阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và có nội dung tốt, tuy nhiên cần sửa một số lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Cụ thể: (1) Tránh lặp từ (ví dụ “I think” xuất hiện nhiều lần) và rút gọn câu để không quá dài; (2) Sửa lỗi số nhiều/đơn và từ ghép (ví dụ “at weekend” → “at the weekend” hoặc “on weekends”, “in nowadays life” → “in today’s life”); (3) Thêm một câu hỗ trợ ngắn gọn với từ nối để làm câu mạch lạc hơn. Hãy giữ tối đa 3-4 câu và dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so”.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy reading. I read books almost every day, especially on weekends, because it helps me broaden my knowledge and improve my critical thinking. As a result, I feel more confident when studying or discussing ideas.

建议: Nội dung trả lời rõ ràng nhưng bạn lặp lại ý giống nhau và dùng diễn đạt thiếu mạch lạc (ví dụ “on the paper” nên là “on paper”). Hạn chế tiếng lóng/những từ như “yeah” và tránh lặp cụm “reading on screen”. Hãy tổ chức câu bằng một câu chủ đề + 1-2 câu lý do, dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “because of” và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: social media, notifications).

示例: I prefer reading on paper because screens strain my eyes and I find it harder to concentrate. For example, when I read on my phone I often get distracted by social media notifications, so paper helps me stay focused.

建议: Ý chính tốt nhưng câu chứa nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm từ không đúng viết (ví dụ “ions reading test” có lẽ là “IELTS reading test”). Cần cấu trúc lại: mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó đưa hai ví dụ rõ ràng với lý do vì sao cần đọc kỹ hoặc không. Tránh dùng cụm từ không trang trọng như “just chill” trong thi. Sửa thì và cấu trúc câu để tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I need to read carefully for important tasks, such as the IELTS reading test, because small mistakes can affect my score. However, for casual articles or news I usually skim the main points and don’t read every detail.

建议: Trả lời có ý nhưng lặp và có nhiều khoảng ngắt, tiếng “uh” làm giảm độ trôi chảy. Cần câu chủ đề rõ ràng: nêu rằng phụ thuộc vào mục đích, rồi đưa ví dụ đối lập (scanning vs detailed). Dùng liên từ như “for example” hoặc “however” và tránh lặp. Hãy chuyển tải ý trong 2-3 câu súc tích.

示例: It depends on the purpose: for exams or important documents I prefer detailed reading because I need to understand every point. However, for finding specific information in an article I usually scan the text to save time.

× I think I read books almost every day especially at weekend when I have free time.

✓ I think I read books almost every day, especially at the weekend when I have free time.

Incorrect use of 'at weekend' — English normally uses 'at the weekend' (or 'on weekends'). This is a present tense habitual action so keep present simple. Add a comma before 'especially' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'at the weekend' or 'on weekends' depending on variety.

× I think that reading helps me to broaden my knowledge and also improve my critical thinking which is extremely important in nowadays life.

✓ I think that reading helps me broaden my knowledge and also improve my critical thinking, which is extremely important in today's life.

Problems: 'helps me to broaden' is acceptable but more natural without 'to' after 'helps'; 'nowadays life' is incorrect — use 'today's life' or 'modern life'. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which is...'. Suggestion: remove 'to' after 'helps', use 'today's' or 'modern'.

× I think I prefer reading on the paper because I think reading on screen is really bad for my eyes and I cannot focus much on this, on reading on the screen because there are so many attraction like social media or yeah, something like that.

✓ I think I prefer reading on paper because reading on a screen is really bad for my eyes and I cannot focus much when reading on a screen because there are so many attractions like social media.

Issues: 'on the paper' is incorrect — say 'on paper' (no article). Repetition and awkward phrasing: remove redundant 'I think' and reorganize. Use 'a screen' or 'on a screen' and plural 'attractions'. Avoid filler 'yeah, something like that'. Suggestion: simplify and use consistent phrasing 'reading on paper' vs 'reading on a screen'.

× there are so many attraction like social media

✓ there are so many attractions like social media

Count noun 'attraction' should be plural after 'many'. Use 'attractions'. Suggestion: remember 'many' requires plural countable noun.

× I think there are many time when I need to read carefully.

✓ I think there are many times when I need to read carefully.

Count noun 'time' should be plural 'times' with 'many'. This is a present habitual situation so use present simple; change to 'times'. Suggestion: use 'many times' or 'many occasions'.

× For example in the ions reading test, of course you have to read carefully otherwise you will have to get a low band score.

✓ For example, in the IELTS reading test, of course you have to read carefully; otherwise you may get a low band score.

Multiple issues: 'ions' is likely misspelling of 'IELTS'; add comma after 'For example'; use a semicolon or period before 'otherwise'; 'will have to get a low band score' is unnatural — use 'may get a low band score'. Suggestion: correct proper noun 'IELTS' and improve connector use.

× And when is reading casual news then I think you don't have to read carefully, just chill.

✓ And when reading casual news, I think you don't have to read carefully — just relax.

Awkward word order 'when is reading casual news' should be 'when reading casual news' or 'when you are reading casual news'. 'Just chill' is informal; use 'just relax' in a test context. Suggestion: use correct participle clause or full clause.

× I think it really depends on different situation, for example when this is like for the exam or when I'm preparing, uh, when is for the exam or when I need to read some important.

✓ I think it really depends on the situation. For example, when it is for an exam or when I'm preparing, or when I need to read something important, I need to read in detail.

Problems: 'depends on different situation' -> 'depends on the situation' (article + singular/plural). Repetition and incorrect clauses 'when this is like for the exam' and 'when is for the exam' — use 'when it is for an exam'. 'some important' is incomplete — use 'something important'. 'I have to detail reading' is wrong; use 'read in detail' or 'do detailed reading'. Suggestion: reorganize into clear sentences, use 'in detail' or 'detailed reading'.