爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise supporting detail. Use linking words briefly to connect ideas (e.g., "because" or "so"). Avoid repeating similar phrases like "relax myself" and "switch off" together; choose one. Also keep answers under five sentences.

示例: I enjoy playing badminton, especially in the late afternoon or evening. I usually play with friends because it helps me relax after studying and clear my mind.

建议: Fix tense and clarity. Use past tense for childhood and a simple, specific reason. Avoid awkward phrasing like "getting interaction with the water." Keep it one or two clear sentences and use a linking word such as "because" to explain why.

示例: Yes, I used to swim when I was a child because I enjoyed being in the water and it made me feel free and energetic.

建议: Be direct and correct verb forms. Use present perfect or present simple to explain a long-term hobby. Clarify reasons with specific details and avoid unclear phrases like "release my pleasure." Mention when you play (e.g., "in the evenings") and one clear benefit.

示例: Yes, I have played badminton since childhood. It is calming and enjoyable, and I like playing with friends in the evenings because it helps me unwind.

建议: Correct grammar, avoid contradictions, and be specific about the effect on your relationship. Use linking words (e.g., "so", "which") to connect ideas. Replace incorrect phrases like "more bad" with "closer" or "better." Keep it concise and natural.

示例: Yes, my brother also loves playing badminton. When he is free we often play together, which has made our relationship stronger.

× I like to playing badminton, especially in the afternoon or during the evening with my friends because I found out that it really helped me to relax myself and switch off from studying.

✓ I like playing badminton, especially in the afternoon or evening with my friends because I found that it really helps me relax and switch off from studying.

The verb after 'like' should be the -ing form (gerund) or the infinitive without 'to', so 'I like playing' is correct; 'to playing' is incorrect. 'Found out' is for discovering facts; use 'found' or 'have found' for personal realization. 'Helped me' implies past; keep present 'helps me' to match habit. 'Relax myself' is unnatural in English; use 'relax'. Remove redundant 'during' before 'evening' and simplify 'switch off from studying'. Suggestion: use 'I like playing... because I have found/ found that it really helps me relax and switch off from studying.'

× I usually swim since I was little because I enjoy when swimming in a water in a sense of getting interaction with the water and I find found out.

✓ I have usually swum/ I have usually been swimming since I was little because I enjoy swimming in the water and feel connected to it.

Use present perfect (have swum / have been swimming) with 'since' + past time to show an action that started in the past and continues. 'I enjoy when swimming in a water' is ungrammatical: use 'I enjoy swimming in the water' or 'I enjoy being in the water.' 'I find found out' mixes tenses and forms; use 'feel' or 'have found' depending on meaning. Suggestion: 'I have enjoyed swimming since I was little because I enjoy being in the water and feel connected to it.'

× I think it will probably playing badminton because this activity is quite calming and also I can release my pleasure and playing with friends in the night.

✓ I think it will probably be playing badminton because this activity is quite calming, and I can relax and play with friends at night.

After 'will probably' use the base verb or 'be' + -ing for future continuous: 'will probably be playing' or simpler 'will probably play'. The phrase 'release my pleasure' is incorrect; use 'relax' or 'release tension'. 'Playing with friends in the night' should be 'play with friends at night.' Suggestion: choose either 'I will probably play badminton' or 'I will probably be playing badminton.'

× Yes of course, my brother also love to playing play badminton. So when he he's free we tend to playing. We tend to play badminton together then this can makes our relationship more bad.

✓ Yes, of course. My brother also loves playing badminton. So when he is free we tend to play. Playing badminton together has improved our relationship.

Pronoun and subject-verb agreement: 'my brother also love' should be 'loves' for third person singular. Use gerund 'playing' after 'loves' not 'to playing'. 'He he's' is redundant; use 'he is' or 'he's'. 'We tend to playing' should be 'we tend to play' (infinitive after 'tend to'). 'Can makes' mixes modal and verb agreement; use 'has improved' or 'improves' to express result. 'More bad' is incorrect comparative; use 'worse' or better: 'improved' if positive. Suggestion: 'Playing badminton together has improved our relationship.'