聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words if adding extra information.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected. For example, we often talk about our day or plan shopping trips together, which helps us bond.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words (for example, 'usually', 'also', 'if'). Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Give one or two specific examples of topics.

示例: Usually we talk about our daily lives and plans for the future. For instance, we discuss what we will do the next day, our hobbies, and any problems so we can give each other advice.

建议: Give a clear, confident topic sentence and correct word choice (use 'introverted' instead of 'not intuitive'). Provide a brief reason and one supporting detail using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

示例: I prefer chatting with a small group of two or three people because I feel more comfortable and can join the conversation easily. If there are many people, I tend to get nervous and speak less.

建议: Answer directly and use clear, grammatical sentences. Explain one or two specific reasons with linking words ('because', 'so', 'for example'). Avoid informal fillers and incomplete sentences.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can show my emotions and read others' expressions. For example, in person I can use gestures and tone of voice, whereas social media can feel impersonal or misleading.

建议: Give a direct answer and then add one or two specific examples and a reason. Avoid repeating the same idea and correct minor grammar. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' to structure your reply.

示例: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes, especially with my best friend when we disagree. For example, we might argue about plans or mistakes, but usually we resolve it quickly because we trust each other.

× I do like chatting with friends.

✓ I do like chatting with friends.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatical. 'Chatting' is correctly used as a gerund after 'like'. Keep as is.

× A lot of my friends also love to shop with me and we love to, we love to.

✓ A lot of my friends also love to shop with me, and we enjoy it a lot.

The original repeats 'we love to' and is fragmented. Combine ideas into one clear clause. Use 'enjoy it a lot' to avoid repetition and form a complete sentence.

× Communicate with chatting and I met a lot of people by chatting with them.

✓ We communicate by chatting, and I have met a lot of people that way.

Original mixes verb forms and tenses awkwardly. Use 'communicate by chatting' and present perfect 'have met' to indicate experiences up to now.

× We shot about our daily life and how it's gone and what we want to do in the future, what we are thinking to do next day and what is our hobby is if we have a problem, we can discuss.

✓ We talk about our daily lives, how things have been, what we want to do in the future, what we are planning to do the next day, our hobbies, and if we have a problem, we can discuss it.

Multiple issues: 'shot' is incorrect word; use 'talk'. 'Daily life' should be plural 'daily lives'. Use present perfect 'have been' for past-to-present. Replace 'what we are thinking to do' with 'what we are planning to do'. Remove redundant 'is'. Add object 'it' after 'discuss'.

× We can discuss discusses, discuss it together.

✓ We can discuss it together.

Redundant and incorrect forms 'discusses' are used. Keep the base verb 'discuss' and include the object 'it' for clarity.

× I'm actually not intuitive person, I love to discuss with like 2-3 people maybe.

✓ I'm actually not an intuitive person; I prefer discussing with about two or three people.

Missing article 'an' before 'intuitive person'. 'Like' and 'maybe' are filler words—replace with clearer phrasing 'about two or three people'. Use 'prefer discussing' for smoother expression.

× I feel like I'm I would be nervous more if I was chatting with a lot of people.

✓ I feel like I would be more nervous if I were chatting with a lot of people.

Remove extra 'I'm'. Use conditional 'would be' with subjunctive 'were' after 'if' for hypothetical present situations. Place 'more' before 'nervous'.

× I'm not extroverted, sorry.

✓ I'm not extroverted, sorry.

This sentence is grammatical; no change needed. 'Extroverted' correctly describes a personality trait.

× Face to face because I can tell them what do I feel and show more expression 'cause I talk with my expression more than anything.

✓ Face to face, because I can tell them how I feel and show more expression, since I communicate more with my facial expressions than with words.

Incorrect question word order 'what do I feel' should be indirect 'how I feel'. Clarify 'show more expression' and specify 'facial expressions' to be natural.

× So yeah. Because in social media like you can fake anything that you said and they cannot know anything and you, you don't even.

✓ Also, because on social media you can fake things you say, so people might not know the truth, and you can't always tell who is sincere.

Avoid sentence fragments and repeated fillers. Use 'on social media' not 'in'. Change 'fake anything that you said' to 'fake things you say'. Provide a complete clause explaining consequence.

× Of course I argue with my friends a lot.

✓ Of course I argue with my friends a lot.

This sentence is grammatical; no change needed.

× With my best friend the most.

✓ I argue with my best friend the most.

Fragment missing subject and verb. Add subject 'I' and verb 'argue' to make a full sentence.

× We argue about anything.

✓ We argue about anything.

Grammatically acceptable in present simple to describe habitual action; no change needed.

× If she did something wrong, we always argue.

✓ If she does something wrong, we always argue.

Use present simple 'does' in conditional zero/first type to describe habitual behaviour. 'Did' suggests a specific past event.

× I argue with my mother.

✓ I argue with my mother.

Sentence is grammatical; no change needed.

× I love to argue a lot.

✓ I love arguing a lot.

Both forms are acceptable, but 'love arguing' is more natural and avoids repeated 'to'. Use gerund for preferences.

× I feel like it's part of my personality actually.

✓ I feel like it's actually part of my personality.

Move 'actually' to flow more naturally; otherwise sentence is acceptable.