聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar and sentence structure; avoid repetition and be concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms (e.g., "chatting" -> "chat").

示例: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with my friends because it lets us share ideas and support each other. For example, when I discuss problems with close friends, I often feel less stressed and get useful advice.

建议: Give a clearer topic sentence and specific examples. Use linking words to explain why those topics matter. Avoid unclear phrases like "after saving."

示例: I usually talk with friends about our daily activities and plans. For instance, we discuss work, hobbies and weekend plans, which helps us understand each other better and strengthens our friendship.

建议: Make the preference clear in one sentence, then give a concise reason with a specific example. Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases (e.g., "rejoice me").

示例: I prefer chatting one-on-one with a close friend because I can speak more openly. For example, when I have personal worries, I only feel comfortable discussing them privately with my closest friend.

建议: Correct word order and vocabulary, and finish the contrast clearly. Use linking words like "however" or "but" and give a brief reason for each option.

示例: It depends. If I'm talking to a close friend, I prefer face-to-face because it's more personal and clear. However, with acquaintances or strangers I usually use social media for convenience and safety.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence about frequency, then explain typical causes with specific examples. Fix grammar and awkward phrases (e.g., "we are you" and "misunderstand").

示例: Yes, occasionally. We sometimes argue when our opinions differ, for example over plans or beliefs, but we usually resolve misunderstandings quickly by talking it through.

× Yes, I really like to chatting with my friends because we can share our thoughts to feel good and I really like them.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with my friends because we can share our thoughts to feel good and I really like them.

Use of 'like' should be followed by the gerund (verb + -ing) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. 'to chatting' is incorrect; use 'chatting'. Suggestion: Use 'like' + verb-ing for hobbies or habitual enjoyment (I like swimming, I like reading).

× I really like to share my opinion with others, it helps to improve our communication.

✓ I really like to share my opinion with others; it helps improve our communication.

The phrase 'helps to improve' is acceptable, but 'helps improve' is more natural here. Also the sentence is a comma splice; replace comma with semicolon or make two sentences. Suggestion: Use a semicolon or period to join related independent clauses and prefer 'helps improve' for concise style.

× I usually chat with my friends about our daily activities so that we can know each other even easily and it makes our bond even stronger and after saving.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our daily activities so that we can get to know each other more easily, and it makes our bond stronger.

'Know each other even easily' is awkward; use 'get to know each other more easily.' Remove 'after saving' which is unrelated and unclear. Use 'more easily' rather than 'even easily.' Use comma before coordinating conjunction joining clauses.

× Honestly speaking, I really enjoy chatting with one friend who is more close to me because I can talk with her without thinking twice.

✓ Honestly, I really enjoy chatting with one friend who is closer to me because I can talk with her without thinking twice.

Use comparative adjective 'closer' not 'more close.' 'Honestly speaking' is acceptable but 'Honestly' is more natural. Suggestion: Use correct comparative form for short adjectives (close -> closer).

× Because you will never rejoice me and she will.

✓ Because she will never criticize me, but I will criticize her.

Original sentence is unclear and uses 'rejoice' incorrectly and mismatched pronouns. 'Rejoice me' is ungrammatical; likely intended meaning is about criticizing or teasing. Ensure pronoun subjects and objects match and choose correct verb. Suggestion: Use clear subject-verb-object structure (she will never..., I will...).

× It depends on who am I talking with because if I'm talking with my closure one then I prefer to talk face to face but if I'm talking with like a stranger or unknown person then I prefer to talk.

✓ It depends on who I am talking with: if I'm talking with a close friend then I prefer to talk face to face, but if I'm talking with a stranger or someone I don't know, I prefer to text or message.

Word order 'who am I talking with' is incorrect in a declarative clause; use 'who I am talking with.' 'Closure one' is incorrect; use 'close friend.' 'Like a stranger' and 'unknown person' are awkward; 'a stranger or someone I don't know' is natural. Also clarify the medium preference (text or message) instead of repeating 'prefer to talk.' Suggestion: Use correct clause word order and appropriate nouns.

× Yes, I argue with friends, not every day, but I often argue with my friends when our thought does not match or we don't agree with each other opinion.

✓ Yes, I argue with friends, not every day, but I often argue with my friends when our thoughts do not match or we don't agree with each other's opinions.

Use plural 'thoughts' to match 'our' and possessive 'each other's opinions' is required. 'Does not' should be 'do not' to agree with plural subject 'thoughts.' Suggestion: Check subject-verb agreement and possessive forms.

× Not daily, but sometime we are you because of misunderstand.

✓ Not daily, but sometimes we argue because of misunderstandings.

Use adverb 'sometimes' (not 'sometime'). 'We are you' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'we argue.' 'Misunderstand' should be noun 'misunderstandings.' Suggestion: Use correct adverb forms and plural nouns for general situations.