聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时时态不一致，且句子较长且有语法错误。建议注意时态一致性，简洁表达，避免语法错误。

示例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it makes me happy and relaxed. I also learn a lot from our conversations.

建议: 回答中有重复和填充词，表达不够流畅。建议减少重复和口头语，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: I usually chat about our daily lives and worries. This helps me relieve stress and find solutions to problems.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够简洁。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致。

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am an introvert. Talking in a group makes me feel stressed, so one-on-one chats help me relax.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议使用正确时态，避免重复，清晰表达观点。

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because I can express my feelings more clearly online than face-to-face.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁表达，避免重复，注意时态一致。

示例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we disagree. For example, once we argued about whether to travel by train or car during a trip.

× chatting with my friends gave me a sense of happiness and make me relaxed

✓ chatting with my friends gives me a sense of happiness and makes me relaxed

这里描述的是现在的习惯动作，应该使用一般现在时。动词gave是过去式，应改为gives。动词make应与主语chatting保持第三人称单数一致，改为makes。

× through this way, it can relieve my pressure and help me solve the problems easily

✓ in this way, it can relieve my pressure and help me solve problems easily

短语中应使用介词in搭配this way，表示“通过这种方式”。此外，pressure前不需要冠词，problems前的the可以省略。

× I was an introvert and I when I faced when I'm faced with a group of people I will feel stressed

✓ I am an introvert and when I am faced with a group of people I feel stressed

描述现在的性格和感受，应使用一般现在时。was改为am，will feel改为feel。句子中有重复的when，需删除多余部分。

× chat with only one friend makes me relaxed

✓ chatting with only one friend makes me relaxed

主语应为动名词形式，表示“与一个朋友聊天”这一动作，故chat改为chatting。

× when I was communicating with others on social online and I, I, and I tend to express my feelings more well, I've expressed my feelings well

✓ when I communicate with others online, I tend to express my feelings better; I've expressed my feelings well

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时，was communicating改为communicate。more well用法不当，应改为better。

× sometimes I argue with my fans when I have a disagreement about something we may have argued

✓ sometimes I argue with my friends when I have a disagreement about something; we may have argued

fans（粉丝）与friends（朋友）意义不同，应根据上下文改为friends。

× when we, uh, when I once planned to travel with my friends, we have a disagreement whether we'll go and travel by train or travel by car

✓ when I once planned to travel with my friends, we had a disagreement about whether to travel by train or by car

句子中重复使用when，需删除多余部分。have改为过去时had以匹配once planned。使用whether to travel更符合表达习惯。