规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は文法的に不自然で、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「We don't have to proper uniform」は誤りで、「We have to wear a proper uniform」が正しいです。また、文が断片的で、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げると良いでしょう。

示例: When I was a student, my high school had strict rules. For example, we had to wear a proper uniform, and the skirt length had to cover the knees.

建议: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。例えば、「they have to run rules」は誤りで、「they have to follow rules」が正しいです。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使い、より明確に説明すると良いでしょう。

示例: I think it depends on the age. For example, young children around six or seven need to follow rules because if they don't, they might get into trouble.

建议: 回答が非常に不明瞭で、文法的にも誤りが多いです。現在の状況と過去の経験を分けて話し、明確な文を作ることが必要です。

示例: I am currently working at a company, so I don't have a chance to meet teachers now. However, when I was a student, I had some teachers who did their jobs very well.

× When I was a student, my high school was quite uh. Strong rules.

✓ When I was a student, my high school had quite strong rules.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'was' with 'strong rules'. The subject should be 'my high school' having 'strong rules', so 'had' is the correct verb to indicate possession of rules. Also, 'quite uh.' is unnecessary and unclear, so it is removed for clarity.

× We don't have to proper uniform, the skirt length need, we have to cover the knee.

✓ We don't have to wear a proper uniform; the skirt length needs to cover the knee.

The sentence lacks the verb 'wear' after 'have to' and misuses 'need' without a subject. 'Skirt length need' should be 'the skirt length needs to cover the knee' to correctly express the requirement. Also, 'have to' is used correctly to express obligation.

× If the children is early age, for example six or seven, they they have to run rules because if they don't know the rules they will be embarrassing.

✓ If the children are at an early age, for example six or seven, they have to follow rules because if they don't know the rules they will be embarrassed.

'Children' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'Run rules' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'follow rules'. 'Will be embarrassing' should be 'will be embarrassed' to correctly express the feeling of embarrassment.

× Now I'm walking at company so I don't have chance to meet teacher.

✓ Now I'm working at a company, so I don't have a chance to meet teachers.

'Walking at company' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'working at a company'. Also, 'have chance' needs the article 'a' to be 'have a chance'. 'Meet teacher' should be plural 'meet teachers' or 'meet a teacher' depending on context.

× So I'm not sure about a teacher but when I was a student I didn't the teacher have a who does?

✓ So I'm not sure about any teacher, but when I was a student, I didn't have a teacher who did.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. It should be restructured to 'I didn't have a teacher who did' to correctly express the idea. 'Didn't the teacher have a who does?' is incorrect word order and usage.