阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法ミスや発音による単語の誤り（例："leading"や"come"）があり、文のつながりや語順も改善できます。具体的には①主語と動詞の一致や現在形の使い方を正しくする（"I like reading books"、"when I read a book"）、②冗長表現を整理して一文目で主旨を述べ、二文目で例や理由を短く付け加える、③語彙を少し広げて自然な表現（"gain a new perspective"など）を使う練習をしてください。また話すときはゆっくりはっきり発音し、重要な語を強調すると良いです。

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading. When I read books, I often feel like I'm stepping into other people's lives, which is enjoyable and helps me gain a new perspective.

建议: 主張は明確ですが繰り返しや語順、文法ミス（"reading on computer is very convenience"、"with any blue light"）が目立ちます。改善点は①簡潔に一文で主張を示す（"I prefer paper because..."）、②理由を論理的に並べる（視力疲労や集中しやすさなど）、③不必要な繰り返しを避けることです。具体的に『blue light』の影響を説明する短い裏付けを加えると説得力が増します。発音練習では"convenient"と語尾の発音に注意してください。

示例: I prefer reading on paper because it's easier on my eyes. Screens emit blue light that makes me feel tired, so I find paper books more comfortable for longer reading sessions.

建议: 考えは分かりますが語彙の誤用（"lead"→"read"）や冗長な構造が多く、明確で流れるような英語にする必要があります。改善点は①質問に対してトピックセンテンスで直接答える（"You need to read carefully when..."）、②具体例を一つか二つ挙げる（試験や仕事の重要な書類など）、③対照を示す際は接続詞（"but"や"however"）を使用して流れを作ること。簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。

示例: You need to read carefully during exams or when reviewing important documents, because accuracy is essential. However, during leisure reading, you can read more quickly and enjoy the content without worrying about every detail.

建议: 答えは合理的ですが多数の発音・語彙ミス（"leave"→"read"、"Shirley Brook"は不明瞭）や冗長な表現があります。改善点は①まず"It depends"の後に具体的な基準を短く示す、②例を挙げるときは正しい語彙を使う（"fiction"や"textbooks"）、③一文ずつ短くして情報を整理すること。語彙として"scan"や"skim"、"read in detail"を使い分ける練習も有効です。

示例: It depends on the material. For novels or leisure reading, I usually skim to get the general idea, but for textbooks or study materials, I read in detail to fully understand the concepts.

× Yes I do, I like reading book because when I'm leading come any books I always feel like I'm experiencing other people's life so it is very fun and gives me new perspective.

✓ Yes, I do. I like reading books because when I read different books I always feel like I'm experiencing other people's lives, so it is very enjoyable and gives me a new perspective.

Multiple issues: 'reading book' should be plural 'reading books' (singular/plural issue), 'leading' is incorrect form of 'read' (verb form error) and should be 'read', 'come any books' is ungrammatical — intended meaning is 'different books' or 'many books' (word choice and structure), 'other people's life' requires plural 'lives', and 'very fun' is better phrased as 'very enjoyable'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms ('read'), plural nouns for general statements ('books','lives'), and more natural collocations ('enjoyable', 'a new perspective').

× I prefer to read on paper. It is it, it is true, reading on computer is very convenience, convenience for us. But I always feel tired and with any blue light, so my I always get tired.

✓ I prefer to read on paper. It's true that reading on a computer is very convenient for us, but I always feel tired because of the blue light, so I often get fatigued.

Problems: 'reading on computer' needs an article 'on a computer' (article error). 'convenience' is a noun; here the adjective 'convenient' is needed (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs). 'with any blue light' is incorrect preposition and word choice; use 'because of the blue light' (incorrect preposition/word choice). Redundant phrases removed and sentence flow improved. Suggestion: use correct article forms, choose adjective vs noun properly, and use 'because of' to express cause. Keep concise clauses.'

× I think when you are at the test you have to lead very carefully and the situation when you are not, you don't have to lead carefully is also free time leading.

✓ I think when you are taking a test you have to read very carefully, and when you are not, such as during free time, you don't have to read carefully.

Errors: 'at the test' is better as 'taking a test' (preposition and verb choice). 'lead' is incorrect; should be 'read' (incorrect verb form). The clause order and structure is awkward; 'the situation when you are not' should be rephrased to 'when you are not' or 'such as during free time' (sentence structure error). Suggestion: use 'take a test' and 'read' for correct collocations and restructure the sentence for clarity.'

× It depends on what kind of book I will read. Umm when I leave Shirley Brook I always feel I always lead scanning but any studying books is I always read with detailed reading.

✓ It depends on what kind of book I am going to read. When I read short books I usually scan them, but for study books I always read in detail.

Issues: 'I will read' is not the best choice for habitual or near-future preference; 'I am going to read' or 'I read' fits better (future/present tense issue). 'leave Shirley Brook' appears to be incorrect phrase; likely 'short books' — 'short' was misheard/typed (word choice). 'lead scanning' is wrong verb; use 'scan' (verb + -ing form error). 'any studying books' should be 'study books' or 'textbooks' (incorrect adjective use). 'detailed reading' is better as 'read in detail' (word choice and adverb placement). Suggestion: choose appropriate tense for habits, use correct vocabulary ('short books','scan','study books'), and natural adverbial phrases like 'in detail'.