阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is well organized and directly answers the question with clear reasons and details. However, “A white reader” appears to be a pronunciation or word-choice error; the natural phrase is “an avid reader.” Also, “time-consuming” should be hyphenated when used before a noun. Try to connect your ideas smoothly and use precise collocations.

示例: Yes, I do, although I’m not an avid reader. I mainly read when I want to learn something new or improve my English. I particularly enjoy articles and short books because they’re informative without being too time-consuming. I also find reading quite relaxing when I have some free time.

建议: You give a clear preference and provide relevant reasons, especially about concentration and screen time. However, the answer is one long run-on sentence, so use a full stop or linking words to improve clarity. “I do definitely prefer” is less natural than “I definitely prefer,” and “a physical book feel” should be “a physical book feels.”

示例: I definitely prefer reading on paper. I find it easier to concentrate because I’m less likely to be distracted by notifications or other apps. In addition, a physical book feels more comfortable and gives me a break from the screen time I already have every day.

建议: This is a strong response because it answers both parts of the question directly, uses appropriate linking words such as “for instance” and “however,” and includes specific examples. To make it even more natural, you could say “when I’m browsing social media” instead of “when I’m simply browsing social media,” although the original wording is still acceptable. Maintain this clear topic-detail-contrast structure.

示例: I read carefully whenever the information is important or could affect my decisions. For example, I pay close attention to instructions, official documents, and study materials. By contrast, when I’m browsing social media or reading something just for entertainment, I usually skim it to get the general idea.

建议: Your answer is well structured and makes an effective comparison between scanning and detailed reading. For more natural English, say “a particular piece of information,” “understand the ideas more deeply,” and “remember them better”; “the idea truly” and the pronoun “them” do not agree naturally. You could also use “in contrast” to make the comparison more polished.

示例: It depends on my purpose. If I’m looking for a particular piece of information, I prefer scanning because it’s quicker and more efficient. However, when I’m studying or reading something genuinely interesting, I prefer reading in detail because it helps me understand the ideas more deeply and remember them better.

× Yes I do, although I am not an A white reader.

✓ Yes, I do, although I am not an avid reader.

The phrase A white reader is incorrect. The intended expression is avid reader, meaning someone who reads enthusiastically. Because avid begins with a vowel sound, it takes the article an. This item is classified as an article error.

× I do definitely prefer reading on paper, I find it easier to concentrate because I'm less likely to get distracted by notifications or other apps, and also reading a physical book feel more comfortable and gives me a break from screen time which I already have quite a lot of.

✓ I definitely prefer reading on paper. I find it easier to concentrate because I'm less likely to get distracted by notifications or other apps. Also, reading a physical book feels more comfortable and gives me a break from the screen time I already have quite a lot of.

The original sentence contains several independent clauses joined only by commas, creating a run-on sentence. Separate the main ideas into complete sentences or join them with suitable conjunctions. Breaking the sentence into shorter units makes the structure clearer and easier to understand.

× I do definitely prefer reading on paper, I find it easier to concentrate because I'm less likely to get distracted by notifications or other apps, and also reading a physical book feel more comfortable and gives me a break from screen time which I already have quite a lot of.

✓ I definitely prefer reading on paper. I find it easier to concentrate because I'm less likely to get distracted by notifications or other apps. Also, reading a physical book feels more comfortable and gives me a break from the screen time I already have quite a lot of.

Reading a physical book is a gerund phrase functioning as a singular subject, so it requires the singular verb feels, not feel. Compare this with a book feels comfortable. Remember that a gerund phrase is treated as singular when it acts as the subject of a sentence.

× If I'm looking for the particular piece of information, I prefer scanning because it's much quicker and more efficient.

✓ If I'm looking for a particular piece of information, I prefer scanning because it's much quicker and more efficient.

Use a rather than the when referring to one unspecified example from a group. The speaker has not identified a specific piece of information, so a particular piece of information is the appropriate phrase. Use the particular piece of information only when both the speaker and listener know exactly which piece is meant.

× However, when I'm studying or reading something genuinely interesting, I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the idea truly and remember them better.

✓ However, when I'm studying or reading something genuinely interesting, I prefer detailed reading because it helps me truly understand the idea and remember it better.

The pronoun them is plural, but it refers to the singular noun idea. The correct pronoun is it. The adverb truly is also placed before the verb phrase truly understand, which is the natural position in this sentence. Use it for a singular noun and them for a plural noun.