爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the answer grammatically correct and more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and agreement (e.g., "keeps" → "keep", "improve" → "improves" or change subject).

示例: Yes, I enjoy playing basketball with my friends. We usually play on Saturday nights, which helps me stay fit and improves my social life because we get to catch up and work together during games.

建议: Use past tense for childhood activities and correct grammar. Give a clear topic sentence and one specific detail about frequency or why you liked them, using a linking word for coherence.

示例: Yes, I had several hobbies as a child. For example, I played basketball and computer games with my friends after school, and these activities helped me make friends and learn teamwork.

建议: Answer clearly using present perfect or present simple to show continuity, correct grammar (word order, verb forms), and be specific about duration and effects. Use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I have kept a hobby from childhood: playing computer games with my friends. We usually play for two to three hours after school, which has helped us stay close and improved our communication skills.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and correct sentence structure. Use singular/plural and verb forms correctly, and provide a specific reason or example of how sharing hobbies benefits your relationship using linking words.

示例: Yes, my brother and I share the same hobby of playing computer games together. For instance, we often cooperate in team games, which strengthens our bond and teaches us how to work as a team.

× We usually play on Saturday nights which keeps me healthy and improve my social life.

✓ We usually play on Saturday nights, which keeps me healthy and improves my social life.

Subject-verb agreement in relative clause: 'which' refers to playing (singular activity), so verbs should be singular present: 'keeps' and 'improves'. Also add a comma before 'which' to join clauses correctly.

× Yes, I have a hobbies.

✓ Yes, I have hobbies.

Incorrect use of article 'a' with plural noun 'hobbies'. Remove 'a' when using plural nouns: 'I have hobbies.' Alternatively use singular: 'I have a hobby.'

× I play basketball and computer games with my friends and I enjoy it with social life.

✓ I play basketball and computer games with my friends, and I enjoy how they help my social life.

Awkward phrasing and tense: keep present tense 'play' and 'enjoy'. Replace 'it with social life' with a clear clause showing how activities affect social life: 'they help my social life.' Also add a comma before 'and' to join independent clauses.

× Yes, I'm playing with my childhood friends and I.

✓ Yes, I play with my childhood friends.

Incorrect progressive form and redundant 'and I'. For habitual activities use simple present 'I play'. Remove the unnecessary 'and I' which makes the sentence ungrammatical.

× We play computer games after school two to three hours and keeps me helps us socialize.

✓ We play computer games after school for two to three hours, and it helps us socialize.

Use simple present 'play' for habitual action. Add preposition 'for' before duration. Replace incorrect verb forms 'keeps me helps us' with 'it helps us' so subject 'it' (playing) agrees with singular verb 'helps'. Add comma before conjunction joining clauses.

× Yes, my brother and I, we play together a computer games and we enjoy it because help us to improves our social lives and as a teamwork.

✓ Yes, my brother and I play computer games together, and we enjoy them because they help us improve our social lives and our teamwork.

Remove redundant subject repetition ('my brother and I, we'). Use correct article/number: 'computer games' (no 'a'). Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'games'. Use 'they help us improve' (present tense, correct verb form) instead of 'help us to improves'. Clarify 'as a teamwork' to 'our teamwork'. Add comma before 'and' to join clauses.