阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevap doğal ama dağınık ve tekrarlı. Kısa ve doğrudan bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, ardından sınav yılınız nedeniyle okuma düzeninizin nasıl değiştiğini ve hangi türleri tercih ettiğinizi 1-2 destekleyici cümleyle açıklayın. Gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve fiil zamanlarına dikkat edin (örn. 'I haven't been reading much this year'). Bağlaçlar (however, because, so) kullanarak akışı düzeltin.

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially novels. However, this year I haven't been reading much because it's my exam year and I need to focus on studying. In my free time I usually prefer fiction because it helps me relax.

建议: İfadeniz anlaşılıyor fakat dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi hatalı; 'healthier' kullanımı bağlam dışı. Kısa bir konu cümlesiyle tercihinizi söyleyin, sonra 1-2 net gerekçe verin (ör. göz yorgunluğu, not alma kolaylığı). Bağlaçlarla cümleleri birleştirin ve nesne-özne uyumuna dikkat edin.

示例: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and allows me to take notes quickly. Also, physical books feel more immersive, so I concentrate better when I read them.

建议: Cevabınız net ama konuşma sırasında duraksamalar ve 'uh' kullanımı var; bunları azaltın. Başlangıçta net bir konu cümlesi kurun, sonra iki zıt durum için açık örnekler verin ve bağlaçlarla (for example, whereas) bağlantı kurun. Ayrıca 'not necessary' yerine daha doğal ifadeler kullanın (e.g. 'I can skim').

示例: I need to read carefully when studying for exams because accuracy matters, for example when answering questions. In contrast, when I'm reading for pleasure I usually skim parts or relax and don't focus on every detail.

建议: Cevabınız tutarlı fakat bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve gayriresmi ifadeler var ('curious of details', 'not the whole book thing'). Konu cümlesiyle tercih belirtin, sonra nedenini iki kısa destekleyici cümleyle açıklayın ve kontrast için bir bağlaç kullanın.

示例: It depends on my purpose, but I generally prefer detailed reading because I enjoy discovering small details and insights. Scanning can be useful for finding information quickly, but it feels superficial compared with reading thoroughly.

× Yeah, I like reading so much, but this year it is my exam year so I didn't read aloud.

✓ Yeah, I like reading so much, but this year is my exam year so I haven't been reading aloud.

The student used simple past 'didn't read' to refer to an ongoing situation in the current year. Use present perfect or present perfect continuous (have not been reading) to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Suggestion: use 'I haven't been reading aloud' or 'I haven't read aloud this year.'

× But usually I like reading so much and I like reading novels.

✓ But usually I like reading so much, and I like reading novels.

There is a punctuation issue rather than a plural error; however the sentence is grammatical. No plural change required. Suggestion: add a comma for clarity or combine to avoid repetition: 'But usually I like reading novels.'

× Of course, I prefer to read on paper because it is more healthier than to read on a screen, and to read on a paper have a different energy.

✓ Of course, I prefer to read on paper because it is healthier than reading on a screen, and reading on paper has a different energy.

'More healthier' is incorrect because 'healthier' is already comparative; do not add 'more'. Also the construction 'than to read on a screen' should be 'than reading on a screen' for parallel structure. 'To read on a paper have' has subject-verb agreement and article issues: use 'reading on paper has'. Suggestion: use comparative 'healthier', use gerund for comparison, and match subject-verb agreement.

× I need to read carefully in exams, of course, but I don't need to read carefully when I'm just, uh, reading some book in my free time.

✓ I need to read carefully in exams, of course, but I don't need to read carefully when I'm just reading a book in my free time.

Use 'reading a book' instead of 'reading some book' for natural English; 'some' is unnecessary and informal here. Tense and structure are otherwise correct. Suggestion: omit 'some' and keep the present continuous 'I'm reading'.

× It’s not necessary.

✓ It's not necessary.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. Keep the contraction and adjective 'necessary.'

× It depends, but I prefer details reading because I'm curious of details in the books and scanning is so boring because it's not the whole book thing.

✓ It depends, but I prefer detailed reading because I'm curious about details in the books, and scanning is so boring because it doesn't cover the whole book.

Use adjective 'detailed' to modify 'reading' (not 'details reading'). Use 'curious about details' rather than 'curious of details.' Also 'it's not the whole book thing' is informal and unclear; use 'it doesn't cover the whole book.' Suggestion: use correct adjective form, correct preposition 'about', and clearer expression for the latter clause.