聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Reduce fillers and repetitive words, give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Improve grammar (use gerunds/infinitives correctly) and pronouns. Speak naturally and concisely up to 3–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends online because it lets me share my feelings and daily news quickly. For example, I often send memes or short voice messages to cheer my friends up. Overall, social media helps me stay connected without meeting in person.

建议: Structure your response: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific types of topics using linking words (for example, because / also). Improve verb tenses and word choice (gossip, study issues, ask for help). Avoid vague phrases.

示例: I usually chat about two main things: gossip and study-related problems. For instance, if I struggle with a homework question, I message a classmate to ask for help, and I also share photos and comments on Instagram to keep in touch.

建议: Give a clear preference in the first sentence and then provide specific reasons with linking words (because / so). Correct grammar (prefer chatting with a group vs. one friend) and reduce repetition. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer chatting one-on-one with my best friend because group chats often involve arguments or people who are in a bad mood. So I feel more comfortable and can speak honestly in private conversations.

建议: State your preference clearly, then explain reasons with contrasting linking words (because / however). Fix grammar: prefer communicating via social media; feel uncomfortable face-to-face. Be specific about situations where you feel confident to balance the answer.

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel less anxious and can take time to think before I write. However, I feel confident speaking in front of classmates during class presentations, so I can do face-to-face communication in formal settings.

建议: Begin with a direct answer, then give a clear conditional explanation with linking words (but / when / if). Use correct verb forms and clearer nouns (rude messages, misunderstandings). Provide a short example of a typical disagreement.

示例: Generally I don't argue with my friends, but if someone sends rude or thoughtless messages when I'm in a bad mood, I might respond and we argue briefly. For example, we once disagreed about plans for a weekend trip and had a short argument before apologizing.

× Yes, of course, I like chatting with friends because on social media, uh, without meeting him or her, I usually send the feelings uh, about uh, uh, anymore.

✓ Yes, of course. I like chatting with friends because on social media, without meeting them, I usually share my feelings.

The student used 'him or her' instead of the plural pronoun 'them' to refer to friends (pronoun choice). Also 'send the feelings' is unnatural; use 'share my feelings' and omit filler words. Use period to separate clauses for clarity.

× So that's why I liking chatting and also spend and send the memes on social media.

✓ So that's why I like chatting and also send memes on social media.

The student used 'liking' (present participle) incorrectly after 'that's why'; the simple present 'like' is required. 'Spend and send the memes' is incorrect verb choice; use 'send memes'.

× I usually, uh, chat at mostly of the gossips and about the study topics.

✓ I usually chat mostly about gossip and study topics.

The preposition 'at' and phrase 'mostly of the gossips' are incorrect. Use 'mostly about' and uncountable 'gossip' or 'gossips' with context. Simplify to 'about gossip and study topics.'

× Uh, when I was struggling any kind of the topic, uh, I usually spend sent him or her to solve it.

✓ When I struggle with a topic, I usually send it to a friend to help solve it.

Mixed tenses: 'was struggling' (past continuous) conflicts with habitual 'usually'. Use present simple 'struggle' for habitual actions. 'Spend sent him or her' is ungrammatical; intended 'send it to a friend'.

× And this is the main reason I usually chat.

✓ This is the main reason I usually chat.

Remove unnecessary 'And' at sentence start for formality; pronoun use here is acceptable otherwise.

× But on the other hand, I send the quality times on social media such as Instagram to send her.

✓ On the other hand, I post quality moments on social media, such as Instagram, to share with friends.

'Send the quality times' is incorrect collocation; use 'post quality moments'. 'to send her' is wrong pronoun and structure; use 'share with friends'.

× I don't prefer to chatting group of the pupils because and group of the some pupils are argue arguments and they are some are not mooding mood them to do the chats.

✓ I don't prefer chatting in groups of students because some students argue and are not in the mood to chat.

Wrong quantifiers and articles: 'group of the pupils' should be 'groups of students'. 'are argue arguments' wrong verb/noun forms; use 'argue'. 'not mooding mood them' should be 'not in the mood'.

× So I usually prefer the alone with I only my best friends comfortably do the chats with him or her.

✓ So I usually prefer being alone or chatting comfortably only with my best friends.

Pronoun and word order errors: 'the alone with I only my best friends' is ungrammatical. Use gerund 'being alone' or 'alone' and place 'only with my best friends' at end. Replace 'him or her' with 'my best friends'.

× Usually I prefer to communication with the social media, because on my face, on face to face, I feel very uncomfortable and I cannot communicate easily.

✓ Usually I prefer to communicate via social media because in face-to-face situations I feel very uncomfortable and cannot communicate easily.

Incorrect noun/verb forms: 'prefer to communication' should be 'prefer to communicate' or 'prefer communicating'. Use 'via social media' not 'with the social media'. 'on my face, on face to face' should be 'in face-to-face situations'.

× But in local speech, speech and another, I feel very confident to speak the in the group of the people in the schools and another.

✓ But in local speeches and other situations, I feel confident speaking in groups at school.

Prepositions and noun forms are incorrect: 'in local speech, speech and another' unclear; use 'in local speeches and other situations'. 'speak the in the group of the people' should be 'speaking in groups'.

× No, I can't argue with my friends, but if I had bad mood at that time, she uh, send the stupid chats and uh, time waste me.

✓ No, I don't usually argue with my friends, but if I'm in a bad mood sometimes, they send annoying messages and it wastes my time.

'Can't' implies inability; better 'don't usually' for preference. Tense mismatch: 'if I had' conditional wrong; use 'if I'm in a bad mood'. Pronouns inconsistent: 'she' vs 'they'. 'send the stupid chats' -> 'send annoying messages'.

× So that's, that's time. I usually argue with my friends on the, uh, specific things.

✓ So in those times, I sometimes argue with my friends about specific things.

Awkward phrase 'that's, that's time' corrected to 'in those times'. Use 'about specific things' not 'on the specific things'. Use 'sometimes' to indicate occasional occurrence.