Part 1
考官
Do you like reading?
考生
To be honest, I don't enjoy reading very much because I find it hard to concentrate on long texts. I usually prefer washing short videos or listening to podcasts since they came me more engaged and are easier to follow while I'm commuting.
考官
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
考生
I prefer reading physical book because I find them easier to concentrate on or I've tried reading on screen many times but the glare and notification distract me so I usually choose paper when I need to study or focus. And. Reading on screen I can get the information.
考官
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
考生
Well, I need to read carefully when is something important like reading on a ebook online because some subject I didn't have the physical book, so I can only read it through online so I will not miss some important details.
考官
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
考生
I think it's depends, when I reading on a Chinese book I prefer scanning because it's it is my mother language so I can scan and read the whole text in a short time. But for English type I need to detail reading.
Do you like reading?
分数: 60.0建议: Correct pronunciation and word choice errors, shorten and organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Fix incorrect verbs (e.g., "washing" -> "watching") and phrasing ("they came me more engaged" -> "they engage me more"). Use a linking phrase for clarity.
示例: To be honest, I don't enjoy reading very much because I find it hard to concentrate on long texts. Instead, I prefer watching short videos or listening to podcasts, because they engage me more and are easier to follow when I'm commuting.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
分数: 55.0建议: Make one clear topic sentence stating preference, then give two concise supporting reasons linked with connectors. Correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and remove irrelevant sentence fragments. Replace "And. Reading on screen I can get the information" with a cohesive contrast phrase if needed.
示例: I prefer reading physical books because I find them easier to concentrate on, and screens often cause glare and distracting notifications. However, I sometimes read on a screen when I only need quick information.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
分数: 50.0建议: Start with a direct answer then give specific examples and use linking words. Fix grammar and word order (e.g., "when it is something important"), and be specific about contexts requiring careful reading versus skimming.
示例: I need to read carefully when the material is important or technical, such as an online textbook for a course I don't have in print, because I don't want to miss key details. For less important content, like casual blog posts, I just skim to get the main idea.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
分数: 65.0建议: Provide a concise topic sentence that directly answers the question, then explain reasons with linking words. Correct grammar ("it depends", verb forms, articles) and avoid repetition. Use precise vocabulary like "native language" and "detailed reading".
示例: It depends: for Chinese, my native language, I usually scan because I can understand quickly; but for English texts I prefer detailed reading so I don't miss nuances and unfamiliar vocabulary.
× To be honest, I don't enjoy reading very much because I find it hard to concentrate on long texts. I usually prefer washing short videos or listening to podcasts since they came me more engaged and are easier to follow while I'm commuting.
✓ To be honest, I don't enjoy reading very much because I find it hard to concentrate on long texts. I usually prefer watching short videos or listening to podcasts since they make me more engaged and are easier to follow while I'm commuting.
Errors: 'washing' is a wrong verb form and should be 'watching' (verb + -ing). 'came me more engaged' is incorrect word choice and form; it should be 'make me more engaged' (present tense subject-verb agreement and correct verb meaning). Suggestion: Use 'watching' for viewing videos and use 'make' to indicate something causes a feeling ('they make me more engaged'). Ensure verbs after 'prefer' are correct gerunds (verb + -ing) and match subject-verb agreement.'},{