阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn về loại sách bạn thích và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp/thuật ngữ không chính xác. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (tác giả, thể loại, lý do) và một ví dụ liên quan. Chú ý dùng từ đúng (ví dụ: "read novels and the Bible" thay vì "novel comedies and use Bible") và tránh kết hợp hai ý không liên quan trong một câu.

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me learn new things and understand other cultures. I often read contemporary novels and the Bible; for example, I recently read a novel by Haruki Murakami that gave me insight into Japanese society.

建议: Câu trả lời hiện tại thiếu rõ ràng và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý khó hiểu. Nên nêu rõ lựa chọn (screen or paper), đưa lý do cụ thể (portability, adjustable font, comfort) và một điều kiện đối lập (ví dụ: thích giấy khi đọc trước ngủ). Tránh dịch trực tiếp tiếng Việt và sửa cấu trúc câu để mạch lạc.

示例: I prefer reading on a screen because I can adjust the font size and carry many books on my tablet. However, I prefer paper books when I read in bed because bright screens strain my eyes.

建议: Ý chính tốt nhưng cần dùng từ chính xác và ví dụ cụ thể. Thay "comedy, novel and Sagittarius" bằng "comic books, novels, or light fiction". Trình bày một câu chủ đề rồi nêu ví dụ cụ thể về khi cần đọc kỹ (hợp đồng, hướng dẫn học) và khi có thể đọc lướt. Dùng liên từ như "however" để rõ ràng hơn.

示例: I read carefully when the information affects my work or studies, for example contracts or technical instructions. However, I don't read carefully when I'm enjoying light fiction or comic books because they are for entertainment.

建议: Câu trả lời chứa nhiều lỗi và từ sai ("dishonor reading"). Bạn nên nói rõ bạn thích đọc kĩ hay đọc lướt, giải thích lý do với ví dụ thực tế (ví dụ: đọc chi tiết cho báo cáo, đọc lướt để tìm thông tin). Giữ câu ngắn, mạch lạc và dùng linking word như "because" hoặc "so".

示例: I prefer detailed reading because my work and studies require accuracy; for example, I read reports and official documents carefully to avoid mistakes.

× For example, I usually read novel comedies and use Bible.

✓ For example, I usually read comic novels and the Bible.

The original sentence has incorrect noun order and missing article. 'Novel comedies' is not a natural noun phrase in English; 'comic novels' or 'novels and comedies' is correct. 'Bible' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the book. Suggestion: reorder nouns to 'comic novels' or separate into 'novels and comedies' and add 'the' before 'Bible'.

× I prefer to read on the screen bigger.

✓ I prefer to read on a larger screen.

The adjective 'bigger' should modify 'screen' directly and 'larger screen' is more natural. Also add the article 'a' before the noun. Suggestion: use adjective before noun and include the article: 'on a larger screen'.

× I will study anytime if I have Internet.

✓ I will study at any time if I have Internet access.

Use the expression 'at any time' rather than 'anytime' in this conditional sentence for clarity. Also 'Internet' is usually paired with 'access' when referring to availability. Suggestion: say 'at any time' and add 'access'.

× However, if in bed eyesight to this deep light.

✓ However, if I read in bed with very bright light, my eyesight is affected.

The original is ungrammatical and missing subject and verbs. Rephrase to include subject 'I' and a verb like 'read' and express cause: 'with very bright light' and 'my eyesight is affected' or 'it hurts my eyes'. Suggestion: form a complete clause with subject and verb and use correct preposition 'in bed' and 'with'.

× I need to read carefully when the information is important because it is necessary in study or work.

✓ I need to read carefully when the information is important because it is necessary for study or work.

Use the preposition 'for' to indicate purpose ('necessary for study or work'). 'In study' is incorrect. Suggestion: use 'for' to connect 'necessary' with the activity.

× However, I don't need to read carefully in comedy, novel and Sagittarius.

✓ However, I don't need to read carefully in comedies, novels, and magazines (or astrology sections).

The original lists nouns incorrectly and 'Sagittarius' (a zodiac sign) is not appropriate here; likely the student meant 'magazines' or 'horoscopes'. Use plural forms for general categories and include commas and 'and'. Suggestion: replace 'Sagittarius' with the intended word and use plural forms: 'comedies, novels, and magazines'.

× I prefer dishonor reading because it has be developed careful in my work or study more effort.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it needs to be done carefully in my work or study and requires more effort.

'Dishonor reading' is incorrect; likely meant 'detailed reading'. 'Has be developed careful' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is 'needs to be done carefully' or 'should be done carefully'. Use 'requires more effort' rather than 'more effort' alone. Suggestion: use 'detailed reading', use passive 'needs to be done carefully' or active 'I need to read carefully', and 'requires more effort'.

× I understand important document and avoid mistakes.

✓ I can understand important documents and avoid mistakes.

Add modal 'can' to indicate ability, pluralize 'documents', and match verb forms. Suggestion: use 'can understand' and plural 'documents' to speak generally.