聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and clear: start with a short topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid hesitations and unclear pronoun reference. Use correct grammar for questions embedded in a statement (e.g. “whether they want…”). Keep it under 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially with those I trust. I prefer talking to people who listen carefully because I often need to share my problems. For example, I usually call my closest friend when I need advice, and she always helps me feel better.

建议: Begin with a clear topic sentence and add specific examples using linking words (first, then, for example). Fix grammar (e.g. “what happened” not “what was happen”) and avoid filler words. Keep it concise and coherent.

示例: We usually talk about our daily routines. For example, we discuss what happened during the day, where we went, and what we ate. These simple chats are fun because they help us stay connected.

建议: Answer directly and correct collocations and grammar (“prefer chatting one-on-one” not “prefer with one to groove up people”). Use linking words to explain reasons and give a brief example. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

示例: I prefer chatting one-on-one rather than in a group. Talking to one person makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable, so I can share my thoughts and problems more openly. For instance, I usually talk to a close friend when I need honest advice.

建议: Give a clear preference or say you have no strong preference, then explain with specific reasons and linkers (because, although). Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (“overside”). Keep sentences simple and grammatical.

示例: It depends on my mood, but I generally prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and clear. However, I use social media when meeting in person isn’t possible, for example when friends live far away.

建议: Answer directly and give a concise reason or a brief example. Correct grammar (use present perfect or simple past appropriately) and explain feelings clearly (e.g. “I avoid arguments because I don’t like conflict”). Avoid vague statements like “I have no idea why.”

示例: No, I rarely argue with friends because I dislike conflict and try to resolve problems calmly. For example, if we disagree, I usually suggest talking it through or apologizing so we can move on.

× MMM yes I definitely like chatting with friends, but especially with the person who I confront and who I love to chat because I have no idea that they want to hear my problem or does they love to chat with me?

✓ MMM yes, I definitely like chatting with friends, especially with the person I confide in and love to chat with, because I have no idea whether they want to hear my problems or whether they enjoy chatting with me.

Pronoun and clause errors: 'who I confront' is incorrect; use 'who I confide in' or 'I confide in'. The relative clause 'who I love to chat' should be 'love to chat with'. 'They' is plural but refers to a singular person; use 'whether they' is acceptable for gender-neutral singular, but the sentence needed 'whether' instead of 'does'. Also replace 'my problem' with plural 'my problems'. Suggestion: use clear relative clauses and 'whether' for indirect yes/no questions.

× So daily we chat about like our daily routine, So what was happen in the whole day and what did we eat and where did we go? Something like that. It's so simple but I have a lot of fun.

✓ So daily we chat about our daily routine, about what happened during the day, what we ate and where we went. It's simple, but I have a lot of fun.

Tense and word form errors: 'what was happen' is incorrect; use past tense 'what happened'. Questions in a list should be statements when summarizing: 'what we ate' and 'where we went' use past tense. Remove redundant 'like' and fix capitalization. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense when recounting events that already occurred.

× Umm for me, I personally prefer with one to groove up people because to chatting with one person make me feel like more relaxed and calm down and it's really freed me to share all of my thoughts and all of my problem with theirs.

✓ Umm for me, I personally prefer one-to-one conversations rather than groups, because chatting with one person makes me feel more relaxed and calm, and it really frees me to share all of my thoughts and problems with them.

Preposition and agreement errors: 'prefer with one to groove up people' is incorrect; use 'prefer one-to-one conversations rather than groups'. 'To chatting' should be 'chatting' or 'to chat'; choose 'chatting' as gerund. Subject-verb agreement: 'make me' should be 'makes me'. 'It's really freed me' should be 'it really frees me'. Pronoun 'theirs' incorrectly refers back to 'one person'; use 'them' or 'that person'. Suggestion: use clear comparative structure and ensure verb agrees with singular subject.

× I'm not sure about that but you but it really depends on my mood when it's come to to chat face to face. I will do an overside of face to face. If I have to chat with social media, I will do that as well because it doesn't matter face to face.

✓ I'm not sure, it really depends on my mood when it comes to chatting face to face. I usually prefer face-to-face conversations, but if I have to chat via social media, I'll do that as well because it doesn't matter to me.

Tense and word choice errors: use present simple 'it depends' and correct phrase 'when it comes to'. 'to chat' should be 'chatting'. 'I will do an overside of face to face' is unclear; replace with 'I usually prefer face-to-face conversations'. 'If I have to chat with social media' should be 'via social media'. Add 'to me' after 'doesn't matter' for clarity. Suggestion: use standard phrases and consistent present tense for habits.

× No, I have never done that because I have no idea why I didn't have that kind of experience. But maybe I am kind person. I'll get hurt.

✓ No, I have never had that experience because I don't know why I haven't. Maybe I am a kind person; I would get hurt.

Tense and modal errors: 'I have never done that' is awkward for 'argued with friends'; better 'I have never had that experience'. 'I have no idea why I didn't have that kind of experience' mixes past and present; use present perfect 'I don't know why I haven't'. 'I am kind person' needs an article: 'a kind person'. 'I'll get hurt' is better as conditional 'I would get hurt' to indicate hypothetical outcome. Suggestion: use present perfect for life experiences and correct article use.