阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và cách dùng thì; làm câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn; tránh lặp từ và lỗi danh từ số nhiều/đếm được. Cụ thể: sửa thì động từ (I usually read), dùng dạng số nhiều/correct titles (books; A Song of Ice and Fire thay vì King of Thrones), và nối ý bằng một câu phụ rõ ràng để tránh câu rời rạc.

示例: Yes, I do. I usually read every day, mostly fantasy books like The Lord of the Rings. These stories really excite me because of their complex worlds and adventurous plots, so I often lose track of time when I read.

建议: Cải thiện từ vựng chính xác và diễn đạt tự nhiên; tránh dùng cụm từ không đúng ('tough time feeling') và thay bằng mô tả cụ thể; giữ câu súc tích và thêm liên từ hợp lý.

示例: To be honest, I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of holding a book. Moreover, paper pages are gentler on my eyes and help me concentrate better than reading from a backlit screen.

建议: Cải thiện trật tự từ và cấu trúc câu; trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp và sử dụng ví dụ rõ ràng; dùng liên từ để tách hai phần (khi cần đọc kỹ và khi không).

示例: I need to read carefully when I want to understand or remember information, for example when studying a textbook or taking notes. On the other hand, I usually skim casual messages from friends because they are less important.

建议: Rèn cấu trúc mạch lạc và diễn đạt súc tích; tránh câu rời rạc và lỗi từ; sử dụng linking words để thể hiện điều kiện (If/when) và trái ngược (however). Nên đưa ví dụ cụ thể và giữ dưới 4 câu.

示例: It depends. When I need to learn something or study, I prefer detailed reading to fully understand the material. However, if the text is short or unimportant, I usually scan it quickly to get the main points.

× Yes I do, I usually reading on a daily basis.

✓ Yes I do. I usually read on a daily basis.

The verb 'read' should be in base form after an adverb of frequency; 'reading' is a gerund/participle and is incorrect here. Use the simple present 'read' for habitual actions. Suggestion: Use subject + adverb + base verb (I usually read).

× I usually read about fantasy book such as Lord of the Rings or King of Thrones.

✓ I usually read fantasy books such as The Lord of the Rings or Game of Thrones.

Countable plural noun 'books' is required when speaking generally; 'about' is unnecessary here. Also use correct titles: 'The Lord of the Rings' and 'Game of Thrones'. Suggestion: Use plural for general categories and accurate titles.

× This book make me feel very excited and when I read it.

✓ These books make me feel very excited when I read them.

Plural subject 'books' requires the plural verb 'make' and plural pronoun 'them'. The original also had an incomplete clause 'and when I read it.' Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree in number and complete the clause.

× To be honest, I prefer to read on paper rather than on the screen because I really enjoy the tough time feeling of holding a book.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because I really enjoy the tactile feeling of holding a book.

Use 'a screen' not 'the screen' for a general preference. 'Tough time feeling' is incorrect; 'tactile feeling' or 'the feeling' is appropriate. Suggestion: Use indefinite articles for general items and correct adjective choice.

× Also, reading on paper is more affordable for my eyes and helps me concentrate better than looking at the backlit screen.

✓ Also, reading on paper is easier on my eyes and helps me concentrate better than looking at a backlit screen.

'Affordable for my eyes' is incorrect collocation; use 'easier on my eyes'. Use 'a backlit screen' for general reference. Suggestion: Use common collocations for health effects ('easier on the eyes').

× To be honest, when I need to read carefully is when I truly want to get information of what I am reading.

✓ To be honest, I need to read carefully when I truly want to get information from what I am reading.

The original word order is awkward. Use 'I need to read carefully when...' and the correct preposition 'from' for extracting information. Suggestion: Use clearer subject-verb order and correct prepositions.

× For example, when I will read carefully when I read a textbook or school book on the other hand.

✓ For example, I read carefully when I study a textbook or a school book.

Do not use 'will' for habitual present actions. Use present simple 'read' for routines. Also remove redundant 'when' and use 'study' for textbooks. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions and simplify sentence structure.

× I may I may not read carefully when I read my friend messages.

✓ I may or may not read carefully when I read my friends' messages.

Redundant 'I may' repeated; use 'may or may not'. Possessive plural 'friends'' needed for messages from multiple friends. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and use correct possessive form.

× To be honest, it depends. I will read carefully.

✓ To be honest, it depends. I read carefully when necessary.

'I will read carefully' is awkward without context; present simple 'I read carefully when necessary' fits habitual preference. Suggestion: Match tense to general habit and clarify condition.

× When I want to learn more knowledge or information, I must be read.

✓ When I want to learn more or get information, I need to read carefully.

'Learn more knowledge' is redundant; use 'learn more' or 'get more information'. 'I must be read' is ungrammatical passive. Use active 'I need to read carefully.' Suggestion: Use active voice and natural collocations.

× It works carefully, but on.

✓ It requires careful reading, but not always.

The original is fragmented and unclear. Clarify meaning: some texts require careful reading, others do not. Suggestion: Combine clauses into a clear sentence.

× However, when the message on the. Please are not important, I'm just skim it.

✓ However, when the messages are not important, I just skim them.

Original contains fragments and incorrect word order. Use plural 'messages', verb 'are' and plural object 'them'. Use 'skim' (base form) with subject 'I'. Suggestion: Keep subject-verb-object order and correct number agreement.