阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with brief examples. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “new and non new things.” Use correct verb forms and singular/plural agreement.

示例: Yes, I do. Reading is very important to me because it helps me relax and learn new ideas. For example, I read novels to unwind and non-fiction books to pick up facts and opinions related to my studies.

建议: Give a clear preference and two concise reasons, using correct expressions. Avoid confusing words like “disabled reading.” Use linking words (for example, because and although) and correct verb forms and nouns.

示例: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and I can annotate easily. Although screens are convenient for quick searches, I find long screen reading strains my eyes and reduces my focus.

建议: Give a direct topic sentence and then two specific situations with clear reasons. Fix unclear phrases like “before pet” and use linking words (when / because / so). Keep sentences short and natural.

示例: I need to read carefully when I am relaxed and free from distractions because concentration helps me understand details. I avoid reading when I am exhausted or right before bedtime because I can't focus and I fall asleep easily.

建议: This is a good structure. Improve grammar and word choice: use precise verbs and link the two stages clearly. Limit to two or three sentences and add a brief reason for each stage.

示例: I usually start by scanning the text to get an overview of the main ideas. Then I read in detail to understand arguments and note important examples, which helps me remember and analyze the content.

× Yes I do, reading is the most important things to me and I do it in my free time because it makes me relax and new and non new things.

✓ Yes, I do. Reading is the most important thing to me, and I do it in my free time because it helps me relax and learn both new and familiar things.

The noun 'things' after 'most important' should be singular: 'thing' (Grammar problem type: singular and plural). Also 'makes me relax' is unnatural; use 'helps me relax'. 'new and non new things' is unclear; replace with 'learn both new and familiar things'. Suggestions: use singular with 'most important thing' and clearer verb 'helps' plus clearer phrase for contrasting items.

× I prefer to read on paper, disabled reading on screen.

✓ I prefer to read on paper; I avoid reading on a screen.

The original uses 'disabled reading on screen' which is incorrect. Use 'avoid' to express preference to not do something and add the article 'a' before 'screen' when speaking in general. This addresses article/determiner misuse and wrong word choice. Suggestion: use 'avoid reading on a screen'.

× It is more convenient, but it is unhealthy because it destroying eyes and make me unhealthy.

✓ It is more convenient, but it is unhealthy because it damages the eyes and makes me feel unwell.

The clause 'it destroying eyes' is incorrect: need a finite verb form ('damages') and an object 'the eyes'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'make me unhealthy' should be 'makes me feel unwell' to match singular subject 'it'. Use correct verb forms and agreement.

× Usually I prefer to read when I feel relaxed and I don't have anything distract me and I don't want to read when I feel exhausted or before pet.

✓ Usually I prefer to read when I feel relaxed and nothing distracts me, and I do not want to read when I feel exhausted or before bedtime.

Several present tense and subject-verb agreement errors: 'anything distract me' should be 'nothing distracts me' (subject-verb agreement and correct negation). 'before pet' is unclear; likely 'before bed' or 'before bedtime'. Use consistent present simple: 'nothing distracts me' and 'I do not want to read'.

× Firstly, I start my reading by scanning all things. After that I dive deep in details to think and know more about book.

✓ First, I begin by scanning everything. After that, I dive deeply into the details to reflect and learn more about the book.

'Firstly' is acceptable but 'First' is more natural. 'start my reading by scanning all things' is awkward; use 'begin by scanning everything'. 'dive deep in details' should be 'dive deeply into the details' (adverb form and preposition). 'to think and know more about book' needs articles and clearer verbs: 'to reflect and learn more about the book'. Suggestions: use natural collocations: 'begin by scanning', 'dive deeply into the details', and include articles where needed.