走路— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngữ pháp đúng và chi tiết hơn. Tránh câu mơ hồ như “Says I do.” Nên có câu chủ đề trực tiếp, theo sau là thông tin bổ trợ (tần suất, mục đích, người cùng đi). Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và giữ trong tối đa 5 câu.

示例: Yes, I do. I usually walk to work every afternoon with a friend, which takes about twenty minutes. We talk as we walk, and it helps me relax after the day.

建议: Cần sửa ngữ pháp quá khứ và câu mở đầu rõ ràng. Tránh cụm từ không tự nhiên như “That's at it.” Nên nêu tần suất, địa điểm và một kỷ niệm hoặc lý do ngắn để cụ thể hóa nội dung.

示例: Yes, I did. I often walked around my village when I was a child because there were many fields and I liked exploring with my cousins.

建议: Sửa lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp, dùng từ đúng ngữ cảnh (work → walk). Nên đưa ra hai lý do rõ ràng kết hợp liên từ để mạch lạc và cụ thể hóa bằng ví dụ ngắn.

示例: I think people like walking in parks because the air is fresher and the green surroundings reduce stress. For example, after work many people go for a stroll to unwind.

建议: Cần dùng đúng mệnh đề giả định (If I had the chance...). Sửa ngữ pháp, thì và tính từ sở hữu, đồng thời nêu lý do cụ thể vì sao chọn địa điểm (cảnh, không khí, hoạt động). Giữ ngắn gọn và tự nhiên.

示例: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk at Colour Peak because the views are stunning and the fresh air would help me relax.

建议: Dùng thì quá khứ tiếp diễn phù hợp với “lately” hoặc hiện tại hoàn thành. Tránh lặp từ (“every every”). Nên nêu thời gian, người cùng đi và một chi tiết ngắn về hoạt động để cụ thể hơn.

示例: Lately I have been walking near my house with a friend or my parents most afternoons. We usually follow a small riverside path and chat as we walk.

× Says I do. I usually go for work every afternoon with my friend.

✓ I do. I usually go for a walk every afternoon with my friend.

The sentence 'Says I do.' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I do.' The phrase 'go for work' is incorrect for walking for exercise—use 'go for a walk'. Maintain simple present tense for habitual action. Suggest practicing subject-verb structure and common collocations like 'go for a walk'.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

Question is already correct in tense and structure. No correction needed. Note: 'have a walk' is acceptable, though 'go for a walk' is more natural.

× That's at it. I often go outside to have a walk in the village when I was child.

✓ That's right. I often went outside to have a walk in the village when I was a child.

'That's at it.' is incorrect; use 'That's right.' The clause refers to past habitual actions, so use past tense 'went' and include the article 'a' before 'child'. Also 'have a walk' is acceptable but 'go for a walk' is more natural. Suggest focusing on matching time references (when I was a child -> past tense).

× I think people like to work in park because it fresh air and relieve stress after study or work.

✓ I think people like to walk in parks because it has fresh air and relieves stress after studying or working.

Multiple issues: 'work in park' should be 'walk in parks' (wrong verb and plural noun), missing articles and subject-verb agreement: 'it fresh air' -> 'it has fresh air' or better 'parks have fresh air'; 'relieve stress' needs third-person singular 'relieves' to agree with subject; 'after study or work' should be 'after studying or working'. Suggest practicing verb choice, plurality, articles, and gerund forms after 'after'.

× If you had to change, I want to take a long walk at colour peak because its view is very beautiful and make me feel comfortable.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk at Colour Peak because its view is very beautiful and makes me feel comfortable.

The response must match the conditional question. 'If you had to change' is wrong pronoun and meaning; use 'If I had the chance' to match the question. For second conditional, use 'would' + base verb: 'I would like'. Subject-verb agreement: 'view... makes'. Also capitalize proper noun 'Colour Peak'. Suggest reviewing conditional structures (if + past -> would + base) and subject-verb agreement.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk lately?

Question is correct. No correction needed. Note: 'lately' with past simple can be acceptable in spoken English, though present perfect 'have you gone' is also common.

× Lately I go for a walk near my house with my friend or parent every every afternoon.

✓ Lately I go for a walk near my house with my friend or parents every afternoon.

Repetition 'every every' should be single 'every'. 'Parent' should be plural 'parents' if referring generally; keep present simple 'go' for habitual action. 'Lately' typically pairs with present perfect, but present simple can be used for regular habits. Suggest removing duplicate words and ensuring correct plural forms.