爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更自然並直接回應問題，同時避免語法和數量錯誤。可以用一到兩句擴展原因或頻率，用連接詞使語句流暢。例如指出你為何喜歡籃球或你多久看一次。

示例: Yes, I enjoy watching basketball in my free time because I love the fast pace and teamwork. I usually watch games on weekends with friends or online highlights during the week.

建议: 回答不夠清晰並有語意及語法錯誤（例如時態、用詞不當與不相關的表述）。應直接說明童年時的愛好，使用正確時態並給出具體細節，避免無關或奇怪的片語。

示例: Yes. When I was a child I learned to swim and practiced regularly at the local pool. I enjoyed swimming because it kept me active and I had good coaches who made training fun.

建议: 結構基本正確但有語法小錯誤（時態和動詞形式），可以用更自然的連接詞擴展，例如說明持續原因或頻率。保持句子不超過五句。

示例: Yes, swimming is a hobby I've had since childhood. I learned when I was in elementary school and I still go swimming every weekend because it helps me relax and stay fit.

建议: 回答重複且有語法錯誤（動詞形式、標點和連貫性）。建議用一至兩句說明與家庭共同參與的頻率或感受，使用連接詞讓句子更流暢。

示例: Yes, I do. I often go swimming with my dad on weekends, and swimming together has become our regular weekend routine which I really enjoy.

× I enjoy watching basketball game in my free time.

✓ I enjoy watching basketball games in my free time.

句子中“basketball game”应为复数“basketball games”，因为“watching ... in my free time”表示经常性的活动，通常用可数名词复数形式表示多次或一般性情况。建议习惯性活动使用复数或泛指（games / basketball）。

× Like I said, I enjoy watching basketball games, but I also learn swimming when I was a child because women make me feel relaxed and it's a great sport for the kids. It's growing.

✓ Like I said, I enjoy watching basketball games, but I also learned to swim when I was a child because swimming made me feel relaxed and it's a great sport for kids.

句中涉及过去发生的动作，应使用过去时“learned”。动词搭配上“learn to swim”或“learned swimming”，这里用“learned to swim”更自然；“women make me feel relaxed”语义不清，原意应为“游泳让我放松”，故改为“swimming made me feel relaxed”。“for the kids”中的定冠词不必要，改为“for kids”。最后句“It’s growing.”与上下文不符，已移除。总体保持时态一致并改正动词形式。

× I would say swimming because I learn swimming when I was in elementary school and even right now I keep swimming every weekend.

✓ I would say swimming because I learned to swim when I was in elementary school and even now I still swim every weekend.

描述过去学会的动作应使用过去时“learned”。表示现在仍然保持的习惯用现在时“still swim”。“keep swimming every weekend”非地道，改为“still swim every weekend”更自然。

× I would say swimming because I learn swimming when I was in elementary school and even right now I keep swimming every weekend.

✓ I would say swimming because I learned to swim when I was in elementary school and even now I still swim every weekend.

句中重复使用“swimming”和“不当代词结构”使表达笨拙。将“learn swimming”改为“learned to swim”，并用“still”强调持续性，使代词与动词搭配更自然。

× Yes I do, I often swimming with my dad on the weekend. Swimming together with my dad is my weekend routine.

✓ Yes I do. I often swim with my dad at the weekend. Swimming with my dad is my weekend routine.

“I often swimming”缺少动词形式，应为动词原形“swim”。“on the weekend”可接受，但英式英语常用“at the weekend”；两者任选，此处使用“at the weekend”更地道。第二句中“Swimming together with my dad”可简化为“Swimming with my dad”。