阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Говорите напрямую и естественнее: начните с утверждения, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных пояснения. Избегайте формулировок вроде "I suggest" (это звучит неуместно) и повторов (например, "in the free time"). Также следите за грамматикой: правильно — "in my free time".

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read in my free time because it helps me relax and learn new things.

建议: Упростите и исправьте грамматику: используйте одно простое утверждение, затем конкретное объяснение. Избегайте лишних фраз типа "I thought about a lot of times" и ошибок в предлогах (правильно — "when I am travelling"). Также применяйте связку для контраста (e.g., "but").

示例: I prefer reading on paper at home because I like the feel of books, but I read on a screen when I am travelling for convenience.

建议: Дайте чёткую тему и конкретные детали. Избегайте разговорных сокращений ("wanna") и двойных слов ("and and"). Укажите различие между ситуациями и используйте связку для противопоставления (e.g., "however").

示例: I read carefully when I need to remember information for exams or work because I focus on details. However, when I read to relax I skim through the text and don't pay attention to every detail.

建议: Формулируйте последовательно: сначала ответьте прямо, затем объясните причину. Избегайте разговорных слов ("wanna"), исправьте словосочетания ("scanning reading" → "scanning"; "detail reading" → "detailed reading") и ошибки в лексике ("imagine" → "imagination").

示例: For studying I prefer scanning because it helps me find key information quickly. But for pleasure I choose detailed reading since I enjoy immersing myself in the author's descriptions and using my imagination.

× I suggest reading is really enjoyable and I often read in the free time.

✓ I think reading is really enjoyable and I often read in my free time.

The student used 'suggest' incorrectly; 'suggest' means to propose something, while 'think' or 'believe' expresses personal opinion. Also 'in the free time' is unnatural; use the possessive phrase 'my free time'. Use 'I think' to state preferences and 'my free time' for habitual activities.

× I thought about a lot of times and I can say I love reading on paper when I stay at home.

✓ I have thought about it many times and I can say I love reading on paper when I stay at home.

The original 'I thought about a lot of times' mixes past simple with awkward phrasing. Use present perfect 'have thought' to indicate repeated considerations up to now, and 'many times' (not 'a lot of times'). This fits the context of an ongoing preference.

× I love touch books but I love reading a screen when I in travelling.

✓ I love the feel of books, but I love reading on a screen when I am travelling.

'Touch books' is incorrect; say 'the feel of books' or 'touching books'. Also use the preposition 'on a screen' and include the auxiliary verb 'am' in 'I am travelling'. The sentence combines noun phrase choice and missing verb.

× I read in two situations, when I need to remember materials and and when I need to relax.

✓ I read in two situations: when I need to remember material and when I need to relax.

There is a duplicated 'and and'. Also use 'material' (uncountable) rather than 'materials' for general information, and a colon or clearer punctuation after 'situations' improves structure.

× So if I wanna remember information, I'm reading carefully.

✓ So if I want to remember information, I read carefully.

Use 'want to' rather than colloquial 'wanna' in formal speech. For habitual action conditional with 'if', use simple present 'I read carefully' instead of present continuous 'I'm reading carefully'. That aligns tense with general habits.

× When I read for my study I prefer scanning reading because it gives me more time for learning information.

✓ When I read for my studies I prefer skimming because it gives me more time to learn information.

'Scanning reading' is awkward; 'skimming' or 'scanning' are correct single-word terms. Use 'for my studies' (plural) and 'to learn information' or 'to study' rather than 'for learning information'. Word choice and gerund use needed correction.

× But when I wanna relax I prefer detail reading because my imagine is really good for it.

✓ But when I want to relax I prefer detailed reading because my imagination is very good for it.

Replace colloquial 'wanna' with 'want to'. Use 'detailed reading' (adjective before noun) instead of 'detail reading'. 'Imagine' is a verb; the noun 'imagination' is required. Also 'very good for it' is vague but acceptable; consider 'it suits my imagination' for clarity.