爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Говорите более связно и грамотно: используйте правильные времена и избегайте пауз-заполнятели (uh, umm). Уточняйте продолжительность и добавляйте детали с помощью связок (for example, because, since). Исправьте структуру предложения: «I have been dancing for five years» вместо «I go to this hobby for five years».

示例: Yes, I do. My favourite hobby is dancing, especially hip hop and popping. I have been dancing for five years, and I enjoy it because it helps me stay fit and express myself.

建议: Используйте правильную форму прошедшего времени и избегайте повторов и заполнителей. Постройте ответ ясно: тема + уточнение + причина или пример. Например: «I used to enjoy drawing; I drew pictures of...».

示例: Yes, I did. I used to enjoy drawing when I was a child. I often drew animals and cartoons, and it was fun because it allowed me to be creative.

建议: Сформулируйте более естественно и развернуто: начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте конкретные причины и примеры. Уберите слова-паразиты и используйте подходящие словосочетания (feel the rhythm, listen to music).

示例: Yes, I do. I have been dancing since childhood. I enjoy it because I love feeling the rhythm and listening to music, and dancing helps me relax and meet friends.

建议: Дайте более полную и связную информацию: уточните, что именно вы делаете вместе и добавьте причину или пример. Избегайте коротких повторяющихся фраз и слов-паразитов.

示例: Yes, I do. My sister and I both dance, and we often practice together at home. We enjoy learning new routines and sometimes perform at local events.

× I uh, go to this hobby for five years and I like it.

✓ I have been doing this hobby for five years and I like it.

The speaker uses present simple 'go' to describe an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Use present perfect continuous or present perfect to show duration: 'have been doing' (or 'have done') for an activity lasting five years. Also 'go to this hobby' is unnatural; 'doing this hobby' or 'practising it' is better.

× I go to, uh, I go to drawing.

✓ I used to draw / I used to do drawing.

The student answers a past question about childhood hobbies but uses present simple 'go to'. Use 'used to' for past habitual actions or simply 'I drew' or 'I used to draw' to indicate a childhood habit.

× I uh, was like though, uh, some umm, pictures, uh, in childhood and this was very cool.

✓ I used to draw pictures when I was a child and it was very cool.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Was like though some pictures' is not correct English. Use 'used to draw pictures' to express a past habit and 'when I was a child' or 'in childhood' for time. Also 'this was very cool' becomes 'it was very cool' to refer to drawing.

× I like dancing because it's uh, my favorite hobby.

✓ I like dancing because it's my favorite hobby.

This sentence is mostly correct; only filler words removed. The tense fits the present state: present simple 'like' and 'it's' describe current preferences. No tense change needed.

× I like umm, uh, feel rhythms and uh, hear song.

✓ I like to feel the rhythm and hear songs.

After 'like' both the gerund and infinitive are possible; 'to feel' and 'to hear' are natural here. Also 'rhythms' should be singular 'the rhythm' or 'rhythm' and 'song' should be plural 'songs' or 'a song'. Use articles appropriately.

× My sister and I, uh, go to dancing and uh, we also like it.

✓ My sister and I dance together and we also like it.

Present simple 'go to dancing' is awkward; use 'dance' or 'take dance lessons' for habitual action. 'Go to dancing' is unidiomatic. Present simple 'dance' correctly shows repeated/habitual action.