阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Clarify content and correct basic grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give organized supporting details with relevant specifics. Avoid incorrect words like "advisor" and reduce redundancy. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "also") and keep answer under 4–5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I love reading. I have enjoyed books since I was in fourth grade because my parents read storybooks to me every evening. Nowadays I read regularly, mostly novels and non-fiction articles about science, which help me learn new ideas.

建议: Give a clear preference and reasons with correct grammar and fewer hesitations. Use linking words like "however" or "but" to compare. Avoid confusing phrasing (e.g., "When I ask a child"). Be specific: mention convenience, cost, or eye comfort as reasons.

示例: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient and cheaper, especially for comics. However, when I read fairy tales to children I choose paper books because the physical pages and illustrations feel more engaging.

建议: Provide a structured answer: state when you read carefully and when you skim, with clear reasons and examples. Correct grammar and replace vague phrases like "comments are novel" with precise ideas (e.g., "important information", "technical articles"). Use linking words such as "because" and "but".

示例: I read carefully when the material contains important or complex information, such as research articles or instructions, because I need to understand details. But for light reading, like many comics or simple stories, I usually skim to get the main idea.

建议: Answer clearly which you prefer and explain why, avoiding unclear comments about translators or critics unless relevant. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasoning (e.g., to enjoy language, understand plot, or save time). Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

示例: I prefer detailed reading because I enjoy appreciating the language, character development, and plot. Sometimes I scan when I need information quickly, but for novels and well-written comics I read carefully to appreciate the author’s craft.

× I've been an advisor since I was in 4th grade when I used to read story books every evening, and I still read regularly now. Many novels and non-fiction articles about science.

✓ I've been an avid reader since I was in 4th grade when I used to read storybooks every evening, and I still read regularly now. I read many novels and non-fiction articles about science.

The original sentence used 'an advisor' which is incorrect in meaning and article use; 'advisor' is not appropriate contextually. 'Avid reader' correctly conveys enthusiasm and uses the indefinite article 'an' before a vowel sound; here 'an avid reader' is correct but 'I've been an avid reader' keeps 'an'. 'Story books' should be one word 'storybooks' and 'Many novels and non-fiction articles about science.' was a sentence fragment; it needs a verb, so change to 'I read many...'. Suggestion: choose correct noun for intended meaning and ensure each sentence has a verb and correct article usage.

× Well, I love read on the screen.

✓ Well, I love reading on the screen.

After 'love' we normally use the gerund form (verb+-ing) when talking about general preferences (I love reading). 'Read' (base form) is incorrect here. Use 'reading' to form a correct verb phrase 'love reading' and include preposition 'on' before 'the screen' is fine.

× When I ask a child, I like reading, uh, on the paper especially.

✓ When I was a child, I liked reading, especially on paper.

The phrase 'When I ask a child' is incorrect; intended meaning is 'When I was a child'. Tense should be past ('liked') because it refers to a habit in the past. 'On the paper' is unnatural; use 'on paper' without the definite article. Also reorder 'especially' to follow the verb phrase for natural flow.

× It's fairy tale in the book.

✓ They were fairy tales in the book.

The original has noun/adjective agreement issues and missing plural. 'Fairy tale' should be plural 'fairy tales' if referring to multiple stories. Also the sentence needs a verb; using past tense 'were' matches context of past reading. Alternatively, 'It was a fairy tale in the book' could be used if referring to a single story. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun number.

× But now the comic is so expensive, so I read it in on the screen.

✓ But now comics are so expensive, so I read them on the screen.

Use plural 'comics' when talking generally. 'Read it in on the screen' has an extra preposition 'in' and wrong pronoun 'it' for plural; use 'them' and 'on the screen'. Also change 'is' to 'are' for plural agreement and maintain parallel structure.

× I read carefully when the comments are novel is so great and awesome of content or art but it's a comic comic book or novel I feel it's boring so I just scrolling and read a.

✓ I read carefully when the content or art of a novel is great and awesome, but if it's a comic book or a novel I find boring, I just scroll and skim it.

Original sentence is fragmented and contains multiple errors: word order ('comments are novel is so great' is incorrect), incorrect nouns ('comments' should be 'content'), missing articles ('a comic comic book' redundant), incorrect verb forms ('just scrolling and read a' mixes gerund and base forms and missing object). The correction clarifies meanings, uses appropriate articles ('a comic book'), corrects verb forms ('scroll and skim' parallel verbs), and fixes sentence structure. Suggest breaking long sentences into clearer clauses and keep parallel verb forms.

× Well, sometimes it's just sometimes it's no umm. I like detail reading of comics or novel.

✓ Well, sometimes it's just... I like detailed reading of comics or novels.

'Detail reading' is incorrect; the adjective form 'detailed' is needed before 'reading' or use 'reading in detail'. Also plural 'novels' for general statement. Remove repeated 'sometimes' and filler 'umm'. Maintain present simple 'I like' for general preference.

× I think that is a hardworking and careful of translator and who create it criticize.

✓ I think that translators and creators work hard and carefully, and I respect their craft.

The original mixes noun forms and incorrect modifiers: 'a hardworking and careful of translator' is ungrammatical. Use plural 'translators and creators' if speaking generally. 'Hardworking' and 'careful' modify people, so place them before nouns ('hardworking translators') or convert to verbs as in the correction. 'Who create it criticize' is unclear; likely meant to praise rather than criticize. The correction clarifies meaning, uses correct adjective placement and parallel structure. Suggest rewrite sentences to clearly state subject and verb and to keep adjectives directly before nouns they modify.