetness makes" や時制の一致）を確認し、不要な繰り返しを避けて一文で明確に述べ、その後で短い補足を加えると自然になります。語彙は"relaxed"や"cheerful"の使い方は良いので、理由を示す際は具体的な場面を一つだけ挙げてつなぎ語（e.g., "because", "so"）を使って流れを滑らかにしてください。

示例: My favourite food is chocolate because its sweetness helps me relax. For example, I often have a small piece after a stressful lesson, which always cheers me up.

建议: 文法と語彙の選択を改善してください。例えば複数形・冠詞の使い方（"Japanese cuisines" より "Japanese food" や具体的な料理名に冠詞を付ける）や不自然な表現（"sushi ball" は通常 "sushi" や "rice ball (onigiri)"）を修正すると自然です。主題文を明確にしてから具体例を列挙し、接続詞（"because", "so"）でつなぐと論理的になります。

示例: I liked Japanese food when I was young because my parents loved it. For example, we often ate sushi, beef bowls and tempura, so I grew up enjoying those flavours.

建议: 時制や前置詞・冠詞の使い方、比較表現を直してください（"in January"、"peaches" の小文字、"more sweeter" は誤り）。また、季節の例は一つに絞り、具体的な理由を明確に述べる練習をしてください。接続詞（"for example", "because"）の使い方は良いので、文を簡潔にして正確な語順に注意しましょう。

示例: Yes, I do. I eat seasonal fruits throughout the year. For example, I usually eat strawberries in January and peaches in April because peaches are sweeter and juicier then.

建议: 多くの文法ミスと不完全な文があります。まず語彙（"enverted" は誤り）、時制（現在完了や過去形）、主語と動詞の一致を直す必要があります。また、最後の文が途中で終わっているので必ず理由や具体例で締めてください。構造は：主題文（変わったかどうか）、短い説明、具体例、理由、の順で最大5文以内にまとめましょう。

示例: Yes, my tastes have changed since childhood. I used to prefer mild, salty dishes, but as I grew up I started to enjoy spicier food. For instance, I now like Thai food because its bold flavours and spices are exciting to me.

× My favorite food is definitely chocolate because it's sweetness make me feel relaxed.

✓ My favorite food is definitely chocolate because its sweetness makes me feel relaxed.

The possessive pronoun 'its' is required instead of 'it's' (it is). 'Sweetness' is a noun and needs a singular verb 'makes' to agree with the singular noun. Use 'its' for possession and ensure subject-verb agreement: 'its sweetness makes'. Suggestion: Replace 'it's' with 'its' and change 'make' to 'makes'.

× When I'm stressed especially, I really like to grab a little bit of chocolate after a lesson which made me feel cheerful.

✓ When I'm stressed, especially, I really like to grab a little bit of chocolate after a lesson, which makes me feel cheerful.

The relative clause refers to a habitual present action, so present tense 'makes' (not past 'made') is needed. Also place commas around 'especially' and before 'which' to separate clauses. Suggestion: Use present tense for habitual actions and correct punctuation.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? I really enjoyed Japanese food when I was young because my parents were obsessed with Japanese cuisines such as Japanese sushi ball, beef bowl and also tempura bowl and that made me have the same taste of them.

✓ I really enjoyed Japanese food when I was young because my parents were obsessed with Japanese cuisine, such as sushi balls, beef bowls, and tempura bowls, and that made me develop the same taste.

Use the uncountable noun 'cuisine' rather than plural 'cuisines' here. The food items should be pluralized correctly and more natural: 'sushi balls, beef bowls, and tempura bowls.' 'Made me have the same taste of them' is awkward; use 'made me develop the same taste' or 'gave me the same taste.' Suggestion: Use 'cuisine' for the category and correct plural forms and phrasing for clarity.

× Yes I do. I eat seasonal fruits in different time of my year.

✓ Yes, I do. I eat seasonal fruits at different times of the year.

Use the preposition 'at' with 'different times' and plural 'times' for multiple occasions. Also use the article 'the' before 'year.' Suggestion: 'at different times of the year' is the natural idiom.

× For example, I eat strawberry when January and Peaches in April because Peaches are more sweeter than strawberry in April.

✓ For example, I eat strawberries in January and peaches in April because peaches are sweeter than strawberries in April.

Use plural countable nouns 'strawberries' and 'peaches' when speaking generally. Months use preposition 'in' and no article: 'in January.' 'More sweeter' is redundant; use 'sweeter.' Maintain consistent capitalization (peaches not capitalized). Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general habits and avoid double comparatives.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? Yes, I have enverted my food taste after I become an adult.

✓ Yes, my food tastes have changed since I became an adult.

The verbs are incorrect: 'enverted' is not an English word and 'after I become an adult' mixes tenses. Use present perfect or simple past for change since childhood: 'my food tastes have changed since I became an adult' or 'since I became an adult.' Also 'food tastes' or 'taste in food' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'became' for past event and 'have changed' or 'changed' for result.

× When I was young, I prefer bland and salty cuisine.

✓ When I was young, I preferred bland and salty food.

The time phrase 'When I was young' sets the context in the past, so use past tense 'preferred' rather than present 'prefer.' 'Cuisine' is acceptable but 'food' is more natural here; adjust plurality as needed. Suggestion: Match verb tense to time reference.

× However, as I grown up, I enjoy spicy dishes more such as Thai cuisines because Thai cuisines make me.

✓ However, as I have grown up, I enjoy spicy dishes more, such as Thai cuisine, because Thai food suits me.

Use the present perfect 'have grown up' for change over time. 'Thai cuisines' is awkward; 'Thai cuisine' or 'Thai food' is better. The clause 'because Thai cuisines make me' is incomplete; use 'suit me' or 'make me happy.' Suggestion: Use complete verb phrases and correct noun forms; ensure sentence completion.