爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 注意语法和用词准确性，回答要更自然连贯。句子数量不宜过多且要有主题句和支持细节。把“sport”改为“play sports/ do sports”，并用连接词衔接两部分，例如“also”。同时补充具体细节（什么时候、多久、原因）。

示例: I have several hobbies. I often play badminton with a friend in the school gym twice a week because it keeps me fit and is fun. I also like watching short videos online in my free time, especially funny clips and cooking tutorials.

建议: 注意时态和语法（儿童时用过去时），简化并使表达更具体。把“do sport in outdoor”改为“play outdoor games”或“exercise outdoors”；“dancing with my grandparents”要说明频率或原因；删除不清楚的句子并用连词如“so”连接理由。

示例: Yes, when I was a child I used to play outdoors in the park almost every day. I also enjoyed dancing with my grandparents because they often danced in the evenings, so I would join them and have a lot of fun.

建议: 保持时态一致并使用更准确的表达。避免语义模糊（例如“worry like it”），用清晰原因解释变化。可用连接词如“however”“because”来组织对比。

示例: Yes, I have played badminton since childhood and I still enjoy it now. At first I disliked it because it seemed difficult and I found sports boring; however, I gradually improved and now I like it because it helps my fitness and I enjoy the challenge.

建议: 改善句子结构和用词，使用更自然的表达并补充细节（什么时候、看什么类型的视频、一起做什么）。避免语法错误如“enjoy watch we do together”。使用连接词比如“so”或“because”。

示例: Yes, my family and I share hobbies. We often watch short videos together in our free time, especially comedy clips and travel vlogs, because they help us relax and laugh together.

× First, I like to sport in the school.

✓ First, I like to do sports at school.

原句中“like to sport”搭配不正确，英文常用短语是“do sports”或“play sports”。另外介词应为“at school”表示在学校场所而不是“in the school”。建议记住常见搭配：do sports / play sports, 并使用正确介词：at school。

× I play badminton with my friend in school gym.

✓ I play badminton with my friend in the school gym.

原句缺少限定词“the”来修饰特定的“school gym”。在英语中可数名词前若指特定场所通常要用冠词。建议在类似情形中使用适当冠词（the/a）。

× Second, I always use website to watch short videos.

✓ Second, I always use a website to watch short videos.

“website”是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词“a”或指明特定网站用“the”。原句缺少冠词导致不自然。建议根据语境加上冠词或复数形式（use websites）。

× Yes, when I was a child I do sport in outdoor in the park.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I did sports outdoors in the park.

句子描述过去情况，应使用过去式“did”。此外“outdoor”应为副词“outdoors”，并且“sport”在此用复数“sports”更自然。建议把动作改为过去时并修正词性。

× I like to dancing with my grandparents.

✓ I liked dancing with my grandparents.

在描述过去习惯时需用过去式“liked”。另外“like to dancing”中动词形式错误，若用“like”后接动名词应为“like dancing”；结合过去时改为“liked dancing”。建议学习“like + -ing”结构和时态一致性。

× My grandma like dancing at the night so I usually keep.

✓ My grandma liked dancing at night, so I usually stayed with her.

“grandma”为第三人称单数，动词应为“likes/liked”；句子谈过去应用过去式“liked”。“at the night”不正确，应为“at night”。“so I usually keep”不完整且用词不当，应改为“so I usually stayed with her”（表示我通常陪着她）。建议注意三单形式、固定时间表达（at night）和动词意图的完整表达。

× When I was a child I liked playing badminton and I still enjoy it now.

✓ When I was a child I liked playing badminton, and I still enjoy it now.

句子中语法问题较轻，主要是标点与连接词使用。将两个并列分句用逗号和连词连接更自然。时态保持一致（过去喜好与现在仍然喜欢）是正确的。建议注意标点以提高可读性。

× At first I didn't like it because it is quite difficult for me and I think sport is boring.

✓ At first I didn't like it because it was quite difficult for me and I thought sports were boring.

描述过去经历时应将后半句也用过去时：“it was”而不是“it is”；“I think”改为过去“I thought”。“sport”在此应用复数“sports”或用不可数且结构调整。建议保持时态一致（整个叙述过去经历用过去时）。

× But now I worry like it because it's better with our body.

✓ But now I really like it because it's better for our bodies.

原句有多处错误："worry like"不是正确表达，应为"really like"或"now I like it"；“better with our body”搭配错误，应为“better for our bodies”。建议使用正确副词（really）表达程度，并用“better for”表目的/益处，注意复数“bodies”。

× Yes, my family and I enjoy watch we do together.

✓ Yes, my family and I enjoy watching things we do together.

动词“enjoy”后应接动名词“watching”而不是动词原形“watch”。此外原句结构不完整，改为“watching things we do together”更通顺。建议记住“enjoy + -ing”结构。

× We often watch the short videos on free time.

✓ We often watch short videos in our free time.

固定表达是“in (one's) free time”，而不是“on free time”。通常不需要“the short videos”，可直接说“short videos”。建议记住固定搭配“in free time/in my free time”。

× It helps us relax and spend time together. It is funny.

✓ It helps us relax and spend time together. It's fun.

“funny”表示“滑稽的、好笑的”，而“有趣的/好玩的”应使用“fun”。因此把“funny”改为“fun”。建议区分“funny”和“fun”的用法。