阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên và rõ ràng: loại bỏ tiếng ừ/à thừa, sửa ngữ pháp (thì, động từ), và trả lời trực tiếp trước khi mở rộng. Nên dùng tối đa 3–4 câu, nêu rõ sở thích hiện tại và so sánh với quá khứ với lý do cụ thể. Ví dụ: "I used to enjoy reading romantic novels and comics, but now I prefer listening to audiobooks on YouTube because it’s more convenient."

示例: I used to enjoy reading romantic novels and comics when I was younger. However, these days I prefer listening to audiobooks or audio content on YouTube because it saves time and I can do it while commuting.

建议: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và chính xác từ vựng: trả lời trực tiếp (paper or screen), giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể, tránh lỗi phát âm từ và dùng liên từ để liên kết ý. Tránh câu lặp và sai ngữ pháp. Ví dụ câu nên có 2-3 mệnh đề rõ ràng.

示例: I prefer reading on a screen rather than on paper because physical books can be heavy and hard to carry. Using a Kindle or tablet is easier and more convenient for me, especially when I want to adjust the font size or read in low light.

建议: Cải thiện sự rõ ràng và hoàn chỉnh của câu: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (khi nào đọc kỹ), sau đó nêu ví dụ cụ thể (thi, hợp đồng, hướng dẫn). Loại bỏ filler và hoàn thành ý. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối lí do và kết quả.

示例: I need to read carefully when I study for exams or when I read important instructions, such as contracts or technical manuals. For casual things like social media posts or short messages, I usually skim them quickly.

建议: Cải thiện độ chính xác và logic: trả lời trực tiếp (detailed or scanning), giải thích lý do rõ ràng với ví dụ cụ thể, dùng liên từ để làm mạch suy nghĩ. Tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu ngắn, rõ ràng (max 4 câu).

示例: I prefer detailed reading because I find it difficult to understand and remember information when I only scan a text. For example, when I study for exams I read each paragraph carefully and take notes to ensure I fully understand the material.

× MMM I used to like Pat to the way I was really fond of reading novels or umm, comics, umm, especially in the romantic fictions.

✓ I used to really enjoy reading novels and comics, especially romantic fiction.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('Pat to the way', 'romantic fictions') and incorrect structure. Simplify the sentence and use the uncountable noun 'fiction' without plural. Use 'enjoy reading' or 'was fond of reading' but not both together. Suggestion: remove filler words and unnecessary phrasing to make the sentence clear and grammatical.

× So I but now I'm prefer listening to the audios on YouTube.

✓ But now I prefer listening to audio on YouTube.

Use simple present 'prefer' to state a current habit; 'I'm prefer' is incorrect because 'prefer' is not used with progressive 'be' in this context. Use 'audio' (uncountable) or 'audio recordings'. Remove extra conjunctions and fillers.

× I would go to the screen like reading on the papers like I have to hold the wolf of the book.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen because holding paper books can be heavy.

The original mixes idiomatic and incorrect phrases ('would go to the screen like', 'the wolf of the book'). Replace with a clear cause-effect statement. Use 'prefer' for habitual preference and 'a screen'/'paper books' for clarity.

× So it's so heavy to me to read, to concentrate in reading.

✓ So it's too heavy for me to read and concentrate.

Use 'too heavy for me' rather than 'so heavy to me' and correct preposition 'for' instead of 'to'. Combine verbs correctly: 'to read and concentrate'. This improves naturalness and grammar.

× By the way, readings on like the Kindles are my own tablet is more easier than I can like.

✓ By the way, reading on my Kindle or tablet is easier for me.

Original sentence has pronoun and subject confusion and incorrect comparative form 'more easier'. Use 'easier' (not 'more easier') and possessive 'my Kindle or tablet'. Keep the subject and verb aligned.

× I only focus on reading. Why is in the crucial parts? Are it from the important part, uh, is maybe in my exams I have to read the test carefully, umm, to write down the answer, but uh, I, I don't.

✓ I only focus on reading in crucial parts, for example during exams when I have to read the test carefully to write down answers.

The original is fragmented and contains questions and pronoun errors. Combine ideas into one coherent sentence: state when you focus (crucial parts, exams) and why (to write answers). Remove fillers and incomplete clauses.

× Absolutely detail readings as I don't the as I don't as smart as reading the scan like scanning the passage for the first time and remember and like understand it all.

✓ I definitely prefer detailed reading because I am not good at scanning a passage and remembering everything from it.

Original has incorrect noun form 'detail readings' (should be 'detailed reading') and awkward comparative phrasing. Use 'prefer' and 'not good at' to express inability. 'Scanning' is the noun/gerund; use 'a passage' and 'remember everything from it' for clarity.

× So I prefer reading a like a detailed passage because it's helped me to in like understand more about this.

✓ So I prefer reading detailed passages because it helps me understand more about the topic.

Use present simple 'helps' to indicate habitual result (fits the question context). Remove fillers ('a like a', 'in like') and use plural 'passages' or keep singular consistently. Replace 'this' with 'the topic' for clarity.