阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is natural and directly addresses the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail. To improve, make the response slightly more specific and varied in vocabulary (mention a favorite genre or a recent book) and avoid repeating simple phrases like "I'm always." Keep within 3–4 sentences and add a linking phrase to sound more coherent.

示例: Yes, I love reading and I enjoy a range of genres, especially contemporary and historical novels. For example, I recently finished a historical novel about World War II that I found very moving. I also use my Kindle because it lets me carry many books at once.

建议: Good direct answer and relevant reasons. Improve by tightening language, using linking words (for that reason, moreover), and correcting small phrasing issues (e.g., "a Kindle feels like paper"). Add a brief comparison with paper to show balanced judgment.

示例: I like both, but if I had to choose I prefer reading on a screen because a Kindle feels similar to paper and uses less material, which is better for the environment. Moreover, it's much more convenient for travel since it reduces the weight in my bag. That said, I still enjoy paper books for certain novels.

建议: The answer addresses both parts but contains an error and vague phrasing. Replace 'following a receipt' with the correct phrase ('following a recipe' or 'reading a receipt') and give a specific example of what careful reading involves. Use linking words (however, for example) and avoid generic phrases like 'something is important to me.'

示例: I need to read carefully when the information affects results, for example when I'm taking an exam or following a recipe to cook a dish. However, for leisure reading like magazines or comics I read more casually and skim for interesting parts.

建议: You answer the question but contain grammatical mistakes and slightly unclear phrasing. Correct grammar ('depends on why I'm reading', 'in order not to miss') and use linking words (for instance, however). Provide a concrete example of when you'd choose each method to add specificity.

示例: It depends on my purpose. For instance, when I'm reading news or a magazine for pleasure I usually scan for interesting items; however, when I'm studying or reading instructions I read in detail in order not to miss anything important.

× I like both, but if I have to choose I prefer to read on a screen because a kindle is very similar to a paper and it's better for the environment.

✓ I like both, but if I have to choose I prefer to read on a screen because a Kindle is very similar to paper and it's better for the environment.

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