阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Сосредоточьтесь на простых, грамматически правильных предложениях и логичном порядке мыслей. Избегайте повторов и исправляйте времена глаголов. Дайте чёткое вступление (тезис), затем одно-два подкрепляющих предложения с конкретным примером и заключение. Работайте над произношением и паузами, чтобы убрать заикания.

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading. It relaxes me and helps me learn new things. For example, I often read short novels and articles before bed to improve my mood and expand my vocabulary.

建议: Избегайте нерелевантных или непонятных ссылок и говорите прямо. Упрощайте структуру: назовите предпочтение, объясните причину и приведите пример. Старайтесь не повторять слова и следите за согласованием времен и предлогов.

示例: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes. For example, when I study, I print articles so I can read them for longer without discomfort.

建议: Чётко разделяйте ситуации: когда требуется внимательное чтение и когда нет. Используйте связки (for example, when, because) и избегайте путаницы в временах и излишних повторов. Уточните уровень важности экзаменов, чтобы предложение звучало логично.

示例: I read carefully when I prepare for exams because I need to understand details. Otherwise, I usually skim articles or news for general ideas.

建议: Дайте ясный выбор и объяснение причины. Используйте связки (however, because, therefore) и конкретные примеры того, когда вы используете сканирование или детальное чтение. Избегайте несвязных фраз и лишних повторов.

示例: I prefer scanning because I often need to find specific information quickly. For instance, when I study, I scan articles to locate key points, and only read in detail when a topic is important.

× Yes I do. I generally enjoy reading book because it not only gives me entertainment but also improve my knowledge.

✓ Yes, I do. I generally enjoy reading books because they not only give me entertainment but also improve my knowledge.

Subject-verb agreement with plural noun and verbs: 'book' should be plural 'books' when speaking generally; corresponding pronoun 'they' matches 'books'. Use 'give' (not 'gives') with plural subject 'they'. Also maintain parallel verb form 'improve'. Suggestions: use plural for general statements ("reading books"), ensure verbs agree with their subjects ("books... give").

× When I when I didn't die from work and others I used to reading books.

✓ When I wasn't tired from work and other things, I used to read books.

Incorrect tense and word choice: 'didn't die' is wrong word 'tired'; negative past 'didn't' with adjective is incorrect—use 'wasn't tired'. 'Used to reading' should be 'used to read' (habit in past). Suggestions: use correct adjectives and the structure 'used to + base verb' for past habitual actions.

× By doing this I can improve my mood, broaden my horizon especially in after the before the sleeping I can.

✓ By doing this I can improve my mood and broaden my horizons, especially before sleeping.

Incorrect prepositional and article usage and word order: 'broaden my horizon' should be plural 'horizons'; 'in after the before the sleeping' is ungrammatical—use 'before sleeping' or 'before going to sleep'. Remove redundant 'I can'. Suggestions: simplify to natural phrases and correct prepositions.

× Vile Arnold said Vile Arnold Z reading on screen offering more opportunities, but I certainly prefer reading on a paper because of because of my health.

✓ While some people say reading on a screen offers more opportunities, I certainly prefer reading on paper because of my health.

Awkward phrasing and pronoun/name misuse: 'Vile Arnold' unclear; replace with 'some people' or 'others'. 'Reading on a paper' should be 'reading on paper' (no article). Use 'offers' to agree with singular subject. Suggestions: avoid unnecessary names, use 'on paper' and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I used I used to learning something from paper.

✓ I used to learn things from paper.

Incorrect verb pattern: after 'used to' use base verb 'learn', not gerund 'learning'. Also use plural 'things' and 'on paper' may be better. Suggestions: 'used to + base verb' for past habits.

× By this I can I can save my health and feel reading a book.

✓ By this I can protect my health and enjoy reading a book.

Awkward verb choice and repetition: 'save my health' unnatural—use 'protect' or 'preserve'. 'Feel reading a book' should be 'enjoy reading a book'. Remove duplicate 'I can'. Suggestions: choose natural collocations ('protect my health', 'enjoy reading').

× I don't need to read books carefully, but but my exams is nearly I I try to I try to reading carefully and prepare for this because my my exam isn't really crucial, crucial for for me.

✓ I don't need to read books carefully most of the time, but when my exams are near I try to read carefully and prepare, because my exams aren't very crucial for me.

Multiple subject-verb agreement and tense issues: 'exams is' should be 'exams are'; 'try to reading' should be 'try to read' (try to + base verb); 'exam isn't really crucial' plural agreement for consistency. Remove repeated words. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct 'try to + base verb' structure.

× In event during during my exam during my examination, I read I did carefully and again and again for for for improvement.

✓ During my exams, I read carefully again and again to improve my performance.

Redundancy and incorrect auxiliary use: 'I read I did carefully' is incorrect—use 'I read carefully'. 'Again and again for improvement' better as 'again and again to improve my performance'. Remove repeated words. Suggestions: simplify sentences, use infinitive 'to improve'.

× Vile. I know that reading reading Delta reading because it's really, uh, interesting for me, but I still prefer scanning.

✓ I know that detailed reading can be interesting for me, but I still prefer scanning.

Garbled phrase 'reading reading Delta reading' unclear—likely 'detailed reading'. 'Can be interesting' is natural. Suggestions: choose correct adjective 'detailed' and keep sentence concise.

× By by doing this, I can I can find in in comprehensive information and improve my mood after the, uh, before the lessons and works.

✓ By doing this, I can find comprehensive information and improve my mood before lessons and work.

Incorrect prepositions and word choice: 'find in in comprehensive information' should be 'find comprehensive information'. 'After the, uh, before the lessons and works' contradictory—use 'before lessons and work'. Use singular 'work' when speaking generally. Suggestions: remove filler words and use correct prepositions.