聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar (verb forms, articles), reduce hesitations, and make the response more concise with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because) correctly and avoid repeating the same idea.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and feel happy. For example, we often share recent events in our lives and discuss problems we face, so we can suggest solutions to each other.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific examples. Avoid repetition and use linking words (for example, such as, because) to organize ideas. Correct awkward phrases like "romantic story" to "relationships" and clarify reasons.

示例: We usually talk about daily life and family matters, and sometimes about our relationships. For example, I might tell friends about a recent disagreement with a partner so they can offer advice or a different perspective.

建议: Start with a concise direct answer, correct grammar and word choice (e.g. "high-energy person"), avoid repetitions, and use a linking phrase to add one reason or example. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer chatting in a group because I'm a high-energy person and enjoy lively conversations. When I'm alone with one friend I sometimes feel bored, whereas a group keeps the discussion interesting.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then provide a specific reason with correct vocabulary (e.g. "body language, facial expressions") and avoid long hesitations. End the sentence cleanly.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read body language and facial expressions. For instance, if I say something inappropriate, I can immediately see if they are upset and clarify my meaning.

建议: Answer directly and use conditional or habitual structures correctly (e.g. "I sometimes argue" rather than "every time"). Provide a clear reason and an example, avoid fragmented endings and hesitations.

示例: I sometimes argue with friends when I'm angry or unhappy about something because I want to hear their opinions. For example, if I'm unsure how to handle a problem, a friend might disagree with me and suggest another solution, which can lead to a discussion.

× I'd like to chatting with my friend because when I stay with them, I feel enjoy and relax because, uh, in for example, we will share our story about recently happened in our life or what problem we meet and how to solve.

✓ I'd like to chat with my friends because when I stay with them, I feel happy and relaxed. For example, we share stories about recent events in our lives, problems we face, and how to solve them.

Multiple errors: 'like to chatting' mixes infinitive with -ing; correct form is 'like to chat' or 'like chatting' (Verb + -ing issue). 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match 'them' (singular/plural issue). 'feel enjoy and relax' uses verbs/adjectives incorrectly; use 'feel happy and relaxed' (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs). 'recently happened in our life' should be 'recent events in our lives' (noun form and plural). 'what problem we meet' is incorrect; use 'problems we face' (incorrect verb/preposition). Use 'we share' not 'we will share' to match present habitual tense (present tense issue). Suggestion: choose correct verb forms (infinitive vs -ing), ensure subject and pronoun number agree, use appropriate adjectives after 'feel', and prefer simple present for habitual actions.

× We usually chat about our life, our family and what's recently happened in our life and even our romantic story.

✓ We usually chat about our lives, our families, recent events in our lives, and even our romantic stories.

'our life' and 'our family' should be plural when referring to multiple people ('our lives', 'our families') (singular and plural issue). 'what's recently happened' mixes present contraction with past participle; use 'recent events' or 'what has recently happened' (present perfect/past tense issue). Suggestion: use plural nouns for collective experiences and 'recent events' or 'what has recently happened' for clarity.

× We always share our romantic story to our friends because some sometimes we want to solve some problem and we don't.

✓ We always share our romantic stories with our friends because sometimes we want help solving a problem and we don't know how.

'share ... to' is incorrect preposition; use 'share ... with' (incorrect use of prepositions). 'romantic story' should be plural if referring to multiple people (singular and plural issue). 'some sometimes' is redundant; use 'sometimes' (sentence structure error). 'we want to solve some problem and we don't' is incomplete; clarify 'we want help solving a problem and we don't know how' (sentence structure and verb tense). Suggestion: use correct prepositions, avoid redundancy, and complete ideas with proper verbs.

× Actually I'm a high energetic people so therefore I really enjoy to chat with a group of people.

✓ Actually I'm a highly energetic person, so I really enjoy chatting with a group of people.

'a high energetic people' mixes singular and plural and uses incorrect adjective form. Use 'a highly energetic person' ('people' vs 'person' singular/plural issue and incorrect use of adjective/adverb). 'enjoy to chat' should be 'enjoy chatting' (Verb + -ing form). Remove redundant 'so therefore' (sentence structure). Suggestion: use 'person' for singular, modify 'energetic' with adverb 'highly', and use gerund after 'enjoy'.

× Sometimes I if I stay with only one friends I will feel bored and if I chat with a group of people I can feel I feel not lonely and I really enjoy to chat with.

✓ Sometimes, if I stay with only one friend I feel bored, but if I chat with a group of people I don't feel lonely and I really enjoy chatting with them.

'one friends' mixes singular and plural; use 'one friend' (singular and plural issue). Redundant 'I will feel' can be simple present for habitual: 'I feel bored' (present tense issue). 'I can feel I feel not lonely' is repetitive and awkward; use 'I don't feel lonely' (incorrect adverb placement/ sentence structure). 'enjoy to chat with' should be 'enjoy chatting with them' (Verb + -ing form and incorrect pronoun omission). Suggestion: use correct singular/plural forms, prefer simple present for habits, and use gerund after 'enjoy'.

× I prefer to communicate with my friends face to face because I can see their any emotion like their body or their face and they will show their uh, feeling.

✓ I prefer to communicate with my friends face to face because I can see their emotions through their facial expressions and body language, and they will show their feelings.

'see their any emotion' uses incorrect word order; use 'see their emotions' (incorrect adverb/adjective order). 'like their body or their face' is awkward; use 'facial expressions and body language' (word choice). 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' (incorrect use of nouns). Suggestion: use correct noun phrases for nonverbal cues and pluralize where appropriate.

× So if I say something wrong and mad made them feel angry and I can notice that immediately, therefore I I.

✓ So if I say something wrong or offend them and make them angry, I can notice it immediately.

The original is ungrammatical: 'and mad made them feel angry' is incorrect structure and tense. Use 'offend them and make them angry' for clarity (incorrect conjunction and sentence structure). 'I I' is incomplete; remove repetition. Suggestion: use clear verbs like 'offend' and 'make', keep sentence concise, and avoid repetition.

× Absolutely, I did it every time because sometimes I feel I've uh, when I feel angry or unsatisfied about something, I will argue with my friend because they can give me some different opinion or share their experience how to solve the this problem.

✓ Absolutely, I do it all the time. When I feel angry or unsatisfied about something, I argue with my friends because they can give me different opinions or share their experiences on how to solve the problem.

'I did it every time' uses past tense incorrectly for habitual action; use present 'I do it all the time' (past tense issue). 'I feel I've uh' is unclear and unnecessary. 'I will argue' is future-looking; habitual action should be present 'I argue' (future tense issue). 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match 'they' (incorrect pronoun/plural). 'different opinion' should be plural 'different opinions' and 'share their experience how to solve the this problem' needs preposition and article cleanup: 'share their experiences on how to solve the problem' (incorrect use of prepositions/articles). Suggestion: use present simple for habits, ensure pronoun-number agreement, pluralize countable nouns, and use correct prepositions.