阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a direct topic sentence then briefly explain reasons with one linking word; avoid repetition and aim for clearer grammar. For example, start with a clear statement ("I don't enjoy reading much") then give one or two concise reasons using linking words like "because" or "so." Correct simple grammar (e.g., "I feel it's boring" → "I find it boring").

示例: I don't enjoy reading much because I find it boring and it often makes me sleepy, so I prefer watching TV where the story is more engaging and visual.

建议: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give two concise, specific reasons connected with linking words ("because", "and"). Correct minor grammar ("when read on screen" → "when reading on a screen"). Avoid vague phrasing like "special scent" — be slightly more specific if possible.

示例: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy the texture and faint scent of books, and I also think reading on a screen can strain the eyes after long periods of time.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence answering both parts, then give specific examples linked with words like "for example" or "and". Fix grammar ("read the contact" → "read the contract", "sign our name" → "sign it"). Be concise and avoid general phrasing.

示例: You need to read carefully in important situations, for example, when you sign a contract or when you study for an exam, but you don't need to read every short message or advertisement in detail.

建议: Give a direct answer ("I prefer scanning/detailed reading"), then explain why with specific reasons and clear linking words. Correct vocabulary errors ("Skinny" → "scan" or "skim"; "construction of the article" → "structure"). Keep to two or three short sentences.

示例: I prefer skimming articles because it is a quick way to understand the structure and main ideas, so I can get a summary fast before deciding whether to read in detail.

× No, I always want to sleep when I start reading and I feel it's boring.

✓ No, I always want to sleep when I start reading, and I feel it's boring.

Comma needed before coordinating conjunction joining two independent clauses; this is sentence structure/punctuation affecting clarity. Suggestion: use a comma before 'and' when joining two complete sentences.

× I would rather watch TV instead of reading.

✓ I would rather watch TV than read.

Use 'would rather ... than ...' with base verb form; 'instead of' requires a noun or gerund but 'would rather' pairs with 'than'. Suggestion: say 'would rather watch TV than read.'

× I like to read on paper because I can smell a special scent from the paper and I think it's harmful to our eyes when read on screen.

✓ I like to read on paper because I can smell a special scent from it, and I think reading on a screen is harmful to our eyes.

Pronoun reference: replace 'the paper' with 'it' for naturalness. Also verb phrase 'when read on screen' is passive/awkward; use 'reading on a screen' (gerund) to indicate the activity. Suggestion: use clear pronouns and gerunds for activities.

× It is necessary for us to read the contact before sign our name and we also need to read the article carefully when we have the exam.

✓ It is necessary for us to read the contract before signing our names, and we also need to read the articles carefully when we have exams.

Use gerund after 'before' ('signing'). 'Contract' was misspelled as 'contact'. Agreement and plural: 'our names' and pluralize 'article/exam' to match general statement or keep singular consistently. Suggestion: use gerund after time prepositions and ensure correct word choice and number agreement.

× I like Skinny the article because it is quite convenient for us to know the construction of the article and we can now have the summary quickly.

✓ I like to skim the article because it is quite convenient for us to understand its structure and we can quickly get a summary.

'Skinny' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'skim' (verb). 'To know the construction' is unnatural; use 'understand its structure'. 'We can now have the summary quickly' is awkward; say 'we can quickly get a summary.' Suggestion: choose correct verbs and natural collocations, and use adverb placement ('quickly get').