聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer clear, grammatical and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and replace unclear phrases (e.g., “dress with friends”) with accurate verbs like “chat” or “message.” Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I do. I often chat with my friends online because they live in different cities and we rarely meet in person. For example, we use Facebook and messaging apps to catch up about work and family, which helps us stay close despite the distance.

建议: Answer directly and organize ideas: state main topics you discuss, then give a specific example. Use linking words like “usually,” “for example,” and correct tense and pronouns. Avoid vague phrases like “save everything.”

示例: I usually chat about daily events and personal matters. For example, I tell my friends about things that happened during the day, and sometimes I ask for their opinions when I face a problem.

建议: Give a clear preference first, then support it with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words like “because” or “so.” Fix word choice and remove unclear phrases like “symbolism” or “source problem.”

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it feels more personal and private. For instance, I can discuss sensitive issues or get focused advice without interruptions.

建议: State your preference clearly, then give specific reasons and examples. Use correct vocabulary: say “read emotions,” “body language,” and “tone of voice.” Keep sentences fluent and avoid filler words like “uh.”

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to read emotions better. For example, seeing someone’s facial expressions and hearing their tone of voice helps me understand their feelings more accurately than messages do.

建议: Answer briefly then give a concise, clear example. Use past tense correctly and simplify the description of the disagreement. Avoid unclear phrases like “waves to solve the reform” and use plain language such as “ways to solve the problem.”

示例: Yes, I have argued with friends. Once my friend and I disagreed about how to divide our homework tasks; we had different ideas about the best approach, so we took some time to cool off and later discussed a compromise.

× I really like chatting with friends because I am my best friends live in two cities and we don't have more time to meet outside as a resource I often dress with friends on Facebook and.

✓ I really like chatting with friends because my best friends live in two cities and we don't have much time to meet in person, so I often chat with friends on Facebook.

Multiple grammar issues: 'I am my best friends live' is a sentence structure and subject placement error (26: sentence structure errors) and incorrect use of pronouns (12) — 'my best friends' should directly follow 'because'. 'we don't have more time' uses incorrect quantifier and wording (14) — use 'much time' or 'enough time'. 'meet outside' is unnatural preposition use (11) — use 'meet in person'. 'as a resource I often dress with friends' contains wrong verb and word choice (26 and 13) — 'dress' is incorrect, should be 'chat'. Suggestion: reorder clause to place subject before verb, use appropriate quantifiers and verbs, and choose correct prepositions.

× I often dress with friends on Facebook and.

✓ I often chat with friends on Facebook.

Subject-verb agreement (27) is not the primary issue; instead the verb choice is incorrect. However to follow the allowed list, this is treated as a sentence structure error (26) and verb choice: 'dress' is wrong; use 'chat'. Keep simple present for habitual action.

× Well, I usually. Save everything in my life with friends.

✓ Well, I usually share everything in my life with my friends.

Sentence structure error (26): 'I usually. Save' splits the sentence incorrectly and uses the wrong verb 'save'. Also missing possessive 'my friends' (12). Use 'share' for talking about personal matters and keep continuous sentence.

× I often tell her about what happened occurred in one day and sometime I my friend gave another person opinion.

✓ I often tell them about what happened during the day, and sometimes my friend gives another opinion.

Problems include tense and verb form: 'happened occurred' duplicates past tense verbs (5) and incorrect past participle usage (9). Pronoun errors (12): 'her' should match 'friends' (plural) so use 'them'. Word order and agreement: 'sometime I my friend gave another person opinion' is ungrammatical (26) and uses wrong tense 'gave'—use present 'gives' for habitual actions (6/2). Suggestion: use one past verb 'happened' or phrase 'during the day', correct pronouns and keep present simple for habitual sharing.

× Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

✓ Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

No grammar correction needed. Sentence is grammatically correct and uses appropriate verbs and pronouns. (Included for completeness.)

× I refer to chat with only one friend a symbolism go to the fact that I think it's a very convenient and personal personally and I can communicate a problem and source problem.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think it's more convenient and more personal, and I can discuss a problem in depth.

Multiple sentence structure errors (26): 'I refer to chat' should be 'I prefer to chat'; 'a symbolism go to the fact that' is meaningless and must be replaced with 'because'; 'personally' and 'personal' redundancy and wrong forms (13); 'communicate a problem and source problem' is unclear — use 'discuss a problem in depth'. Suggest using 'prefer' for preference, 'because' for reasons, correct adjective/adverb choices, and a clear verb like 'discuss'.

× Well, I refer to communicate face to face because I think it is a good way to feel, uh, it's rest, uh, emotion.

✓ Well, I prefer to communicate face to face because I think it is a good way to feel others' emotions.

Tense/verb choice and sentence structure (6 and 26): 'I refer to communicate' should be 'I prefer to communicate'; 'feel, uh, it's rest, uh, emotion' is incorrect word choice and grammar. Use 'feel others' emotions' or 'sense emotions' for clarity. Keep present simple for general preference.

× And we can know other people think wrote body language and the voice.

✓ And we can understand what other people think from their body language and voice.

Incorrect use of prepositions and word order (11): 'know other people think wrote body language and the voice' is ungrammatical. Use 'understand what other people think from their body language and voice' or 'by their body language and voice'. Replace 'wrote' with 'from' or 'by'.

× Yes, I remember once I argue with friend that's the ones we walk homework together and we had different opinions about the waves to solve the reform and after that we have wait a time.

✓ Yes, I remember once I argued with a friend when we worked on homework together; we had different opinions about ways to solve the problem, and after that we waited for a while.

Past tense issue (5): The event is in the past so verbs must be past tense: 'argue' -> 'argued', 'walk homework' is wrong and should be 'worked on homework' (verb choice and structure 26), 'waves' should be 'ways' (word choice), 'solve the reform' should be 'solve the problem' (word choice), and 'we have wait a time' incorrect tense and structure — use 'we waited for a while'. Also article errors (22) need correction: 'a friend'.