爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and concise: state your hobby clearly in one topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid hesitation filler words (uh, um) and grammatical errors (singular/plural, articles). Also keep sentences within 3–4 short sentences.

示例: I enjoy several hobbies, but my main one is reading. For example, on Saturdays I like to relax with a novel because it helps me unwind and forget about the week's stress. I also sometimes go for short walks afterward to clear my head.

建议: Answer directly with a clear past-tense statement about childhood hobbies; avoid confusing age references. Use linking words (for example, when I was...) and provide specific examples (what you did, how often). Correct grammar: 'I had a hobby' not 'I have a hobbies.' Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Yes, I had several hobbies as a child. For example, from about six or seven years old I loved drawing and painting, and I also tried roller skating for a while when I was a teenager.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence confirming the long-term hobby, then add specific details: when you started, why you kept it, and how often you practice. Use linking words (since, when, because) and correct grammar (e.g., 'since I was four or five'). Limit to 2–3 concise sentences and avoid fillers.

示例: Yes, I have painted and drawn since I was about four or five years old. I kept this hobby because it helps me relax, and I still draw sometimes when I have free time, especially on weekends.

建议: Give a clear direct answer (Yes or No), then explain briefly with a specific reason and an example. Use correct grammar and avoid repetitions. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to connect ideas. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

示例: No, we do not share the same hobbies. Because each family member has different tastes, for example my sister enjoys gardening while I prefer drawing, so we each spend free time on different activities.

× Yes I do have a hobbies, it depends on my mood what type of hobbies I like to choose.

✓ Yes, I do have hobbies; it depends on my mood which hobbies I choose.

The noun 'hobbies' is plural, so the article 'a' is incorrect. Also 'what type of hobbies I like to choose' is awkward; use 'which hobbies I choose' for clarity. Suggestion: remove 'a' before 'hobbies' and rephrase for natural word order.

× Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?

✓ Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?

This sentence is already correct in past tense; no grammatical change needed. Keep the past simple 'did' with the base verb 'have' to ask about past habits.

× Of course, uh, yes, I have a hobbies when I was child, since I was a child and and the age of 19, I have a hobby of doing skates at the age of umm, at the age of UH67, uh, 6, maybe 6-7, uh, in that age I like doing drawings, paintings.

✓ Of course, yes, I had hobbies when I was a child. Since I was around six or seven, I liked drawing and painting. At age 19, I took up skating as a hobby.

Multiple issues: 'have a hobbies' mixes singular article with plural noun (use 'had hobbies' for past), 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a', and tense inconsistency between past and present. Also unclear age 'UH67' seems erroneous; interpreted as 'six or seven'. Suggestions: use past tense 'had' for childhood, use 'a child', use plural/singular consistently ('hobbies' or 'a hobby'), and split into clear sentences for each time period.

× Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

✓ Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

This question is grammatically correct: present perfect 'you've had' properly asks about a hobby continuing from childhood.

× Yes, I do have since childhood, I was uh, good at my drawings and paintings. Uh, from the ease of like 4-5, uh, from the ease of 4/5. I have a hobby of doing painting and drawing and I also do sometimes when I, when I'm free.

✓ Yes, I have had it since childhood. I was good at drawing and painting from about age four or five. I enjoy painting and drawing and do them sometimes when I'm free.

Problems: 'do have since childhood' mixes forms; use 'have had' for continuity. 'Good at my drawings' wrongly uses possessive; use 'good at drawing'. 'From the ease' is incorrect word choice; should be 'from about age' or 'from around age'. 'A hobby of doing painting' uses article incorrectly and awkward phrasing; use 'enjoy painting and drawing'. Suggestions: use 'have had' for long-standing activities, use 'drawing' not 'my drawings', and use 'about age four or five'.

× Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

✓ Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

This question is already correct. Pronoun usage is appropriate ('your family members'). No change needed.

× Or not by sewer. But my family don't have your own hobbies like same hobbies cause because we all have different kind of modes and different kind of hobbies. So we we have we don't have same kind of hobbies.

✓ No. My family don't have the same hobbies as me because we all have different interests and different kinds of hobbies.

Many errors: 'Or not by sewer' is unintelligible and was replaced with a clear refusal. 'My family don't have your own hobbies' has wrong pronouns and subject-verb agreement; use 'my family don't' or better 'my family doesn't' depending on variety, but to keep meaning, 'my family don't have the same hobbies as me' is clear. 'cause because' is redundant; choose 'because'. 'Different kind of modes' is incorrect word choice; 'interests' or 'modes' is unnatural—use 'interests'. Redundant fragments 'So we we have we don't have' removed. Suggestions: use clear subject-pronoun pairs, avoid redundancy, and choose appropriate nouns like 'interests' or 'hobbies'.