阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện: Giữ câu trả lời ngắn gọn và rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và tiếng thở dài (um/uh). Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó đưa 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ thể loại sách bạn thích hoặc một lợi ích cụ thể). Luyện phát âm từ quan trọng (ví dụ: "reading", "books", "relax").

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me relax after a busy day and I often learn new ideas from non-fiction books about psychology.

建议: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp và dùng cấu trúc câu dễ hiểu: nêu ưu tiên rồi giải thích với một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (e.g., "I much prefer" → "I prefer" hoặc "I much prefer reading on a screen because...") và dùng từ chính xác (e.g., "entertaining" thay vì "entertainment").

示例: I prefer reading on a screen because it’s convenient and I can adjust the font size. For example, I often read articles on my tablet during my commute.

建议: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng: nói khi nào bạn đọc kỹ và khi nào đọc lướt. Dùng liên từ để liên kết ý (e.g., "when..., but when..."), và tránh lặp từ. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể: môn học, loại tài liệu cần đọc kỹ.

示例: I need to read carefully when I study for exams or read textbooks, because details matter. But for news or social media I usually skim to get the main points quickly.

建议: Cải thiện: Dùng thì và ngữ pháp chính xác (e.g., "I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand everything"). Bổ sung lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể để câu rõ ràng hơn. Hạn chế dùng cấu trúc mơ hồ như "understand on something."

示例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand all the details, especially when I study complex topics like history or science. For instance, reading a textbook chapter slowly helps me remember key facts.

× Yes, I really enjoy feeding uh because when I read read book it help me uh relax after a busy day I can learn. Uh, from.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy reading because when I read a book it helps me relax after a busy day and I can learn from it.

Student used 'feeding' which is incorrect; the verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund ('reading'). There are also missing articles and incorrect verb forms: use 'a book' (article) and 'helps' (third person singular agreement). Suggestion: use 'enjoy reading', include necessary articles, and use 'helps' for singular subject; place 'from it' at the end to complete the idea.

× I much prefer to read on a screen because I love read on the screen. It very entertainment. Uh, bring for me.

✓ I much prefer to read on a screen because I love reading on the screen. It is very entertaining and enjoyable for me.

After 'love' use the gerund 'reading' (present participle) when speaking generally. 'It very entertainment' is incorrect: use 'It is very entertaining' (adjective) and include the verb 'is'. 'Bring for me' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'enjoyable for me'. Suggestion: use 'love reading', include 'is', and use 'entertaining/enjoyable'.

× When I study, I need to read carefully because when I cannot study on a read, read book it it. Worrying.

✓ When I study, I need to read carefully because if I don't, I cannot study well from a book and it is worrying.

The sentence has tense and modal problems: use 'if I don't' (present simple negative) to contrast with 'need to read carefully'. 'cannot study on a read, read book' is ungrammatical; use 'study well from a book'. 'it it. Worrying.' must be 'it is worrying'. Suggestion: use clear conditional structure 'if I don't', correct noun phrase 'a book', and include linking verb 'is'.

× I will refer detailed reading because it help me understand all detail. I will understand on something.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand all the details. I can understand things better.

The student used 'I will refer' incorrectly; preference uses present simple 'I prefer'. 'it help' needs third person singular 'helps'. 'all detail' requires plural and article: 'all the details'. 'I will understand on something' is incorrect preposition and unnatural future; use 'I can understand things better' or 'I understand things better'. Suggestion: use 'prefer', ensure subject-verb agreement 'helps', pluralize 'details', and avoid unnecessary future 'will' for habitual preferences.