阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid awkward phrasing (e.g. "make you restored") and redundancy ("knowledge and information"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example."

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read when I’m relaxed because it helps me unwind and learn new things — for example, I often read short history articles that teach me about different cultures.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and a specific reason with correct grammar. Use linking words like "because" and a brief example. Improve sentence structure (e.g. "gain me analyze" is incorrect).

示例: I prefer reading on paper because I focus better and understand complex ideas more easily. For example, when I study for exams I use a printed textbook and make notes in the margins.

建议: Make the answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Use a clear contrast with linking words such as "when" and "but". Give a concise example of a difficult text versus an easy one.

示例: I read carefully when I come across unfamiliar or difficult material, such as technical articles, because I need to understand each point. But I skim simple or familiar texts, like news headlines or short messages, when I just want the main idea.

建议: This answer is unclear and contains errors and an irrelevant word ('Beethoven'). Choose either "scanning" or "detailed reading," state it clearly, then give specific reasons and an example. Keep to 1–3 sentences and use linking words like "because" and "for example."

示例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand difficult material and remember important details. For example, when I read scientific articles I read slowly and take notes so I don’t miss key points.

× Reading can make you restored and also reading can gain more knowledge and information on it.

✓ Reading can make you feel refreshed, and it can also help you gain more knowledge and information.

Pronoun and verb choice errors: 'make you restored' is incorrect because 'restored' is not used with 'make' this way; use 'feel refreshed'. 'gain more knowledge and information on it' misuses 'on it' and 'gain' needs a clear subject; replace with 'help you gain more knowledge and information'. Use parallel structure with 'and it can also'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I prefer reading on paper rather reading on screen because reading on paper can gain me analyze more and understand more after.

✓ I prefer reading on paper rather than reading on a screen because reading on paper helps me analyze more and understand things better afterwards.

Missing preposition 'than' after 'rather' and incorrect preposition 'on screen' should be 'on a screen'. 'can gain me analyze more' is ungrammatical; use 'helps me analyze more'. 'after' should be 'afterwards' or 'later'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I read carefully when the words I encounter is the first time that I read and hard to understand, and I'm not reading carefully when the word is common and understandable.

✓ I read carefully when the words I encounter are words I am reading for the first time and that are hard to understand, and I do not read carefully when the words are common and understandable.

Subject-verb agreement: 'the words ... is' should be 'the words ... are'. Mixed and unclear noun references: clarify 'first time that I read' to 'that I am reading for the first time'. Maintain consistent plural 'words' and plural verbs 'are'. Also use consistent phrasing for negative 'do not read'. Grammar problem type ID:27

× I prefer Beethoven because little readings and being more information and I can understand it directly to the point and also convene more knowledge I don't encounter before.

✓ I prefer skimming because the texts are short and give more information; I can understand them directly and also obtain knowledge I have not encountered before.

Multiple issues: 'Beethoven' is irrelevant and likely a wrong word; replace with 'skimming' or 'brief texts' depending on intended meaning. 'little readings' is ungrammatical—use 'short texts'. 'being more information' should be 'provide more information'. 'convene more knowledge' is incorrect verb choice; use 'obtain' or 'gain'. 'I don't encounter before' should be 'I have not encountered before' for correct tense. Pronoun/reference clarity improved. Grammar problem type ID:12