爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevap doğal ama dağınık ve tamamlanmamış. Konu cümlesi var ancak cümleler fazla uzun ve bazı ifadeler hatalı ("reading book", "playing games", "etc") ve cümle bitmemiş. Bağlaçlar veya bağlantı ifadeleri az; daha spesifik sebepler ve kısa örnekler ekleyin. Maksimum 3–4 kısa cümle kullanın, "because" ile nedeninizi tamamlayın ve kelime seçimlerine dikkat edin.

示例: I enjoy several hobbies, such as basketball, tennis and swimming. I especially play basketball because it keeps me fit and helps me relieve stress after school. I also like reading novels in my free time because they help me relax.

建议: Cevapta dilbilgisi ve zaman kullanımı hataları göze çarpıyor ("When I was a chess", karışık zamanlar). Cümleler kopuk; bağlantı sözcükleri eksik. Geçmişten bahsederken geçmiş zamanı tutarlı kullanın ve birkaç kısa destekleyici detay verin (nerede öğrendiniz, neden bıraktınız). Online platform adını doğru ve akıcı söyleyin.

示例: I used to play chess a lot when I was a child. I learned it at a chess club and played regularly with my friends. These days I don't play as often, but I sometimes play online on a chess website to keep practicing.

建议: Cümlelerde kelime seçimi ve zaman hataları var ("ride bicycle", "torque wheeler", "writing it normal"). Sayıları ve süreçleri anlatırken daha net ve doğru kelimeler kullanın: "ride a bicycle", "training wheels", "four-wheeler" (eğer kastettiğiniz ATVs, değilse termi düzeltin). Ayrıca üç kısa cümleyle başlangıç yaşı, nasıl öğrendiğiniz ve bugün ne yaptığınıza değinin.

示例: Yes, I've been riding a bicycle since I was about five years old. At first I used training wheels, then I learned to ride without them. Now I ride a normal bicycle regularly for exercise and fun.

建议: Cevap akışı ve dilbilgisi zayıf; negatif yapı ve zamanlar hatalı. Net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın ("Not really"), sonra aile üyeleriyle hangi hobileri paylaştığınızı ve sıklığını belirtin. Gereksiz ifadeleri ("to be honest that's all I guess") çıkarın. Bağlaçlarla cümleleri düzenleyin.

示例: Not really. My parents don't have many hobbies, but my sister and I play tennis regularly. We usually play twice a week, which helps us stay active and spend time together.

× I have plenty of hobbies like basketball, tennis, volleyball, swimming, reading book, playing games, etc especially I play basketball because it keeps me

✓ I have plenty of hobbies like basketball, tennis, volleyball, swimming, reading books, and playing games; especially, I play basketball because it keeps me fit.

The phrase 'reading book' needs plural 'books' (Article errors / singular and plural). 'etc' should be followed by a comma and sentence needs completion; add conjunctions for a natural list and a final adjective 'fit'. Use of punctuation improves clarity.

× When I was a chess, I was playing chess nowadays I don't usually play chess. I was going to chess course and I learned it from there. I was playing with my friends and I also play online from chessnook. com.

✓ When I was a child, I used to play chess, but nowadays I don't usually play. I used to go to a chess course and I learned it there. I played with my friends and I also play online on chessnook.com.

'When I was a chess' is incorrect; should be 'When I was a child' (pronoun/noun misuse). Use 'used to' for past habitual actions instead of continuous past in this context. 'Go to a chess course' requires article 'a'. Preposition for websites is 'on'. Remove unnecessary repetition for clarity.

× When I was a chess, I was playing chess nowadays I don't usually play chess.

✓ When I was a child, I used to play chess; nowadays I don't usually play chess.

Mixing past continuous with present adverb 'nowadays' causes tense inconsistency. Use 'used to' or simple past for past habits. Also correct noun 'child'.

× I was going to chess course and I learned it from there.

✓ I used to go to a chess course and I learned it there.

Use 'go to a course' with preposition 'to' and include article 'a'. 'From there' is awkward; 'there' is sufficient. Use 'used to' for past habitual action.

× I also play online from chessnook. com.

✓ I also play online on chessnook.com.

The correct preposition for playing on a website is 'on', not 'from'. Remove space in web address.

× Yes, I ride bicycle from approximately five years old.

✓ Yes, I have ridden a bicycle since I was approximately five years old.

Use 'since' with a starting point and present perfect 'have ridden' to indicate an action that began in the past and continues. Include article 'a' before 'bicycle'.

× I started with a torque wheeler then I passed a four wheeler and I get back to and now I'm writing it normal.

✓ I started with a two-wheeler, then I moved on to a four-wheeler, and now I ride a regular bicycle.

Several issues: 'torque wheeler' is incorrect; likely 'two-wheeler'. Use 'moved on to' for progression. 'I get back to' is wrong tense and phrasing. 'I'm writing it normal' is unclear; correct to 'I ride a regular bicycle'. Use simple past for past actions and present simple for current habitual action.

× Not exactly my parents not making so much hobbies but my sister and I were playing tennis regularly or it to be honest that's all I guess.

✓ Not exactly; my parents don't have many hobbies, but my sister and I play tennis regularly. To be honest, that's all, I guess.

Run-on sentence with double negatives and incorrect verb forms. Use 'don't have many hobbies' for present negative, 'play tennis regularly' for current habit, and punctuation to separate ideas. 'So much hobbies' should be 'many hobbies' (quantifier correction).