阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Улучшите беглость и точность: устраните повторы и междометия (umm, uh), уточните слова (non faction → nonfiction), и используйте короткие связные предложения. Дайте более чёткую структуру: тема → причина → пример. Также избегайте грамматических ошибок (например, артикли и согласование).

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and learn new things. For example, in the evenings I often read books on physiology and marketing. I also read nonfiction when I want practical advice.

建议: Сделайте высказывание более естественным и точным: избегайте ошибок слов (sow → show/see) и общих фраз. Объясните причину конкретнее и дайте одно короткое примечание о преимуществах экрана для баланса. Используйте связку причинно-следственного характера.

示例: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and I can easily mark important phrases. However, I sometimes use a screen for convenience when travelling.

建议: Улучшите ясность и грамматику: сформулируйте чёткое противопоставление (когда нужно читать внимательно и когда нет). Уберите слова-паразиты и исправьте артикли и порядок слов. Приводите конкретные примеры (экзамены, инструкции) и кратко объясняйте почему.

示例: I need to read carefully when the information is important, for example for exams or official instructions, because I must understand details. For simple messages or casual browsing I usually scan quickly.

建议: Сделайте ответ более связным и избавьтесь от неуверенных вставок (uh, umm). Чётко объясните оба варианта и используйте связующие слова (first, however, because). Дайте конкретную причину для детального чтения (понимание терминов, произношение не нужно в чтении вслух — лучше сказать «meaning and details»).

示例: I usually scan first to get the main idea quickly. However, when the topic is important or contains difficult terms, I read in detail to understand the meaning and nuances.

× I prefer to read on a paper because when you read on the paper, you feel and you sow and then you can search the phrases in the books.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because when you read a paper, you can feel the pages and then you can search for phrases in the book.

The student used incorrect adjectives/adverbs and some word choices. 'on a paper' is unnatural; use 'on paper' or 'a paper' depending on meaning. 'you feel and you sow' are wrong word choices; likely meant 'feel the pages'. Use 'search for phrases' and singular 'book' or 'books' consistently. Improve by choosing correct nouns and verbs and using appropriate prepositions.

× For example, I often umm read the Physiology and uh business in the marketing umm books in the evening.

✓ For example, I often read physiology and marketing or business books in the evening.

The sentence has disfluent fillers and incorrect word order. 'read the Physiology and uh business in the marketing books' is confusing. Remove fillers and reorder to 'read physiology and marketing or business books'. Maintain parallel noun phrases and lower-case common nouns.

× I'm also non faction when I want practical knowledge and.

✓ I'm also into non-fiction when I want practical knowledge.

The student used incorrect word form 'non faction' instead of 'non-fiction' and left the sentence incomplete. 'into non-fiction' is the correct collocation. Finish the thought to be grammatical.

× I need to read carefully when I the information is important for me and that's information for about my exams.

✓ I need to read carefully when the information is important to me, for example for my exams.

Extra or misplaced words ('I the information', 'that's information for about') disrupt present tense clause. Use 'when the information is important to me' and 'for example for my exams' to express reason. Keep present simple for general truth.

× I think at this moment I read the carefully and then when I mass now the instruction and the the maybe the for example.

✓ I think at that moment I read carefully, especially when I study instructions or example tasks.

This fragment is ungrammatical and contains repetitions and unclear words ('mass now', repeated 'the'). Clarify intent: 'at that moment' (or 'then') and use 'read carefully' without 'the'. Specify objects like 'instructions' or 'example tasks' for clarity.

× I prefer scanning when I first push the text to get the main idea quickly.

✓ I prefer scanning when I first look at the text to get the main idea quickly.

The verb 'push' is incorrect here; 'look at' or 'scan' is appropriate. Also 'I first look at the text' keeps pronoun use and meaning correct. Replace incorrect verb with proper action.

× But uh, sometimes I prefer the detailed reading because it's so important for you.

✓ But sometimes I prefer detailed reading because it's very important for me.

'the detailed reading' is unnatural; use 'detailed reading' or 'a detailed reading'. 'for you' is incorrect perspective; student should use 'for me'. Also replace vague 'so' with 'very' for formality.

× Because when you read, you focus it and you understand the words, how to pronunciation, the how to know how to umm.

✓ Because when you read, you focus on it and you understand words, their pronunciation, and how to use them.

Missing preposition 'on' after 'focus'. 'how to pronunciation' is incorrect; use 'their pronunciation' or 'how to pronounce them'. Complete the list with 'and how to use them' for clarity.