阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 答えは内容的に良いですが、時制の誤り、冗長な表現、論理のつながりに改善が必要です。具体的には現在の好みを述べるときは現在形を使い、短く明確なトピックセンテンス（例：Yes, I enjoy reading。）を置いてから補足理由を2文程度で述べてください。接続詞（because, so, whichなど）を使って文の流れを滑らかにし、想像の説明は簡潔にまとめると良いです。

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I find that books broaden my perspective and introduce me to different cultures, which inspires ideas for trips. For example, reading travel essays often helps me imagine what it would be like to visit a place.

建议: 文法と語順の修正が必要です（主語+動詞の一致、正しい表現）。理由は具体的で良いので、接続詞を使い1〜2文でまとめ、より自然な語句（search for words, scroll without moving my eyes）に直してください。

示例: I prefer reading on a screen because I can quickly search for specific words and use the search function. Also, scrolling makes it easier to navigate pages without constantly moving my eyes between the page and a device.

建议: 回答が断片的で意図が不明瞭です。まず直接的なトピックセンテンス（When I need to read carefully: formal or professional documents）を述べ、理由を明確にし、日常的にはざっと読む場合があることを対比で示してください。また文法（主語や目的語）と語順を整え、冗長表現を避けてください。

示例: I need to read carefully when I handle formal documents or work-related reports because accuracy and honesty are essential in PR. In contrast, I skim casual articles or emails when I only need the main idea.

建议: 答えは意図が伝わりますが、口癖（uh）が多く冗長です。最初に明確な好みを示し（I prefer scanning）, その後に理由を1〜2文で述べ、接続詞（so, therefore）を使って論理をつなぎ、具体例を短く加えるとより効果的です。

示例: I prefer scanning documents because it helps me grasp the overall structure and main points quickly, so I can decide which sections need detailed reading later. For instance, I usually scan an article to find the key arguments before reading paragraphs in depth.

× Yes, I liked reading.

✓ Yes, I like reading.

The student used past tense 'liked' but is stating a general preference. Use present simple 'like' for habitual or general facts (I like reading). Change to present tense to match the ongoing habit. Suggestion: Use present simple for likes and habits (I like, He loves).

× Reading books broadens my perspective and gives me new ideas about different places and cultures, so it often helps me plan trips and imagine while visiting those places would be like.

✓ Reading books broadens my perspective and gives me new ideas about different places and cultures, so it often helps me plan trips and imagine what it would be like to visit those places.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and a missing clause connector: 'imagine while visiting those places would be like' is ungrammatical. Use 'imagine what it would be like to visit those places' to form a correct noun clause. Also maintain parallel structure and clear connectors. Suggestion: Use 'imagine what it would be like to...' for imagining experiences and keep clauses parallel.

× I prefer read on screen because I can search specific words with searching window and I can scroll it without moving my eye.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen because I can search for specific words with a search window and I can scroll without moving my eyes.

After 'prefer' use gerund 'reading' not bare infinitive 'read'. Also use 'search for' and 'a search window' (article). 'Scroll it without moving my eye' is unnatural: 'scroll without moving my eyes' is correct and plural. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' + gerund; use 'search for' and correct articles and plural nouns for body parts when general.

× If I have to. Ensure their accuracy and honesty on the document highly carefully.

✓ If I have to, I ensure the accuracy and honesty of the document very carefully.

Original fragments and punctuation create sentence fragments. Combine into one sentence: 'If I have to, I ensure the accuracy and honesty of the document very carefully.' Use 'ensure the accuracy and honesty of the document' for correct noun phrase order and use 'very' instead of 'highly' before 'carefully'. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments; connect clauses and use correct collocations: 'ensure the accuracy of the document'. Also place adverbs ('very carefully') after the verb phrase.

× The contents of the paper especially improve my PR professional perspective.

✓ The contents of the paper especially improve my perspective as a PR professional.

Word order and article use: 'PR professional perspective' is awkward. Use 'my perspective as a PR professional' to show role. 'The contents of the paper' is acceptable but rephrasing clarifies meaning. Suggestion: Use 'my perspective as a [profession]' to indicate viewpoint related to a role.

× I should read carefully.

✓ I should read carefully.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Should' expresses obligation or recommendation. No change needed. Suggestion: Keep 'should' to indicate a duty or recommendation; you can add context if needed (e.g., 'I should read it carefully').

× I often read sentences and documents uh, especially using the skill of scanning, uh, scanning the document, I can easily understand the whole uh structure and contents before looking at details.

✓ I often read sentences and documents using the skill of scanning. By scanning the document, I can easily understand the overall structure and content before looking at details.

Original has fillers 'uh' and comma splices. Break into two sentences: one stating the habit and one explaining the result. Use 'overall structure and content' (content uncountable) and 'By scanning...' to show cause. Remove fillers. Suggestion: Remove filler words and avoid comma splices; use 'By + -ing' or separate sentences to show purpose/result and use 'content' rather than 'contents' when speaking generally.