爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, phát âm và độ mạch lạc của câu. Tránh lặp từ (ví dụ “him him”), dùng thì đúng (enjoy + -ing), và sửa cấu trúc không tự nhiên (“Music like leave my mood”). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (lý do, tần suất, người cùng chơi). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản như “because”, “so”, “and” để mạch lạc.

示例: I have several hobbies. I enjoy watching films and listening to music because they help me relax, and I play badminton about twice a week to keep fit. I usually play badminton with my friends at the local sports center.

建议: Cần sử dụng thì quá khứ khi nói về thời thơ ấu và nói đầy đủ câu. Tránh lặp và hoàn thành ý (ví dụ “watching cartoons”). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề đơn giản ở quá khứ, sau đó nêu ví dụ cụ thể hoặc lý do bạn thích chúng.

示例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I liked watching cartoons and playing simple games. I often watched cartoons on TV after school because they were fun and colourful.

建议: Cần dùng thì hoàn chỉnh và số từ chính xác (no “2 hoots”). Dùng thì hiện hoàn thành cho việc bắt đầu trong quá khứ và tiếp tục tới hiện tại nếu phù hợp (have had). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (I start -> I started; give -> gave). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn thực hành hay cử chỉ liên quan để làm câu tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I have. I have enjoyed drawing and singing since I was a child. I started drawing when I was about five because my mother gave me some crayons, and I still draw occasionally now.

建议: Cần nói rõ hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp với số nhiều/số ít (my mother plays). Tránh tiếng ồ ăm (umm) quá nhiều. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi nêu ví dụ cụ thể về từng thành viên và hoạt động chung nếu có (thời gian, tần suất, nơi chốn).

示例: Yes, I share some hobbies with my family, especially sports. For example, my father and I both play badminton, and my mother also enjoys exercising at the park with us on weekends.

× I enjoy watching film, listen to music and play badminton because him him help me relax.

✓ I enjoy watching films, listening to music and playing badminton because they help me relax.

The noun 'film' should be plural ('films') when referring to films in general. Parallel verb forms are required: after 'enjoy' use gerunds ('watching', 'listening', 'playing'). 'Him him' is incorrect pronoun use; replace with 'they' to refer collectively to the activities. Suggestion: keep parallel gerund forms and use correct plural noun and pronoun.

× Music like leave my mood and badminton keep me fit and I can play badminton with my friend every week.

✓ Music lifts my mood, badminton keeps me fit, and I can play badminton with my friends every week.

Use correct verb forms: 'like leave' is incorrect; use 'lifts' to show music improves mood. Subject-verb agreement: 'badminton keeps' needs third person singular -s. Plural 'friends' is more natural if playing with more than one; if singular, use 'my friend' with 'a' or 'one'. Also add commas and conjunctions to connect clauses clearly.

× Just when I was a child, I I have several hobbies like. Watching cartoon cartoon and.

✓ When I was a child, I had several hobbies, like watching cartoons.

The past tense 'had' should be used because the time frame is 'when I was a child'. Remove duplicated words and incomplete fragments. 'Cartoon' should be plural 'cartoons' for general activities. Combine into one grammatically complete sentence.

× Well I guess I have had a hobby since 2 hoots I have like drawing and singing.

✓ Well, I suppose I have had hobbies since I was two; I like drawing and singing.

The phrase '2 hoots' is unclear and likely 'two'; express age with 'since I was two'. Use 'have had' correctly for duration, and use simple present 'I like' to describe current likes. Use plural 'hobbies' if listing more than one.

× I start when I was about 5 years old because my mother give me some crayons.

✓ I started when I was about five years old because my mother gave me some crayons.

Use past tense for actions that began in the past: 'started' and 'gave' are past forms. Spell out numbers under ten as words ('five'). Ensure verb tense consistency with 'when I was'.

× Yes, umm, I have the same hobby as my family. Umm, like my family, like sports. My father plays badminton, my mother play my mother.

✓ Yes, I have some of the same hobbies as my family, especially sports. My father plays badminton, and my mother does too.

Clarify and simplify: 'the same hobby as my family' -> 'some of the same hobbies as my family' if not identical. Maintain parallel structure: 'My father plays..., and my mother does too.' Replace incorrect repetition 'my mother play my mother' with 'my mother does too'. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('plays').