聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, then give one clear reason and a specific example. The phrase “whenever I have to share it's something” is unclear, and “with my friends” is repeated. Use a linking word such as “because” or “for example” to connect your ideas naturally.

示例: Yes, I do. Chatting with my friends helps me relax, and I can easily share news or talk through a problem with them. For example, I often message a close friend after a busy day.

建议: Name the topics you usually discuss instead of describing when you chat. Avoid fillers such as “uh,” and correct the unclear phrases “I have place time” and “when we will be meet.” Add one specific example to develop your answer.

示例: We usually talk about our daily lives, work, and plans for the weekend. I also share interesting things that have happened to me. For example, we might discuss where to meet for dinner.

建议: State your preference clearly, even if you enjoy both options, and explain when each one suits you. Replace “it prefer on the topic” with a clear explanation, and use accurate expressions such as “in a group” and “one-to-one conversation.”

示例: I enjoy both, but I prefer chatting one-to-one when I want to talk about something personal. On the other hand, a group chat is more useful for making plans because everyone can share their ideas at once.

建议: Give a direct comparison and explain what you mean by “more realistic” or “stick together.” The final clause is grammatically unclear, so contrast face-to-face communication with social media using a linking phrase such as “whereas.”

示例: I prefer communicating face-to-face because conversations feel more personal and relaxed. I can read the other person’s expressions, whereas messages on social media can sometimes be misunderstood.

建议: Your answer addresses the question, but correct “It's depend” to “It depends” and avoid repeating “topic.” Explain briefly what kinds of issues might lead to a disagreement, while making clear that you do not argue over everything.

示例: It depends on the subject. We sometimes disagree about debatable issues, such as films or current events, but we usually discuss them calmly and respect each other’s opinions.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because whenever I have to share it's something with my friends.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because whenever I have something to share with my friends, it's always helpful to me.

The phrase 'I have to share it's something' has an incorrect word order. Use 'I have something to share' to express that you have something you want to share.

× Whenever I use chatting, I share my friends, my experiences.

✓ Whenever I chat, I share my experiences with my friends.

'Use' is not followed by 'chatting' in this meaning. Use the base verb 'chat' to describe the activity. The corrected sentence also makes clear that experiences, rather than friends, are what you share.

× I share my friends, my experiences.

✓ I share my experiences with my friends.

When naming the people who receive something, use 'with' after 'share': 'share something with someone.'

× Sometimes I chat like, when we will be meet.

✓ Sometimes I chat about when we will meet.

Use 'about' to introduce the subject of a conversation. 'Chat like' does not correctly introduce the topic here.

× When we will be meet.

✓ When we will meet.

The future form is 'will meet.' Do not add 'be' before the base verb 'meet'; 'will be meet' is not a correct verb form.

× I enjoy both chatting with only one friend and group chatting too.

✓ I enjoy chatting both with one friend and in a group.

The two items connected by 'both ... and' should have parallel grammatical forms. The corrected version uses matching phrases to describe the two ways of chatting.

× The group chat is always helpful to me and it prefer on the topic.

✓ The group chat is always helpful to me, and it depends on the topic.

The subject 'it' is third-person singular, so a present-tense verb must take the appropriate form. In this context, 'depends' expresses that the usefulness varies according to the topic.

× It also feels more relaxed and chat with social media.

✓ It also feels more relaxed to chat on social media.

Use 'on social media' to describe the platform where communication takes place. The infinitive phrase 'to chat on social media' also correctly completes 'feels more relaxed.'

× It's depend on the on topic.

✓ It depends on the topic.

With the third-person singular subject 'it,' use 'depends,' not 'depend.' The correction also removes the repeated preposition.

× On which topic we are talking.

✓ The topic we are talking about.

The verb phrase is 'talk about a topic.' In this sentence structure, put 'about' at the end of the relative clause: 'the topic we are talking about.'