走路— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a clear, grammatical topic sentence and then one or two concise supporting details. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Add linking phrase for fluency.

示例: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk to and from my company on weekdays, and I often stroll around the company area on weekends to relax and get some exercise.

建议: Start with a direct past-tense statement, use correct past verbs, and give one specific detail (where or who). Keep it short and coherent with a linking word if needed.

示例: Yes, I often walked outside as a child. My mother taught me to walk around the playground and the nearby park every day to keep me active.

建议: Provide a clear opinion sentence and then one or two specific reasons using appropriate linking words. Use correct noun/adjective forms (relaxing, relaxation).

示例: People like walking in parks because they are relaxing and peaceful. Also, parks are good places to meet friends and enjoy fresh air.

建议: Answer the hypothetical directly with a conditional sentence, use correct tense and coherent details (distance, route, why). Avoid fragments and repetition.

示例: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk from my house into the city, a route of about ten kilometres, because I enjoy exploring urban streets and cafés along the way.

建议: Use simple past or present perfect consistently for recent activities, make one clear statement and add a specific detail (what you saw or did). Link sentences smoothly.

示例: Recently I walked to the supermarket near my home to buy groceries. At the weekend I went to the mall to look at new products and shop for clothes.

× Yes, everyday I'm going to my company is always working and during holiday, during weekend I am always walking around my company. That's why everyday is.

✓ Yes, every day I go to my company and I am always working. During holidays and on weekends I always walk around near my company. That's why I walk every day.

Errors: 'everyday' used as adjective rather than adverb (should be two words 'every day'); tense and verb forms incorrect ('I'm going' and 'is always working' wrong for habitual actions — use simple present 'I go' and 'I am always working' or simply 'I always work'); 'during holiday, during weekend' wrong prepositions and singular/plural ('during holidays' and 'on weekends'); 'walking around my company' unclear — use 'walk around near my company' or 'walk around the company'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines, 'every day' as two words, and correct prepositions for time.

× Yes, during a young UH, my mother is teach me how to walk around the playground every day to exercise, also around the park.

✓ Yes, when I was young, my mother taught me how to walk around the playground every day to exercise, and also around the park.

Errors: 'during a young' is incorrect phrase — use 'when I was young'; 'is teach me' mixes present auxiliary with base verb instead of past tense — use past simple 'taught'. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past actions and correct time expressions.

× Maybe the people like walking in the park for relaxed places. And many people walking around the park to give a relax and meet the friend.

✓ People may like walking in the park because it is a relaxing place. Many people walk around the park to relax and to meet friends.

Errors: 'the people' unnecessary definite article; 'for relaxed places' wrong word order and noun/adjective use — use 'because it is a relaxing place'; 'many people walking' missing auxiliary — use 'many people walk'; 'to give a relax' incorrect phrase — use 'to relax'; 'meet the friend' incorrect article/plural — use 'meet friends'. Suggestion: use correct articles, verbs in simple present for general statements, and proper noun/adjective forms.

× I walk from the from my house to the city around 10 kilometer. If I have a chance, I go. The town will.

✓ I can walk from my house to the city, which is about 10 kilometers. If I have the chance, I will go there.

Errors: repeated 'from the from' and missing prepositions/articles; '10 kilometer' wrong number + unit — use plural '10 kilometers' or 'about 10 kilometers'; mixed conditional/tense: 'If I have a chance, I go' should use future 'I will go' or modal 'I would go' depending on meaning; 'The town will.' is a sentence fragment. Suggestion: correct repetition, use appropriate unit pluralization, and use correct conditional structure 'If I have the chance, I will go.'

× Lately I work going to the supermarket from my house. And, uh, weekend I go to the mall. To see the product anywhere.

✓ Lately I have been going to the supermarket from my house. On weekends I go to the mall to look at products.

Errors: 'Lately I work going' mixes verbs and tense — use present perfect continuous 'I have been going' for recent repeated actions; 'weekend I go' needs time preposition 'on weekends'; 'To see the product anywhere' is ungrammatical and unclear — use 'to look at products' or 'to see products'. Suggestion: use present perfect continuous for recent habits, correct prepositions for time, and clear verb phrases for purpose.