阅读— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like reading?
考生
Of course I like reading. In my leisure time, I always reading books and I often pick a book with me everywhere I go.
考官
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
考生
I prefer to read on paper, it's easy on my eyes and I love the texture when I touch it. And the smell was perfectly good.
考官
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
考生
I need to read carefully when I read textbook about physics and biology. In other hand, when I read comics, I didn't have to read carefully.
考官
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
考生
Of course I prefer scanning or a detailed reading. I want to know overall what about the information, what I read. Then I will read carefully to find what I'm seeking for.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like reading?
分数: 72.0建议: ใช้ประโยคให้ถูกต้องตามไวยากรณ์และทำให้กระชับมากขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคตอบตรงๆ แล้วตามด้วยรายละเอียดสนับสนุนหนึ่งหรือสองข้อ เช่น ความถี่และสถานการณ์ ใช้คำกริยารูปถูกต้อง (I always read) และหลีกเลี่ยงความซ้ำซ้อน
示例: Yes, I enjoy reading. In my free time I often read books, and I usually carry a book with me so I can read while commuting or waiting.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
分数: 68.0建议: ปรับ tense และเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล ใช้ linking word เพื่ออธิบายเหตุผลอย่างเป็นระบบ และเปลี่ยนคำที่ไม่เป็นทางการหรือผิดไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'was' -> 'is' และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำว่า 'perfectly' ที่ไม่จำเป็น
示例: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and I enjoy the texture of the pages. I also like the smell of books, which makes reading more pleasant.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
分数: 66.0建议: แก้รูปแบบประโยคให้ถูกต้องและชัดเจน ใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม (On the other hand) และรักษา tense ให้สอดคล้องกัน (present simple) ให้รายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมสั้นๆ ว่าเพราะเหตุใดจึงต้องอ่านละเอียดหรือไม่ละเอียด
示例: I need to read carefully when studying textbooks on subjects like physics and biology because the material is complex. On the other hand, I don't read comics carefully since they are mainly for entertainment.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
分数: 64.0建议: ประโยคไม่ชัดเจนและมีความขัดแย้ง (both scanning and detailed?) ควรตอบอย่างชัดเจนว่าชอบแบบไหน แล้วอธิบายขั้นตอนสั้นๆ ใช้ linking words เช่น 'first' และ 'then' และแก้โครงสร้างให้เป็นธรรมชาติ
示例: I usually start by scanning a text to get an overview of the information. Then, if I need specific details, I read more carefully to find what I'm looking for.
语法
× In my leisure time, I always reading books and I often pick a book with me everywhere I go.
✓ In my leisure time, I always read books and I often take a book with me everywhere I go.
The verb after 'always' should be in base form for habitual actions (simple present). 'reading' is a present participle and is incorrect here. Also 'pick a book with me' is unnatural; use 'take a book with me'. Suggestion: use simple present 'read' for routines and 'take' instead of 'pick' for carrying items. Grammar Problem Type ID: 8
× And the smell was perfectly good.
✓ And the smell is really pleasant.
The sentence refers to a general, current preference, so present tense 'is' is appropriate rather than past 'was'. Also 'perfectly good' is an odd collocation; use 'pleasant' or 'nice'. Suggestion: use present tense when stating ongoing impressions or preferences. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5
× I need to read carefully when I read textbook about physics and biology.
✓ I need to read carefully when I read textbooks about physics and biology.
Countable noun 'textbook' needs a determiner. If speaking generally, use the plural 'textbooks' without an article. Suggestion: use plural for general statements about types of books: 'textbooks'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22
× In other hand, when I read comics, I didn't have to read carefully.
✓ On the other hand, when I read comics, I don't have to read carefully.
The correct phrase is 'on the other hand'. Also the contrast compares general habits, so use present tense 'don't have to' instead of past 'didn't have to'. Suggestion: use 'on the other hand' and match tense to habitual actions (simple present). Grammar Problem Type ID: 16
× Of course I prefer scanning or a detailed reading.
✓ Of course I prefer scanning to detailed reading.
When comparing preferences, use 'prefer A to B'. Also 'a detailed reading' is unnecessary; use noun phrase 'detailed reading'. Suggestion: use the structure 'prefer X to Y' and uncountable noun form for types of reading. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6
× I want to know overall what about the information, what I read.
✓ I want to know overall what the information is about when I read.
The original word order is awkward. Place 'what the information is about' as the object, and 'when I read' to indicate time. Also avoid duplicating 'what'. Suggestion: reorder clause to 'know what the information is about' and attach 'when I read' for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12
× Then I will read carefully to find what I'm seeking for.
✓ Then I will read carefully to find what I'm looking for.
Avoid ending relative clauses with redundant prepositions like 'seeking for'; 'seek' typically takes a direct object without 'for'. 'Looking for' is natural. Suggestion: use 'find what I'm looking for' or 'seek what I need' depending on formality. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11}]}.json.gz.aspiration<object/>.INVALID_NOTICE_UPDATED.{
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