聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên và mạch lạc: tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ, phát triển câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ, sửa lỗi như “miss it” (sai ngữ cảnh) và “my with them” (thừa từ), dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và giới thiệu một ví dụ ngắn về hoạt động khi trò chuyện.

示例: Yes, I do. I often call or meet my friends when I have free time because chatting with them helps me unwind. For example, last weekend we sat at a café for an hour and shared stories about our week, which made me feel much more relaxed.

建议: Làm rõ và cụ thể hơn: tránh từ mơ hồ như “meetings” (không rõ nghĩa) và kết nối các ý bằng liên từ để mạch lạc. Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ đội yêu thích hoặc chủ đề phụ) để làm phong phú nội dung.

示例: Mostly we chat about sports, especially during big tournaments like the World Cup. For instance, we discuss our favourite teams’ tactics and key players after a match, and sometimes we predict the next game’s outcome.

建议: Giữ câu ngắn gọn và mạch lạc: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để phân biệt hai trường hợp và thêm một ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa sự khác biệt giữa chia sẻ cá nhân và trò chuyện nhóm.

示例: It depends on the topic. For personal matters I prefer one-on-one chats because I feel more comfortable sharing private details; for example, I would talk to my close friend about relationship problems. However, for general topics like movies or plans, I enjoy group conversations because they are livelier.

建议: Sửa lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp, tăng tính chính xác: thay các cụm sai như “applies method” bằng “apps” và chỉnh cấu trúc câu. Thêm liên từ để giải thích rõ lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể về tình huống khi bạn chọn phương thức nào.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to read non-verbal cues and get immediate feedback. For example, when discussing something important like job feedback, I always choose an in-person meeting rather than messaging.

建议: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên và rõ ràng: tránh câu mơ hồ như “You should be serious,” và sửa cấu trúc ngữ pháp (“prefer talk” → “prefer to talk”). Nên mở rộng bằng cách nêu một ví dụ ngắn về cách bạn giải quyết xung đột để chứng tỏ kĩ năng giao tiếp.

示例: I rarely argue with my friends; when conflicts happen, I prefer to talk calmly and try to resolve the issue together. For example, when a friend misunderstood my comment, we sat down and discussed our points of view until we reached an agreement.

× I enjoy chatting with my with them because it helps me unwind and stay upbeat on what is happening in their lives.

✓ I enjoy chatting with them because it helps me unwind and stay upbeat about what is happening in their lives.

Sentence had an extra word 'with' (word choice) and used 'on' incorrectly before 'what is happening'; after 'upbeat' the correct preposition is 'about'. Also 'enjoy chatting with them' correctly uses the verb + -ing form. Suggestion: remove the extra 'with' and use 'about' after 'upbeat' to form a natural collocation.

× We mostly chat about sports.

✓ We mostly chat about sports.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. It uses the preposition 'about' correctly. No further action required.

× When a big tournament is on, like the World Cup, we follow the match and discuss the team performance and the results.

✓ When a big tournament is on, like the World Cup, we follow the matches and discuss the teams' performances and the results.

Original uses singular 'match' and 'team performance' while context (a tournament) involves multiple matches and possibly multiple teams. This is a pluralization and possessive/article issue. Suggestion: use plural 'matches' and plural possessive 'teams'' and plural 'performances' to agree in number with 'tournament'.

× Well I prefer communicating face to face to texting through social media app because in person conversation let me read non verbal cues and get immediate feedback.

✓ Well, I prefer communicating face to face rather than texting through social media apps because in-person conversation lets me read non-verbal cues and get immediate feedback.

Errors: missing comma after 'Well'; comparison structure needs 'rather than' not 'to' when preferring one action over another; 'social media app' should be plural 'apps' or 'a social media app'; 'in person' should be hyphenated as 'in-person' when used as adjective; subject-verb agreement: 'conversation' (singular) requires 'lets' not 'let'; 'non verbal' should be hyphenated 'non-verbal'. Suggestion: use 'rather than', pluralize 'apps' or specify article, hyphenate compound adjectives, and match verb to subject.

× I do use applies method or messenger when I can meet someone but I find face to face meeting clear and more comfortable.

✓ I do use apps or Messenger when I cannot meet someone, but I find face-to-face meetings clearer and more comfortable.

Errors: 'applies method' is incorrect — likely meant 'apps' or 'a messaging app'; 'Messenger' (capitalized) is a proper noun; missing negative 'cannot' or 'can't' to signal alternatives; 'face to face meeting' should be plural 'meetings' and hyphenated 'face-to-face'; comparative 'clear' should be 'clearer' for comparison. Suggestion: replace with 'apps or Messenger', use 'cannot' if contrasting, hyphenate 'face-to-face', pluralize and use comparative 'clearer'.

× I enjoy chatting with my with them because it helps me unwind and stay upbeat on what is happening in their lives.

✓ I enjoy chatting with them because it helps me unwind and stay upbeat about what is happening in their lives.

Also note subject 'it' correctly takes 'helps' (third-person singular) — original was correct in verb form but had other errors already corrected. Keep 'helps' for third-person singular. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with singular subjects (it helps).

× Well, I rarely argue with my friends on some occasions either.

✓ Well, I rarely argue with my friends; on the rare occasions when I do, I try to stay calm.

Original is awkward and contradictory: 'rarely' and 'on some occasions' clash; 'either' is incorrect in this positive statement. Suggestion: rephrase to clarify frequency and behavior, remove 'either', and use a clear clause for rare occasions.

× I prefer talk with them calmly and try to discuss and resolve the problem together.

✓ I prefer to talk with them calmly and try to discuss and resolve the problem together.

After 'prefer' when followed by another verb, use the to-infinitive 'to talk' (or use gerund 'talking'); original omitted 'to'. Suggestion: use 'prefer to talk' or 'prefer talking' to be grammatically correct.